To dream of being a paper doll
you need to enjoy the craft
developing it
crafted from a brilliant mind
being WistyOne a writer of note
Bells of elegance
The secret tome, In the beginning
My lifelong friend
in this poem review by embe.
Simply Positve Review.
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To see a ghostly orb
the trick of a wizard's mind
billowing behind a nightgown
awakening me in the dark night
is the illusion in a whimsical poem
bubbling concealing angry phantoms
who wake in a hell-bent bubble next to me
bewildered bewitched fading away to somewhere
in a poem review to wish you well in the contest entry.
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To fiddle on the floor
in front of the audience
kneeling beneath the mezzanine
is a trick to confuse many a script writer
in a silent scene seldom seen these days
with a view to dissapear with the girl and the ratchet
in rhythm and rhyme dancing away to a musical score
reviewed by embe in a poem for the late night news today.
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Bright as a sparkling light
the brain of an Einstein
in a child Chiangel,
the writer to say
beware a hole
in your mind,
to blind you
in battle
to say no,
never now
or ever more
will i dread you,
at a funeral gate
to cry away my tears
my loved one in heaven.
Simply Positive Review.
For a teenage genius,
witha mind to blind you.
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by embe.
O to welcome a newberry
Laura a poet
with a review by embe
lovely to read your poem
of conformity
in time to scale the wall
finding no purpose
or heed the call
with your eyes blazing
to step forward
and fall into line
here you are
for us to ponder why
we are one of them.
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To the aspiring poet of note
to write a poem
unashamed
to say -
Her plea to God
his kindness to love her today
with ten fingers
and ten toes
despite her fall on her ankle.
Now healed
in time
to praise
and understand him
in words lovely
for me to review by embe.
To see a face in a facebook
you need a friend
in Jesus
with the hope
that he will reply
in words to say he loves you
even there in hell
when you forget
your prayers
and wish again
I gained the whole world
but gave my soul away
too late a facebook friend
in this poem review.
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by embe.
Destiny in a poem
a reason to read
the poet Khaki
with words
of wonder
where to go
O my master
said the self in me
the path leads to you
the destined goal
a valley there
never to worry
left the voice within
told me a certain thing
all paths go to the same place.
This review in a poem
inspired by Khaki
a poet of note.
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By embe
A keyverse to tell the truth
in a world of shame
of humble pie
is a sign
of courage
seldom seen
in a world of hopelesness
daring to trust
a stranger
with love given in haste
the deep regret
a sad embrace
confused to question why
will he not return
for me to say
sorry my love?
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by embe.
O if only nature could be bottled
to fight the battle against depression
as the moon at day fades away
low down in the sky and wonder why
will it shows the pale blue today
in this cheerless world of daily living
seen from below by Dan Sturn
the poet of note writing in a tick of time
my mood turns okay
seeing the family a buck and a doe
merely in a moment
as the moon slowly fades hiding away
from a poem review.
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by embe.
When a vision appears
deep within a storm
to change your life
believe in him
good news today
to share with others
and confess your sins
even when mocked
or shouted down
in the storms of life
now a cleansing storm
from sin and back to God
by faith in Jaiam's poem -
"The Storm"
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by embe.
To wake a dream remembering a face
lined with flashes a patch of dreams
waking in the Miami lights
my memory of her
my mother
smiling
apologizing there
the bribe to pop the pills
walking away from my sheltered home
my left foot leading me rooted in Tianjin.
This touching poem inspiring me
to review lovely in a poem
for Dahlia Noir.
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by embe.
My guess is that Alice is a guest at the school
to tell a tale of woes woven into a billowing dress
disappearing into a cloud sailing away into the air
far from the sound of the piano being played loudly
by Filomina trying to impress Oto the music teacher
that she loves him come what may in the rose garden
where embe sits to write a poem review of days at school.
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To love your mother more
is the joy that you see
as a child to hold her
with love that is real
from the Savior
who sent her
to bare you
her baby
now a child
turned to adult
realizing you lost her
that wonderful love for a mother.
Inspiration to review in a poem.
"Woman" - by Easycruz.
Written with deep emotion
of love lost and found in a family.
One suggestion -
She is woman -
Sent by God.
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by embe
To see within the mind
the corragate sky
a writer in time
to impress
with verse
passion bursts
fierce to consume
the desire of a review
for another writer
not so notable
in a poem
but satisfied
with the result
to review this poem.
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by embe
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