You expressed yourself very well here in this poem. The meaning was simple and clear for the reader. Nice even stanzas, all complimenting each other. Nice flowing rhymes too. I enjoyed reading this through and found no way of improving the item. Good work.
You managed to send shivers down my spine with this little tale. The imagery coming from the words was amazing. The loss of love was over-powering here and I couldnt help but relive my own expereinces. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I loved the story and enjoyed reading it through.
I thought your little poem here was very original by theme and meanings. Like all animals they seem to gain the love of humans just by being cute. I have a dog who is 10 and her name is Roxy, I have built a relationship with her. Kittens are beautiful little things and bring much joy to their owners. Your poem here is an accolade to them.
I thought your writing here was so lovely. Your philosophy used in this piece was fantastic. I was taken back by the nostalgic power here. The memories of a fading time. There was fun, emotional power to this writing. You really expressed yourself very, very well here. I loved reading this through and will remember this writing for a long time.
I related well to your poem here. The warm sun also cheers me up too. I liked the flowing style you used here. I liked the positivity in this poem too. The meaning was simple and easy to understand. I enjoyed reading this work through...
I like acrostics but have never written one. I liked the poetic way you wrote this out. Nice word choices and well constructed writing. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I enjoyed reading this work through. Write on...
I thought your writing here was very deep, sad and emotional. I am glad you expressed yourself in this writing. The flow was great, the meaning was special. I felt sorrow. The feeling inside was sombre. I know what it is like to lose a family member too early. I related well to your poem. A nice accolade for your family.
I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was very direct by the facts you used here. The words and lines were very powerful indeed. A nice flow, a nice rhythm too. Nicely presented on the page. I found no way to improve the writing and found no errors either. Great work and write on.
What a beautiful piece of poetry. Your philosophy was fantastic and really inspiring. Life is a game and we need to know the rules. It is poems like this that lets us know we can cheat life and beat back the sorrows of time. The depth of this item from you was very meaningful. The renewal every day. The cycle of life. Great work and keep going.....
I thought your writing here was exceptionally inviting. The prospect of both entities talking was great. The philosophy was wonderful. Your imagination was on fire when you wrote this piece, I bet. I loved the amount of mystic power in your writing here. I found your work here to be very mystically teasing. Great writing and keep going my friend....
Yes, a beautiful sweeping, lovely, romantic piece of writing. I like how you kept the erotica to a minimum, leaving it all up to your readers. The romance oozed from each word and line. The simplicity of desire and love was great here. Nice presentation, clearly posted. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep going...
I related very well to your little piece of writing here. Just recently, at the start of this winter, I mentally followed each day and counted down the days to Spring. Your poem here represented my thoughts perfectly. I liked the size of this writing, it said a lot in just a few words. Great work and keep going....
I feel you wrote this with such beauty and grace. The carefully chosen words sang loudly to me. You described a forest, moor or field very, very well. This is definately a poets poem. Your descriptions were detailed and exact to the realness of Autumn. The writing was well displayed. The three stanzas were all even in size. Great, great writing. Keep going...
I found your Haiku to be quite factful. I mean this by the last line you wrote. It is odd than storms can actually really be relaxing. The middle line was great too. The cracking of thunder held great imagery for me. I think you are a promising writer. keep going...
I thought you did a wonderful job here on this poem. The simplicity was amazing. I live in the UK and it rains more often than not. The Texas heat always reminds me of how our two countries differ by climate. The poems title was simple too. I found no way of improving your writing. I enjoyed reading this through.
In your poem here I found lots of positivity by each word and line. I am sorry but I dont know what "Full Moon Passover" means or what it is. This does not take away the overall effect of your writing. I also found the words and lines to be very noble and powerful. There was good imagery coming from the lines you wrote down. I enjoyed reading this through. keep going....
I really apprieciated the utter darkness of your Haiku here. You really must have had a scary dream to inspire this poem. The imagery coming from the whole poem was great. I am glad you expressed your deeper side here. Dreams can be very strange sometimes but all have meaning. Great writing, keep going.
I just loved this little poem from you. Your darkness was thrilling. To me, you managed to describe a hurt heart very well. You described the feelings and horror perfectly. I really liked the last two lines...
The color of the feelings
You've left in me.
I found these two lines to be very inspiring. "The color of the feelings" was an incredible line. Does love have a color? I think it does. I enjoyed reviewing your little poem. Keep going and write on.
Well done for expressing your deeper sides and for having the confidence to write deeply. I am sorry you suffer from these problems but I admire your honesty. You wrote this very clearly for the reader and you made light of a dark subject. Your flow was good, your rhymes were good too. Keep going and write on.
I thought your little piece of writing here was very sad and emotional. You wrote this in a simple way and it really hit home for me. I am sorry for your loss. My Nannas face has faded too and yes it is scary. The writing was heartfelt and real. You expressed yourself very well. A deep and emotional piece of writing. Keep going....
I loved this poem from you here. I liked the originality of this piece. The way you mentioned winter returning so quickly was great. The cycle of the seasons was well described here. This is one of the most interesting Haiku I have read here on WDC. The Haiku is a fave form of mine. You did a great job here.
I liked how you wrote this poem is stages of time. This gave the writing much power and strength. The poem was well constructed and displayed. I really liked the last stanza most. The depth of this poem was fantastic and really inspired me to write something. I enjoyed reading this through.
I couldnt help but feel for Miss Pickle. She sounds such a calamity. lol. I thought you wrote this limerick very well. Limericks always seem musical to me and your poem here is no exception. I enjoyed reading this work through. I do hope Miss Pickle sorts herself out. Good writing.
I thought your writing here was very loving and caring. The poetic feeling you gave was lovely. The love was evident here. The simplicity of each line made the writing so much more understandable. A nice title, matching the writings content. I enjoyed the freedom you gave me here. Keep going...
I related very well to what you had written here. A true story or not, the meaning was a fitting resemblance to me at times. I liked the noble stance and power this writing had. I also liked the heroic feeling you gave me. The words and lines were a real treat to me. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep going...
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