To the Shannon fair -
Perhaps, the Irish Shannon
from County Fair,
who wants to be a nurse
to search for a pill box
to care for the folk
that need it the most.
My thanks to you, for a fab review and Wow!
A Merit Badge too.
Dear Poga
A writer who knows
how to expose
the inner feelings
of her aching heart,
so confused
in feelings of emotion
within her tears
where she hides
all alone in fear.
My thanks to you, for the wonderful review that means so much to me.
What can one say, when you view the tremendous responce to Sherri's most well organized contest,where so many poets have been inspired to write the high quality work seen on this site.
There are not enough words, that I can think of to say! - "Thank you".
All I can say -
Is Sherri,
You have us amazed
as we go on our way
to continue to write
the poems that bring joy
for all to see and read
once a week.
May God ensure-
That the day of reckoning
will safely pass you by,
for the bitter tears
that you have cried
for the rash decisions
innocently made
in a time of strife
within your life.
My thanks to you, for your kind review of my short story that needs serious editing.
"Poetry comes easier for me".
To Countrymom!- The mighty oak,
seen in beauty of her words
of how to trust in God,
to live a life
where love has found a way
to ease the troubles of the day.
May his light shine from above
to take our burdens away,
as we forgive and forget
and pray to live a life
that others will see in us,
the witneses of God's glory today.
My heart felt thanks to you!-
The inspiration needed
to write a poem or two,
for Jesus to say-
I told you, embe;
"Countrymom is my messenger on earth today".
Here come Arakun!-
The judge that we need
to read our poems
and story tales
that need editing
as she suggests
or face the wrath
that she can bite
with her angry teeth.
For me, who is
hiding in fear
I hope she will not find me
until my edit is cleared,
for her to say-
"I told you so".
My thanks to you, for wise counsel.
embe,that cares.
The fisher lady brought tears to my face, as she so courageously faced the turmoil in her heart, that tore her apart at the tragic loss of her child!- A daughter that couldn't stay - But wait for the day, to open her smiling eyes and see her saviour, that is in heaven with her today.
A feather duster to wipe away
the crumbs beneath the table
on late November day-
Is the day we celebrate,
down by the bay where we pray
for peace to spread across the world today.
My thanks to you, for the inspiring review that made my day-Today.
I have recently returned from a wonderful journey through Ireland and can relate to the excellent oatmeal I ate along the way, while writing my poem.
So nice to meet you!-"A writer of note"-That I could never be.
Shannon with a smile, to delight the readers that write a funny story for her, to see if she can laugh with us, who are brave enough to accept a star ot two or a review with gift points too.
What will life be?-Without Shannon!- To delight readers like me.
All alone Pandora walks and talks as the wind in her hair follows a beat, of adrenaline that washes away her fear and anger, left on the paths beneath the trees, where at last she finds peace.
My thanks to you - The wonderful writer that has so much talent.
I do believe, you have made an error in sending me
2000 Gps and will return it as instructed by you.
To Sherri who never stops caring for others, the cNotes are awesome and such a wonderful gift to send to those who we love- like you! Who mean so much to me.
Please accept one of the cNotes above in lieu of your birthday, [A day I do not know] and advise me how to pay the Gps required.
My sincere thanks for being placed second in your contest, and the kind review and comments for-"When I was a Child of Five", that is a pleasure to receive.
Anita, the Gypsyrose that grows in winds of rage, where winter blows ice and snow with chilling pain that touches her soul, until the turning point returns with lessons that leave her rage behind.
Thankyou for your kind review,a friend in deed that I will always remember.
To Shannon, I offer a bonnet for a sonnet that has flowers of rainbow colors, in the fields of fragrant grasses beneath a shady tree, where our lives have just begun with a proposal of marriage.
Sorry for the duplicated entry, that you have so kindly reviewed with gift point too.
Hello the Arizona Man-Allen James,so nice to meet you
who can write a darn good poem that flows with inner meaning of the moment in time, that you have so expertly described.
I thank you for your kind review of my sad experience in life, that now seems a million years ago.
May your years ahead, fill the pages of forgotten dreams that are still in your head.
Hello Salvador and nice to meet you who so kindly reviewed my writing.
Your well written analogy of passion has a lovely message of hope, for those who have lost the ability to see the real world around them.
I trust that your message will inspire those that read it, to look and see the beauty that exists if they have the passion to seek it.
May I suggest you make a small alteration as follows:-
Without any passion(no emotion can exist)for it is only------
In Kindness,
embe
HI Archie and so nice to meet a fellow writer like you, that can paint such a vivid picture of the journey through the lives of the innocent and the old abused souls, in your beautifully constructed poem.
Enjoyed your take on the Tsunami-But for me it was the reality of the loss of a family member in my poem-"Tsunami"
Link-1232389.
Hello CherokeeIrishPixie a joy to see on this site.
Your wonderful words of inspiration for my poem, tells me that you are one who believes in facing up to the hurts of the past, that you have so aptly captured in your fabulous poem-"Conquered"
May all who read this poem, find comfort to look ahead and change their lives as you have.
TO Our dear Darling Country Mom.
The one, that everyone looks up to, for the wonderful work done on Writing.Co
Your beautiful poem is a tribute to the aged, that so unfortunately have to bear the pain of getting old all alone.
My prayers are with you today.
Thank you for your kind review that means more to me that anything else on this site.
In appreciation and kindness,
embe
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