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Review of Let it Be  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To see a tigerlilly
writing a lovely poem
is a joy for me to review
"Let It Be"

Someone feeling
left out and wanting
someone to care
like I do, in a poem.

Willing to nurture
like a seed to grow
patiently in the light
our dear tigerliily.

Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Review of The Hooting Owl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To gaze and wonder why
the brown and black owl
will scowl while flying by
heading for the woods
you need to follow by
a wise friendly bird
daily and nightly
a hooting call
to echo
home
a vocal sound
for other nighty owls
wise to write - "The Hooting Owl"
by Tim Chiu a nature poet for you to read.

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Review of CHRISTMAS ANGELS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I wake a dream passing through the night
the Angel singing praises to our Savior
a baby born in a manger here on earth
for the lost and lonely friends to care
peace hope and joy to all men
that they may believe
and be saved
this day
rising up
with hands held high
there to see Jesus on a cross
our sins to bare to God on high our Christ.

May Countrymom be praised
for her words of comfort
this Christmas Season.

Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Review of A dillemma...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
For Chiangel
Nmeli Anene
to write a dillemma
for me to review,

is a pleasure
for the teenager
to write so well
of a baby brother,

with his tiny steps
and a little courage,
like water drops
in an ocean deep,

to express himself.
It feels so right,
deep in my mind
with my little steps.

A poem review
for this family
in my mind.
so lovely.

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Review of MY POETRY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To be a poet
you need to read
Sherri Grinchson's poems
born in the stars
from afar.
The Lady lovely a Sage
with words
for many a poet
to write it.
Where will we be without you
this fine day
with your family
on Christmay Day.
Blessings
by embe.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To be five steps ahead
and three of them wrong
the response from a lady
a fabulous song to sing along
written by A. J. Stevens in a poem
sitting back and relaxed to say
his romance to a lovely lady
we will be together forever
this fine Christmas Day.
inspiring a review
in a tiny poem
from embe.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Today I prayed a prayer to Jesus
that he may be a baby
born in a manger
to love Jaiam
his child
so faithful
the Christian
with a letter from God
hello I am who I am, believe in me
I love you.
Not because I must
but because within my love
I share your love with me forever.
God bless you and your family
I will pray for you on Christmas Day
my love for you, a child born your Savior.

embe, bowing my knee
his love to set me free
with words from Jaiam.
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Review of A Ring Once Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To remember a friend
like a ring that is lost
no one now to love me
through all the years,

my life lost to yesterday
seeing the chapel bare
no hands to walk with
in her wedding gown,

smiling our love affair
drifting dreaming away
the fear of being parted
the ring given to another.

A poem review
inspired by Epica
from long ago.

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by embe.
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Review of CHRISTMAS FUTURE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

To see the future
you need a vision
of a Countrymom

writing her poem
with tears of joy
seing a baby born

there in a manger
with his mother Mary
wrapped in a shawl

for wise men to see
a Savior in the future
nailed to a brutal cross

our sins to bare in agony
rising high to heaven
praying for our forgiveness.

Christmas Day the answer
for us to bow our knees
praising the baby Jesus.

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Review of Cheap Thrill  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
For a thrill take a toke
the bowl in smoke
too high to dream
black in a sack
surreal the pain
to grope and fall
the head in the way
waking there all alone
for a jaded smile
to frown a lie
in failure
where am I
life's test to drown.

Inspiring a poem review
by embe.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To hide within a created poem
you need to look to the worlds
derivatives of oneself,
who am I?

Consealed by a shadow
wading out deep
in the water
lost,

I cannot see the light
darkness a shroud
veiled my keeper
to save me.

His love to guide me
rising to heaven
free at last
a new life.

Rising Star Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
O to walk down a hall
and meet Neets
in a moment
of time
on a cart
wheeled in
to have a baby
a boy being a blonde
with a curl on his head
coming into to this world
a healthy shade of pink
he is so beautiful
my baby there
on my chest
too weak
to hold
him.

Inspiration
in a poem to say
well done dear Neets.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time
I reviewed a "Cute Rodent"
A poem by a friendly Magoo.

Now I see
the superstar
"Raising Kids Alone"

With a ribbon
he found himself,
that's all he had to say

to embe,
chasing a rooster.
A Rhode Island Red.

Inspired
by this poem,
for a friend from long ago.

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Review of never say no...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Never to say no
to open your eyes
is a thought of disorder
that you know to be there
how one will be judged alone
drinking coffee early in the morning
where you never bother to come to me
to see the pain in my eyes a disappointment
what do you think the sun means when it shines?

A review poem
for Anyway, I met today
writing deep within her mind.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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Review of Let's Play  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be two years old
with a voice to yell
at Chloe
eight years old
pushing Josh's car
lets play.
Richard Briley
with a laugh to say
revenge is sweet
for a child
just two years old.
It happened yesterday
true story.

Inspiring embe to laugh
in a poem review
today.

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Review of Tears from Heaven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
To write a story in wondrous words
that will mesmerize the reader
to believe the boyfriend
died in the accident,
is for me
to say -
Morgan the writer
has a bright future ahead
as a writer of note that will please
his readers like me, in this short story.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
O to feel your pain
writing a poem
of yesterday.
A life of tears
without reason
to be beaten again,
haunted to hurt you
in the darkness,
with another kiss
to say so sorry,
it won't happen again.

Crying because of you
is a waste of time.
You are nothing
but a painful memory.


My poem review
to honour Countrymom -
The Lady inspiring me to write it.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
O to wish for a season
where I see the stars
dancing with leaves
burning brightly
in my heart.
A sign
seeing
the reason
in human nature
praying for the spring
to shower the flowers
in their splendor so green.

The inspiration to review
this lovely poem
by Rachel.

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by embe.
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Review of The Key  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To see our Daizy
you need a key
to her heart
that glows
in love
to believe
being born
is a gift from God.

His seeds of time
scattered
as children
saying thank you
to be born healthy
living and believing
in Jesus as our Savior.

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Review of My World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a sweatpea
in a garden green
a breaze wafting by
where flowers grow
in this world of mine
a partner by my side.

One sense now gone
the others still strong
to hear my dog's tags
like a bell now chiming
between cars roaring past
in this world unseen by me.

This poem by Jewel
a blessing for all
who can still see
her courage to write it.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Old and disabled
the warrior of old
to tell his story
of the lonely
soldier
proud
to stand
and salute
the flag of liberty
flying upon the hill
the graves to mourn.

My thanks in a poem,
inspired by Oldwarrior.

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Review of Who Knows?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To know divinity
one needs the time
to dance under the stars
and wander the wonders
of the eternal entity for solace
seen in the eyes of the astronaut
the dimming lights of a lasting friendship.

Who Knows by Grayshift,
inspiring me to review in a poem.

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Review of Empty Space  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To know a child
within an empty space,
you need to hear him say -

Why did my father die
when I needed him
to play with me?

Now I'm so incomplete
within the hurt I feel,
frozen in me.

A sad poem of rememberance
by a child to inspire me
to review Expressed Man.

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by embe.
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Review of Limping  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Limping through life
I feel the pain in me
on the lonely road,
with painful steps
shivering in the cold.

The burden too heavy
for death to be my fate,
struggling to the cross
seeing my Savior there,
waiting to heal my soul.

Your words of faith,
the inspiration for me
to review in a poem.

A suggestion -
"back to my feet" - maybe - up to the road.
"That I now travel with a friend" - maybe - I travel with a friend, my Savior.

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Review of Family Secret  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Review for Fadz.

Not an easy prompt to re- inact into a story line, capturing the essence of the family secret.
Garuda the special bird of incarnation, selecting a younger member of the family, to raise from the golden egg the life anew.

This story flowing along the lines of fantasy, a family grouped together.
Waiting for the squawks of the bird landing on the marble floor, lying lifeless. Then as if in a dream, it suddenly bursts forth into a flame, golden red crumbling into ash.

I don't understand why, but I put out my hand to see the golden egg.
It feels warm and now I know it's secret, my life long friend, shining a light on our family.

A suggestion -
"Now we're two states away"

Perhaps -
We need to tavel two states away, for daddy to park the car.....

This super story by Fadz, hopefully to be accepted for publication.

Simply Positive Review.
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