I enjoyed this little piece of writing from you. It was truthful and sweet. I have been to a dolphin show and yes, they do enhance humans very well. The size of the writing was majestic and said much more than rambling on and on. Nice, compact work.
A lovely rhyming poem, written perfectly. Nice flowing lines. I liked the noble power coming from your words. There was great positivity coming from the lines you wrote. Good presentation, nice clear sized font. I think your writing is very pretty. Keep going.
I thought this was written perfectly and it really hit home for me. The meaning was deep and powerful. Nice flowing lines, great rhythm and rhyme. You did an amazing job here considering you didn't know who you wrote it, lol. Anyway, it is a great piece full of thought-provoking lines. Good work.
A well written piece from you. I liked the flowing lines and rhythm too. I thought this was an uplifting poem, there seemed to be much positivity here. Good sized font used. I would have loved this be a little longer as I was gripped to each line so well. Nice work...
I thought this was a nice piece of writing. The unity of two people, maybe strangers but I felt the romance here, the anticipation. You managed to leave a lot up to the reader to imagine more stanzas. I liked the imagery coming from this piece. Nice work.
Such a sweet little poem from you. There was a lovely feel to this poem. I loved the innocense of the story. Everytime I read poems like this I leave reality for a while and feel happy. Nice flowing lines and great imagery. I enjoyed reading this through.
I felt very sad while reading this through. I had a lump in my throat. Such a meaningful piece of writing. Your writing is very good and as you know I am a great fan of your work. This is another greatly expressed item. Thank you.
I enjoyed reading this very poetic piece through. You have a way with words here. I loved the mystery you created here, there seemed to be for me anyway, an escapism while reading this through. Being lost in the woods, being alone with nature and dirt. A great, original piece of writing. Keep going....
This is another great piece of writing. I love how you make each line rhyme so well. You have good word crafting skills. I admire your bravery in prefering Satan. I love your dark side. Keep writing and keep posting. You are a natural writer. Great work.
I thought your poem here was great. Well written and displayed on the screen. I am glad you have found beauty in him. I think you are a great little writer and should definately stay here on writing.com for a while. I found no way to improve your poem, it flowed along perfectly. Great work.
This is a very well written piece of poetry. Yes, the weather is turning now and things will become cold and weary. I enjoyed reading your poem through. The rhythm and rhymes were great, well done for executing this piece so well. Nice font used too. I found no way to improve this poem from you, it was great work.
I thought you captured a moment in time so very well here. Your poem here made me feel alive with inspirations. The vision you gave me was splendid. You really did express it in eight so well. The imagery coming from this deep piece was powerful. I loved the experience you have given me here. Great work.
Aww. This is another great little piece of writing. I love the night time, I find it very romantic. Your writing here is wonderful, so sweet. I liked the title of this poem too. I have written many poems about the night time so I related to everything you said. Great work and keep going.
Aww. I thought your writing here was beautiful and very special. I like how you named the stars as a "Her"...I too see the night sky as female. This was a lovely refreshing piece of writing from you. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.
I thought there was something very quirky about this writing from you. I liked how you described the routine of a life. You expressed yourself very well here. I liked the size of the writing, it was not too long and not too short. You also made me think as I read this through. Nice work.
I really liked the rhythm to this work from you. The form has made it very poetic. Nice, original theme for writing. I liked reading this through. I am not shocked this recieved a HM in the contest. It is a lovely piece of writing.
I liked the freedom you gave me here in this poem. I liked the positive feel of the birds adapting to new weather. I was not keen on the form and it is a form I am not familiar with. The poetic power of your writing was great. I enjoyed reading this through. Great work.
I thought you expressed yourself very well. I liked the mention of night breezes, I found this line romantic. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. They say a smile can change a persons attitude to life. It does not cost anything to smile. Nice writing.
I liked the rhythm of this writing from you. It flowed along perfectly. The theme was great. I liked the philosophy you used. I think it was rappers and hipsters that changed the meaning of the word "Bitch".... And yes, it is a shame. I like how you entangled the worlds madness in with this writing. The difference between animals and humans is vast. It is a shame to say that humans do not care or think. I enjoyed reading this poem through.
As the British Queen passes, I have come to understand, that there is a higher power. That higher power is the SPIRIT of mankind, I believe the spirit of mankind is more powerful than it is known. That spirit driven on by death and sorrow. Driven on by the hope that Christianity is the wisest. In these days of sorrow, I rely on the love of my own heart and hope it is reconised by the almighty.
What a beautiful piece of writing this is. Sorrow hits me every day, and it hurts. But the power of belief carries me through. As you have stated in your other works, there is more than one faith, one God.
I thought your writing here was smart, thoughtful and wise. I really liked the last stanza, it raised an interesting question. Acceptance of distress and the ability to move forward is the right key. Your originality here was great. The prompt was a difficult one but you did very well. Great writing and keep going.
I love chained Haiku's, they add so much more for the reader. I really liked the freshness coming from your writing here. This was a very poetic piece of writing. I enjoyed reading this through. After reading this, I felt like writing my own poem about mountains, this was rather inspiring. A great little read and thank you for the inspiration.
I thought your poem here was lovely. A good writing style used in this poem. To me, there was a lovely summers day feeling about this work. The poetic power was great. Lovely presentation and the picture was a good help. I enjoyed reading this through and felt free as I did.
I loved the simplicity of this writing here. I did feel the emotions of your losses. Nice rhythm, nice structure and flowed well. I would have liked this to be a little bit longer but only because it was very sweet. Nice writing and keep going.
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