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A very emotional piece of writing. I was drawn into your sadness and briefly felt the pain. Nice descriptive lines and words. You are the first writer I have known to feel sad in summer. I guess that makes this poem even more personal to you. Nice expressive manner here. Good work and write on!
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I liked the overall, poetic effect of this writing. I really liked how you ended the poem. "echoed by nature" seemed to sing out to me. Nice presentation too. A double meaning to this writing. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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I really liked the form used here, it provided great flowing rhythm. The natural feeling of this poem was sweet and rewarding. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. An enjoyable read. Thank you and write on!
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A great little read. So simple, so sweet and enjoyable. The prompt was used well here. I liked the rhymes and the flow too. I was gripped to every word and line. An overall nice piece of writing. Good work and write on!
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Nice rhymes, nice flowing rhythm too. The one thing I took from your poem was that indeed our inner words need to be penned before they evaporate. Nice presentation, looks good on the page. A well expressed, honest and real piece of work. Good job and write on!
I enjoyed this writing from you. I liked the darkness you wrote of. This to me this tale had the same impact as "Thelma and Louise" the love for each other was stronger than life itself. A gripping story to read through. Nice work and write on!
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I related well to this poem from you. Nice expressions and the love for this woman was evident. I also liked the originality of this writing. I enjoyed reading this poem through. A decent read and well done. Write on!
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A happy little story and I was enlightened by the positivity here. I didn't like the bears coming into Emma's garden. There was a natural beauty surrounding this story. For a brief moment I was transported to another world, a sense of escapism. Lovely work and write on!
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A lovely accolade for the couple here. A simple, positive message. I liked the length of the writing, keeping the readers attention. True and real love after so long always makes good writing. I enjoyed reading this work through. Write on!
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I thought this was lovely. You took me on a spirtual journey here in this poem. I really loved the imagery too. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention. I like you all your poems you have written here. Good work and write on!
Great writing, I liked how you mixed fantasy with facts. The philosophy here was good. Another well written poem. I really like your style. You inspire me, uplift me. Your presentations are very good. Keep writing great works. Write on!
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I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the mystery of each line. There was a lovely poetic power to this writing and I love how you present your writings. I think you are a great little writer. Keep writign little beauties like this one. Good work and write on!
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I thought this writing from you was outstanding, superior, stunning and beautiful. Perfectly executed, perfectly written and displayed. You really did take your readers on a very spiritual journey here. The rhymes were fantastic, the rhythm was great and no errors were found. I really enjoyed reading this through. This was a magnificant piece of writing. Great work and write on!
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I liked the original theme and I liked the positivity here. A well expressed piece of writing and was well presented center of the page. I enjoyed reading this through. Not many people can say they are fully content, so it was refreshing to read your poem. I found no way to improve the writing. Good work and write on!
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A good little piece of writing. I liked how you wrote this out. Describing the madness that our leaders, bosses, managers can be blind to what's around them. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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I thought your poem was lovely. I also found it inspiring as I related very well to every line and word. There was a lovely spiritual power to your poem. Great presentation on the page. Great work, keep writing little classics like this. Good work. Write on!
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I chose this poem to read and review because the title was so inviting. I enjoyed reading this poem through. I found this writing exciting to me. Good imagery came from the words and lines. I couldn't help but feel a slight pinch of humor here in this write. I thought this was a cute little piece to read. Good work and write on!!
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I liked the short story here. I am not sure what BSC is though. The two people were close to each other and well aquainted. There was a warm feeling about this story. I did smile as I read it through. Good work and write on!
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Great rhythm, good flowing rhymes. The whole structure was ace!
The funny story was good too. A holiday you would rather forget. The theme was a taste of the holidays reality. You made the holiday sound crazy, fun and sad at the same time. I enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this here. I smiled. Good work and write on!
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I liked the real life theme, the reality of life as a parent. I felt the growing pains as I read this through. A nicely written poem, I enjoyed reading this through. Well expressed and crafted. A meaningful poem. Good work and write on!
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I thought the theme was a little complicated. I understood the concept though. The depth of this writing was vivid. A lot of thought was used here in this poem. Well expressed. I liked the ending, made me think. Interesting work, write on!
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Nicely expressed and well written. A lovely tribute to your younger years and family. No errors found and no way to improve the item. A nice read, I enjoyed the insight into your childhood and father. God bless him now. Good work and write on!
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Awww, such a sad poem, broke my heart. Good imagery from the last line though. Fact or fiction, this little poems sums up men all over. Not all men lie though. A simple yet effective read, thank you for sharing this here. Good expressons. Write on!
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I really liked this piece from you. A strong message in just a few lines. As a child, celebrating this time was beautiful and I will never forget those times. Good flowing rhythm, great presentation. A great little read. Thank you and write on!
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I liked the poetic power in this piece. I liked the word-crafting and grammar. I related so very well to what you had written out. The struggle, the hardship of another bleak day. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
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