My tribute to a friend from afar
never having seen him
but knowing him in his writing
to help and advise me
when as a newbie he held my hand
with words of wisdom
to help me believe in myself.
Dear Alfred,
You opened my mind
and I thank you for that.
embe, in appreciation.
Simply Positive Review.
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For Ken to confuse his wife to be a rhino
is the mistake many would regret
when being charged by this horny angel
a blur staring with hostile eyes
her waist in fasion underware, haute couture
a thong i think is just wrong
for me to now hide away, recovering again soon
as an inspiration for embe
to write a review poem, hoping that Ken is well.
Simply Positive Review.
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O to hear a bang
to see a hubcap fly;
whizzing by a baby rabbit
flying high in the sky to woder why;
a buick swerved left as a surprise nearby
a tulip, that a girl was heading to, to meet a boy
and talk for hours, to forge a true love before the tow truck arrived,
for embe to be inspired to write a poem review for Idalyn, nice to meet you.
O to drive along
Old Gentilly Road
with a beat up car
and a trailer behind
with mounds of trash
dumping the garbage
in a metal magnet field
the glass melted plastic
in New Orleans East of here
where I write - Inspired by tattsnteeth2
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
To wake the morning early
beneath the twilight hour;
seeing a ray of sun
is appropriate.
If you share
with those around you,
the conflict of problems undaunted;
by the next few hours fading away into darkness;
to wait the twilight hour of the early morning, seeing LdyPhoenix.
A poem to a lady;
who inspires me
to write freely.
Hello the kind and friendly writer;
now a reviewer too,
to tell the world a story in a poem
of Mrs Ruth Bailey.
A saint of a woman, so dedicated
to help others;
expecting nothing ever in return.
One suggestion - A down home girl.
Try - "A home town girl."
O how I know the pain you feel
about a husband that hurt you;
soaking up all your tears of years
to think the pain would go away;
from all the things he threw at you
as you tried to hide under the bed;
hoping and praying he will go away
for you to burn the letters he wrote.
My sad poem of reality;
inspired by a brave lady.
Melhelson.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
O to share a prayer
with you there
to say to God
will you come and save me
from this world
so full of dark
as a sign to me of my faith
in my heart
to serve you forever more.
A poem to Wyn
who inspired me to write it.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O to cup a rose
within your hands;
and set a "love alarm"
into loneliness;
through a door
led by a loving spirit;
a place to stand
to love again;
with gentle hands
within a poem.
A poem review
inspired by Hunter's Moon.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe
O to know about life
with people to sing songs
of magical fairy tale
travelling a path of patience
in a heavenly vale
a deep vision from the heart
from a poem by Puja.
A review poem
for a fine poet -
I read today.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
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