This is another great piece from you. I love your poetic power. You seem to write in a way that makes me feel great when I read it through. This piece held lovely descriptive lines and words. You painted a lovely picture here. There was good imagery coming from the last few lines. I enjoyed this work very much.
Perfectly written and perfectly executed. The story was told in a flowing way. I liked the story you told here, it held great imagery for me. The rhythm was perfect and flowed along good. I was gripped to this poem. There seemed to be a historic feeling to this piece and I loved it all. Great writing.
Ahh, the vision of the seer. I loved the imagery coming from this piece from you. The poem was lavish and powerful, I was greatly inspired by this. I could not help but feel the power of the 1400's in Europe and a castle. The depth was great and the meaning was special. Great work.
After reading this through, my eyes welled up with joy and comfort. I found the words and lines to be so sweet they made me emotional. The pureness of the story, the uplifting meaning. All made me smile and feel great. The story was cute and lovely. A heart-warming story. Thank you.
I thought this was a thought provoking little piece of writing. The theme was great. The romance that never was. I stopped to wonder "what if" too. A nice, sweet poem from you. I enjoyed reading this through and found no way of improving the writing. Great work.
A very well written piece of work from you. The theme was very interesting and well presented. I liked the philosophy you used to write this poem. This is one of the smartest pieces I have read in a long while. The thoughts and wise feelings were evident here. Great work.
I really enjoyed reading this poem through. Such a poetic sway about this piece. The title drew me in and didn't let me down. I really liked the last line, it seemed to hold much power and stance. You managed to say a lot in just a few short lines. Great work.
I smiled after reading this through. I thought the story was interesting and gripping to me. You told a good story here. I am from Scotland and smiled when you mentioned Scotland. I liked the darkness and depth of this piece from you. I enjoyed reading it through.
I thought this was a nice piece of writing from you. You asked some pivitol questions. I liked the deep, spirituality in each line. I never knew the man you write of but I know he is obviously missed now. A nice sentimentle piece of writing. Very touching.
I thought this writing held good imagery. To me there was a sense of freedom coming from each line. You reminded me of the great outdoors, mountain trails and rivers. The theme was original and fresh. I found no way of improving the item. I enjoyed reading this through.
A well executed piece of writing here. Great flowing lines, great rhythm and rhyme too. The story you told was interesting and educating. I liked the philosophy and stance of this poem, it was very well structured and written, I loved it and loved the imagery too.
A nice well executed little poem. I thought it was very pretty. The lovely poetic sway was a joy to experience. I really liked the first two lines, they summed up the quality of your poem perfectly. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I loved reading thing through. Great writing.
I like how you used facts to write this little piece. I liked the philosophy used here. A nice, simple piece of writing. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines, great work. I have entered this contest before and I found it difficult to write in just 24 syllables.
I thought your writing here was very sweet and very simple to follow. I liked the direct way in which you wrote this. A nice take on love and a huge heart too. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines and words. Nice writing and well expressed. Write on..
What an amazing story. I loved it all. Great story telling, fluent, flowing. I loved the romance used here, the story was very emotional to me. In the 5 minutes it took me to read this story, I was transported to another world, a world of fantasy, a land where everything is ok. Thank you for the amazing ride through this story. I loved it so much.
I thought this was a very poetic piece of writing from you and I loved it all. The desrciptive lines were lovely. Women are such pretty things and make great writing, but only if we can pin point their beauty well enough. I think you did an amzaing job here. The words and lines were very positive, the last line seemed to belittle the rest of the poem. Overall, a beautiful piece.
I enjoyed the philosophy in this piece from you. It seemed bitter-sweet. The ballance of the structure was very poetic and powerful. I would have loved this to be a little bit longer. I enjoyed your writing style here. Nice work. Write on...
I thought you painted a nice picture here with these words and lines. To me, there was a sense of freedom and great love. You set a scene really well. The flowing lines were great. The imagery coming from this was good and I enjoyed reading this through. Good writing.
I liked how much I got from this piece from you. I am 50 and have realised that we never stop learning through life. You are right, at 21 the world is a huge place and 21 is till a baby age to me. So young, so tender, so vulnerable too. I thought you writing held great philosophy. Good work.
I thought this was a nice piece of writing from you. Sweet, simple and easy to understand. I liked the size of the poem, not too long and not too short, just right. I liked the poetic sway of this piece too. The title drew me in. Nice imagery came from this work.
I felt you wrote this from a piece of truth, I felt your honesty here. A well written piece of work and I enjoyed reading it through. Nice flow, nice rhythm too. I liked the depth of this piece, it was very expressive and real. The poetic power you gave off was great. I loved it.
I thought your poem here was very good and I enjoyed reading it through. The rhymes were great, the flow was good too. A very good tribute to the armed forces. You made me stop and think for a moment, just how the soldiers risk everything for their country and freedom. Good work and write on..
I enjoyed reading this through. I recieved plenty of imagery from this piece. I could just picture a summers night with lights all around and up high. I loved it. Nice size piece of writing. I like how you named the moon the "wolf moon"...this lit up my senses. Overall, a great read and I enjoyed it all.
I thought your poem here was lovely and sweet. So refreshing and tidy. Cute rhymes and lovely little story you told here. I bet she is all grown now. Keep the memories safe. I really enjoyed the cuteness of this poem. Great writing and well done.
I thought your writing here was very sweet and very simple. Easy to follow and understand. No errors found and no way of improving your message in this poem. I enjoyed the overall effect of this piece. Poetry does not have to be all fancy words and complicated lines. Great work.
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