I thought your writing here was very creative. The descriptive words and lines were a joy to read through. I liked the two parts to this piece. One of hope and one of fear. I would have loved to have read more of the first stanza, I found it very inspiring. Overall, nice writing. Keep going...
I thought your little poem here was well thought out and displayed. I think you were right to say that music is one mans joy and anothers noise. And it is artwork for the ears. I liked the amount of thought in this poem. I enjoyed reading this through. Great work.
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This was a lovely story. I found it very emotional in the begining, the sorrow of the young girls health. I just knew the kitty would save the young girl and I was so pleased when I read that part. I am thrilled at the ending. I knew you would end the story well. Great work and write on......
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Nice rhymes, good flowing rhythm. Nice spooky depth and a story that gripped. You wrote this very well. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philosophy in this piece of writing. I like your handle too. Great work. Write on !!!
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Nice deepness involved here. Nicely written and displayed. The complications of a love that is right were evident in this poem. I found no way of improving the item. I enjoyed the depth of the soul here. Nice work and well done.
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Nice flowing rhymes and rhythm. The writing was clear and direct. I liked the philosophy you have here in this poem. You have obviously thought a lot about this matter. I am glad you expressed it in a poem. Overall, I enjoyed reading this exciting piece through.
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Good work done here. A nice flowing poem with great rhymes. The font was clear and the plot was fun. The ending was cute and sweet. I enjoyed the story as I read this through. Overall, a nice, sweetly written poem. Well done.
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I thought this was well crafted and executed. It is obviously a nature poem and it is very good. I liked some of the lines you wrote, they were very poetic. The rhythm was great and flowed very well. I liked how you seemed to involve a person in this at times. Overall, I loved this piece of writing from you. I wouldn't change a thing.
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I agree totally with you here. It is a shame that some men have started a trend of sex without love. True love will always bring better experiences. I thought your poem was lovely and well written. Nice presentation, nice flow, nice rhythm too. Great writing.
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I thought the story was heart-aching. I felt the rawness of missed love. The waiting, the pain, the love. The theme was very original and was very clever. The whole piece made me smile as I read it through. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. I loved it all. Great work.
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I thought this was a very clever piece of writing from you. The fantasy was amazing. There was a lovely little story in this piece. The love was strong. The poetic side was beautiful. I loved this piece from you. Great work.
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I thought this was a lovely little poem to read through. I liked the sense of romance here, it was very sweet. The size of the poem was excellent, you managed to say a lot in a few lines. Love needs nurturing sometimes and I hope it all works out for you.
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I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. The expressions were great. The uplifting feel to this poem was special and I loved that. I also thought this was a gripping little story here. My imagination was alight as I read this through. Great work and keep going...
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I loved it. I loved the imagery coming from each line written. The first line really set the tone for the item. For some reason, I found this piece from you to be romantically powerful. Not sure if you meant that?....
A simple yet powerful piece for me. I loved it. Great work.
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Thank you for sharing your heart ache and torture with us here. I thought you expressed yourself very well. This was a very sad and deep piece of writing from you. The title said it all. I can only imagine what you must have gone through. The depth of the words and lines was an eye opener for me. You have made me realize that there are some lucky people out there who have not been through what you have. God bless and keep going.
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I thought this was very sweet how you made this rhyme so well. The little story was excellent too. I read this through several times. I liked the overall feel of this piece. It was very rewarding to me. Great work and write on !!
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I thought this was lovely and very poetic. Lovely sweeping flow and lovely scene setting here. I love horses and this helped me relate to what you wrote. You have made good use of the prompt given. I really enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and well done.
Your grammar was excellent and it all flowed along perfectly. I found no spelling mistakes or errors. Your mother was a strong woman. The ending was upsetting for me, any death is upsetting for me. Your mother was cunning and clever. Your parents were too alike, neither one would submit. I found the ending to be very spooky as your mother opened her eyes one more time. To me, it was kind of supernatural, a knowing spirit. That is just what I got from the very end. How she knew to open her eyes. Thank you for writing this piece about your mother and her family. God Bless you.
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I thought this story was cute and I couldn't help but laugh. I liked the description of the pairs innocent looks. So typical of dogs in the wrong. A nice little read and I really enjoyed it all. Great work and write on !!!
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I really loved the philosophy in this piece from you. The depth of the writing was excellent. I too was taken on a little journey here. The cycle of life was evident here. I also thought this writing was very clever. Great work and write on...
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I loved this chain of little poems, (Haiku). I really enjoyed the freshness of each line and word. I felt the purity of your work here. The nature, the freedom, the joy of outdoors. You painted lovely pictures in my mind with these Haikus. You have reminded me of the beauty that poetry can give the reader, just like you have to me. Thank you.
I liked the depth and honesty of your writing in this piece. You expressed yourself very well. I can relate to what you wrote, the voices never seem to cease. 48 years is a long time to suffer from this condition. I thought you were very brave to show your deeper side. The writing flowed along pretty well and I found no way of improving the writing.
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I enjoyed this little piece from you. I liked how it made me feel. Sometimes writing too much can bore the reader, but your little piece here was lovely and refreshing. Also, it was very ture. Good work and write on.
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I thought this was a lovely and very simple love poem. You wrote this clearly for the reader. It is so nice to know that there is still love out there and people are writing about it. I loved the simple message to your writing here. Overall, a nice little piece, great work.
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I thought you wrote this with class and skill. You were not too obvious in who you were writing about. The ending was a little sad but made the piece a good read. I felt the loss. I liked how you described the ways of your family here. A nice little poem to read through. Great work.
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