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Review of Fiendish Delight  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
To be hunted by the moon
a fiendish delight
of the appirition in the night.

Beware her fangs
your flesh ripped in strips
for a bite to eat,

in the nights dark whispers
unsolved mysteries;
the corpse tied down to die.

Inspired in a poem
by the judge embe.

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Review of The Dance  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to fly fast twisting and twirling
bobbing and weaving
from being a fool
to re-enter
the story.

A poem
for a lady fair
stepping on my toe
the raccoon to remind me
wasting her time to review it over again.

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1203
Review of The winner  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To hear their screams
I cry in pain;
the wealth I seek
seeing children starving.

A man with no feet;
I hide his pain
in my wretched game,
the fortune of fame;

my bank to burst.
The beggar at the gate;
I know not his name
to bury my shame.

inspired by this tragedy,
a poem by Bella.
Now reviewed by embe.

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Review of Sunset  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To master the sunshine
a sliver of hope is needed
to shine in the darkness
before the mirror in the sky.

The new moon arrives
peeping out - it seems
watched behind the trees
a lady clad in a siver dress.

Inspiring embe to review
her bite size poetry today.

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Review of Grandpa's Still  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
O to be the king on the hill
from dusk to dawn
nobody trespassing now.
The Pit Bulls
roaming around the hill
to the shady crew,
hiding away from the brew
grandpa made;
brewed on moonshine hill

for embe to taste and review
slurring words on this page.

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by embe
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1206
Review of Acrostics  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wake upon a cloud
seeing Big Ben chime
a loud sound in time
for me to thank Acme

her helping reviews
to change my life
from a newbie
once upon a time

lonely without a friend
now to see her stars
shining for me
in words to improve.

May these simple words
ring in your heart
from embe
in appreciation.

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Review of tears and rain  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to read a poem by cymrunian wallace
a journey in avoidance of pain
inspired by the welsh poets.

embe, a poet inspired to suggest
five times three lines as below:-
easier to read this fab poem.
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Wet weather saddens so many mortals
Many morals wish with faith for portals
Portals put there to transport travelers to exotic environments

Environments from forests to tundra’s, to jungles, jumping to rivers, to ancient settlements
Anywhere to settle our minds from the dreary days of rain

Rain to some, shows us under the deepness of our hearts the pain
Pain that we keep to ourselves even though it hurts
Hurts so badly that God sends rain showers that spurts

Spurts the pain away but we still avoid
Avoid and ignore our inner pains is void
Void because like nature God makes tears and rain to heal

Heal our own souls so to keep our health and to heal
Heal the earth each continent with in its own time
The rain too revives and also heals the land in good time

Because both Nature and man are creations of God
So the tears and rain are not to be avoided because avoidance
Avoidance is in the end ignorance.

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Review of Friendship  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To find a way to happiness,
I turned away to pray
to read a poem
by Jyothi Rao.

Her words of friendship
written in her youth;
the love to see
if it is true;

the moon to swoon
below the stars,
shining now
for me.

Inspired to review
in a poem
by Jyo.

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by embe
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Review of Oblivious  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Peace awaits the warmth
the dawn awakes old
in mysteries untold
lingering still
the night to return
hidden in darkness
a shadow light frightened
to blackness
hidden in the dew
the far side of the world.

Angie Harris inspiring me
to review in a poem
from her words.

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by embe
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1210
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A tick for TikkunOlam
his poem to shine
to see our God
reveal his truth
that all men
may bow
the knee
praying.
Where will I be
without you to save me
created as a human being.
Your judgement that truly reigns.

Inspired to review in a poem
embe.

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Review of OLD SOLDIERS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a mind of a warrior old
his memories
for many a man to see
him in service
to the flag upon the pole

fluttering.
The troops to salute
standing proud
in service to honor
the fallen brave.

Inspiring me
to review in a poem.
"Old Soldiers"

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by embe
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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O to be a fool
forsaking your love
in a world of power games;

booze, blondes and contracts
to play guitar in a band all night.
Beth waiting in a diner with a hamburger;

dreaming of yesterday -
Your promise, I will love you forever;
playing it softly to touch your lips again.

How sad this story,
for me to review in a poem.

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Review of A Future Bright  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When I wake in need to read,
I dream a poem, by Hunters Moon
hiding away his name, to be Ken
seeing a bright future in a flower
all yellow, face turning to the sun
seeing me writing this review,
in a tiny poem, shining five stars
to read it again when feeling low;
the flower shining to light up my life.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I once met a friendly man
travelling in Mexico
with his wife for a companion
to hold his hand
from striking two American teens
with skate boards
to show off on the cobblestones
nearly falling off
to hurt dentoneg on the head.

Inspiring me to review
in a poem, his story line.

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by embe.
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Review of Sea Runner  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To see a Sea Runner.
You need to view the words
written by - nfdarbe
living in - "Not Far from Darbe."

A writer of note
that I am reviewing
in words to say -

Tales are told in taverns
of water creatures
drinking their ales,

inspiring me to tell this
in a poem review.

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by embe.
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Review of BUTTERFLY WINGS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wake the day
to see Sherri in a rose
posing o so beautifully

to fly up high
spreading her wings
a butterfly flying away

to bear some gifts
the world in despair
yearning for peace

the wars to cease
everlasting love
sprinkled by Jesus

on a lady I know
to be a saint
her arm healing now.

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by embe
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Deep in the woods
so strange and vast;
the darkness to scare
a lonely desolate soul
seeking the unsearchable
within the screams of insects
illuminated by the rays of the sun.

Shining on Kaili,
a superstar with vision
to write a poem in verse, beautiful
near the nymph-cycadas on a carpet geen.

Her poem inspiring me to write this -
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Review of The Ruse Emerges  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello to free speech.
A speaker of note
to know how I feel.

My words in this poem,
your concern for a friend;
so noble of you to care -

The Ruse Emerges.

I am but a lonely poet
befriended by many
on this wonderful site.

If it were not so -
where will I find comfort;
not knowing who to turn to.

I respect your comments
trusting you will do the same;
perhaps in a review for me
with your professional ability.

embe, in appreciation.

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Review of Our Dying Dreams  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be cynical
coz of my dreams
that cannot stay alive.

I sit in a classroom
listening to teacher's
talking like parrots;

with slits in their tongues,
for a competition
to dish out golden stars.

So it's no wonder
I can't sleep,
dreaming my future
with this education.

embe inspired by the truth above;
reviewing this in a poem
to pity the youth of today.

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Review of Appian's Way  
Review by embe
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To walk this way along a path
God's cup pressed to my lips;
I hear him say my name - Marry.

Will you listen to my voice?

I turned to the stars
listening to my heart
to seek my destiny;

knowing that if you lead
you will have healed me,
there on Appian's way.

My poem review
for a lovely poet,
with a blessed message.

embe.
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Review of The Song of Life  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Song of Life"

May this sonnet awake Shakespear from a dream
to meet a lovely maided
Koyel all dressed in yellow with a ribbon from Gabriella
now the new Super Star.
Shining a light to the newbies that she once was yesterday
but now no more
travelling on a cloud of dreams to write poetry for all to read.

embe, so proud of this child.

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Review of Dewdrops  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to see a dewdrop
twinkling like a star
with smiling eyes;

through the mist
of icy water
rising to the sky,
high above my sorrows.

The hope to see your face
and settle down with you.
"Christina of my dreams."

Inspiring me to review in a poem.

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by embe
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Review of Proudly I Stand  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be proud
standing holding the flag
for the young,
heading off flying to war.

Facing their fate with pride
knowing the danger
exploding unheard in the air;
fragments flying dying,

lying buried in the sand.
Seeing a vision
of a wife and children
waiting crying;

the flag lowered down
half mast,
to honour the brave
with respect.

Written in this poem
inspired as a review.

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by embe.
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to see a smiling face
Dr. Taher
the children's favorite
a kids' doctor
the way he was yesterday
trying to help
his father in the business
paper and boards
avoiding going to university
then changing
finally to be a Pediatrician
with a wife
and two lovely daughters.

Inspiring me to review
in a poem
and say thank you
for the same.

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by embe
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Review by embe
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To find calm in a storm
you need to know a lady;
Pat Nelson is her name

searching for a remedy
to help calm her daughter
in the storms of bi-polar.

Ready to pounce
at any moment;
cold and distant.

Then with an act of kindness
Pat finds her courage in life
to love and hold her daughter;

with words of forgiveness
to say! "O my darling dear,
how I wish I could save you?"

May these words that inspired me
to write a little poem;
be a blessing to mother and daughter.

embe
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