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Review of MY BROTHER'S EYES  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to find a friend;
Harycubbybear.
To write about her brother
his eyes the color brown;
shining in his gentleness
the caring giver that he is;
to his sister, in love and friendship;
who loves him as a handsome man.

A little poem review;
inspired by Harycubby bear's lovely poem.

embe, in appreciation.

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Review of Aspiration  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to aspire and write
of impatience
a soul in me to be free
from extremes

pain hidden in a dream
of depression
unwilling to die in time
so frustrated

my aggression giving in
merciful release
obsession to succumb
lying dumb.

A poem review;
inspired by a poet of note.
John Henry.

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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
O to blow the wind away
at the beginning of May;
that I may see the rising
of the sunny day above;
fluffy and lovely in the sky
to blow my ahchew away;
sweeping down to drown
in the sewers of my town.

A little poem review
inspired by Sticktalker.

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Review of Alive  
Review by embe
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
O to wish you well,
released to be at home;
yet a little weary and weak ;
knowing God's grace to heal you.

Our kind lovely lady, a warriormom;
always in our hearts, with rain pouring down;
to wash away your fears and tears of sadness.


embe, praying and believing;
our dear Pat, will soon be well.

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Review of A Ghostly Poem  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to know the ghosts
in a family home
upon the hill;
in a bed to lie
with the children
dreaming, screaming.

Their fearfull voices
with some tricks;
like a clown
falling down;
to make me frown
in my home sweet home.

My poem review;
inspired by Maryann.
A poet, that I admire.

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Review of GARBAGE . . .  
Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
O to be the one
in a car at home;
with food to feed
a person ill;
corroded thin
in health.

Kicked to the curb;
wasting away
where God waits;
in grace to save -
Maria Maze.
Not feeling well.

My poem review
to a super lady poet.
A new winner in March;
of Rising Star Contest.

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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
HI,
I'm so proud of you
to write such a sincere poem;
displaying your inner feelings in words
that captures the imagination, of a voice in a soul
wishing it could wipe away the guilt, in the light of forgiveness.

My poem review
of this lovely poem;
written by you, the Koyel I know.

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Review of The Prince  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
O to see a glass slipper
slipping away from me
on dainty feet and toes
when a clock struck
the midnight moon
in a fairy dream
a red butterfly
flying away
in love
with a prince
a poet to write
of how he lost his way
when trying to find his lady
the beautiful princess red butterfly.

A poem inspired by words in this love story;
by Patricia, a new writer with talent.


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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI Wolfie,
The Lonewolf with a mission
to help others with a donation
from the gift points now sent
by embe, who you reviewed
with some kind words to say
and the edit to correct -I'm not i'm.

Thanks my friend.
embe, in appreciation.

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Review of My Way  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O if only
I had the mind
to write poetry
like Clarens's

nature in a garden
murky and morbid
dancing in a cloud

wet, yet to ponder
where may I walk
the rain hailing

a wind to howl
now lingering
wet to ponder.

My feeble attempt
at a review that is beyond me
to compare it with this super poem.

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Review of Rush Of Peace  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a Jay
beneath a canopy of trees
the pines so tall to touch the sky
where a lovely Jaya finds her peace
wearing rainbow colored flowers
kissed by the sun and the sea
shining blue with sequins
to light her smile.

My thanks in a poem
inspired by a beautiful image
written with feeling by a lady Jaya.

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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
O to be a little brooke
a pretty girl
lovely like a lily all pink
shy and silly
lazily lying in the sun;
a best friend
but sometimes dirty
for me to wash
with a sprinkler spinning.

A little poem
from the dainty picture
painted by the poet Brooke.

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Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
On a journey through a page
I heard her whisper softly!
"I'm but a countrymom
passing through life
without a partner;
who died away
in my heart;
now lost
forever."

Confused, I bowed my knee
to say a prayer for this lady;
the broken - hearted soul
that many people know
to be so kind to them;
with her love to write
and review others
like me, embe
to write this!

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Review of Wings  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
O to have wings to fly
to see God's black wing
soaring clear out of sight;
flying away to our dreams
where we feel we can cope
away from the wall that is fake;
where many have quit their dreams.

A liitle poem from the inspiring words in "Wings"
Welcome to a new member - Ryuscaine.

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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
To Ken, the writer of note
on a page that I found
with a poem to his child;

his daughter to smile
smelling the flower
held in her hand;

with an inquisitive look;
a question on her face
to beam with a smile;

Hey Dad, how lovely
to be your little girl;
knowing you love me
with this pretty flower.

A tiny poem from your great poem.

Thanks for the review,
embe

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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to know the wonder of a friend
to say in a poem!
"I love you."
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Irreplaceable is the friendship
found in the spirit of praying
for a soul, eternally kind
in gentleness
forever.

A little poem for a lady
that I know to be true.

embe
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Review of The Final Fight  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice to see you are presenting a story line in this free form poem ,that follows your thoughts to present it in stanzas, standing on their own.

One suggestion as follows -

"But even now my sobs are deaf to your ears"

Write on to delight us.

embe, to care

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Review of FIELDS OF VERSE  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
In fields of verse
I see many a poem
by a proud sponsor;
a warrior of old
bold enough to say!

"Shishad is my name
with folders, filled
a variety of poems
in themes to read
and dream away;

to yesterdays
writing, to be
young and gay;
so beautiful a sight
at a campfire's night."

A poem to a Lady I know;
helping me find my way
to write poetry today.

embe, in appreciation

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Review of Seasonal Friends  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the park so grey
the snow idly lays
beneath the trees
waiting for spring
and little children
to come and play
their new games
for summer days
taught by Aralls
the new teacher
for the playgroup
who loves to say!
"Be careful today
swaying too fast
to hurt yourself."

My little poem -
from your inspiring words
of the playground in the snow.

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Review of Joshua  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Richard,

Your lovely poem, so easy to read as it runs along, like the pitter patter of little feet, for you to hold him high and squeeze a loving kiss.

One day when Joshua is older, he will remember this poem with fond memories, in honour of you who wrote it.

Telling it in a story to his friends, of how much you love him.

Sad to say it won't happen for me, but I'm Ok now.

embe, to share

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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
And God said!
Amen!

Richard, I agree with you to tell the world, that a man can see the light when I decide to shine it, least expected on a railway line.

Saul, now Paul heading straight to church, to cry the story of how he found his Saviour, to be the best friend he ever had.
Never having been taught it as a lonely beaten child, wanting to go to Sunday School with his friends.

Thank you my friend for telling it.
embe.

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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To Nikki D89 To go for gold and win
2008 Nort star Rising star contest.


The wonderful story of hope and death
when you cannot hear where you are
and a car takes you away to nowhere
lost in a dream from where you came
as a child to frighten a dear browsing
in a clearing from a bullet from a rifle
your father trying to see it more clearly
now not able to shoot and kill it dead
like Ricky's hand lying limp with a coin.

My tribute to you for this fine story.
embe, to care.

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Review of The Dream  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to know the joy of a poem
written with love to tell the story
searching the signs of its realization;
the hand of God with a pen to write of his glory
drowning out the voices of fear to be transformed.

My tribute to you in a poem from your inspiring writing.

embe, to care and learn from others like you, my dear.

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Review of Love Scars  
Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
O to understand the cause of pain
when love scars the one it owns;
from years of frenzied courtship,

intertwined in each others arms;
the need to be wanted as i did
to fulfill and find myself whole.

A liitle poem, inspired from you words
in a lovers poem, written in pain.

My appreciation for your kind review.

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Review of HIS GRACE  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
I stopped when seeing a star -
An angelarose to meet me
greeting in words of faith;

to tell me of her love for God,
who sent his son! "Jesus
to be our saving Saviour."

I am the son of my father
to write it in a poem
that you reviewed.

May God bless and welcome you, to write for us.
embe.

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