To gasp for air
you need to run and jump all day
losing your mind
playing barbie dolls with scissors
a room in a mess
when you have kids who play away
your only day now
this Sunday to go to church and pray
they sleep all day
peace at last to clean up the mess.
Inspiration needed from embe
to review this comedy of errors.
Simply Positive Review.
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To be a world where the sun never shines
is a wonderful dream
of nights and days seen all around me now
in the dense skies,
where forests are forbidden for the monsters
roaming around.
But in your world
it shivers with hamlets being burnt down
in the wrath of war,
bombs blasting away man on earth dying
lying in graves,
while we are living never fearing the end.
Inspiration of how to live a life in this poem review.
A fine write, by Free-ster.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
The waiting of the dawn
outside my window
I see the trees
you and I
the same two
sleeping beside you.
Our boys arms outstretchd
flying there to dream
mom and dad's
yesterdays
sadness,
soon forgotten
after the wedding
to live life anew with us
no longer to mourn their loss.
The inspiration for this poem review -
SWPoet a writer of note.
Rising Star Review.
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The cost of loss
cannot be controlled
when the will to live with a convict
is the choice of the rose about to be compost
not realizing the pain that a father must bare out of love
to care there on his knees to God in prayer, please save my rose?
Now why have I written this review for Dan Sturn the father crying
deeply the pain in his heart of hearts. "Please return home
my darling daughter, all is forgiven in heaven
as I bow my knee in prayer for you."
God's answer. "embe write this."
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For me to write upon the wall
for everyone to see,
I need a poem
from Gupta.
A doctor
with a note
the prescription
my eyes to weak to read it now.
The truth I choose to laugh it off
with comments abusive
the end prevails
in ignorance.
Why me to wail away
the abused in my mind
my head the ostrich in the sand.
A poem review inspired by Dr Gutpa
the writer of note, to help others
like me.
embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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O if only my journey
a vast continent
India
to touch and breathe
and feel my skin
tingling
the orchestra in me
city streets of sounds
calling
the train I hear whistling
why not stay here awhile
to live
with a sensual maiden
maybe to be married
with child.
A poem for Utopian
the eyes to see India.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O to find my way home
driving my little red truck
the destination unknown,
having been away so long
the goodbye in my memory
packing my bags that day.
Planning a new start
my heart pounding
there in a motel,
I lost my way
in a room,
the ceiling
staring down,
a mark on a map
this hollowness in me -
"Which road leads me home
in this poem review by embe?"
Simply Positive Review.
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To read my poem
don't say you have my back
a childish attack,
my feelings won't change
for what is said,
my thoughts of being ignored
a frienship lost,
to lie and cry the question why
to hurt anyone,
so deliberately there wihin me
this disease.
A poem review for a Lady
her honesty in words
to save a friendship.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
The courage to proclaim the truth
is seldom found in man
so full of sin
to brag
who needs a Savior
your Christ upon a cross
to die bleeding lying dead in a cave.
As for me and my family
reading Jaiam's poem
so full of grace
believing.
Knowing the truth
God declared it in the beginning
his words our only hope of salvation.
May God bless you in Christ,
Dear Jaiam.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For Sally to be fearful
writing a poem
to music
in the candlelight
is a delight for me
to review
her poem
lovely for a lover
for him
to know
you are the one
so silent
my fear
seeking your face
will you
love me
waiting there tomorrow?
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To celebrate a birthday
you need Legerdemain
to scribble of love
for writing. com,
her domain
five years now
writing away late
all alone in the night;
helpful reviews for poets
with verse that rhyme
in time to say -
We love you
dearly -
"Happy Birthday"
A tiny poem review;
may you live forever.
"God to be your guide"
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe and all who love you.
To fall in love
the character not the person
you played your part so well
to fill the holes
your fear of failure within you
when everyone sees you fall
the camera's eye
lovestruck fans adore you
the way I fell in love with you
it wasn't you at all.
A poem review for the writer
Michael Stewart
a poet of note for - The Actress.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
The ligh within my eyes
to see beyond the city
lights upon the sea
a path to take
wondering
where to
now
sink or swim
live and learn
too much now for me
the city there screaming
why not a boat to sail away?
Inspiration to review Kelly
with a suggestion -
Your fine poem, perhaps a change to the last two lines.
"Where to now to sail away,
a new life waiting there for me"
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O to see nature in a forest deep
the defenseless tree
begging to care
why a branch
broken
from my trunk
now a bunk to sleep in
hiding from lightening in the sky
too cold to find a light
the match to burn
the twigs
brown
lying on the ground.
A poem review for Rachel
inspired by her little poem.
One typo maybe -
(help or defenseless)
help our defenseless planet.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
My drink in time
for a dollar
and a tip
from the change
at nine,
is how I start
my busy day
at the takeaway,
where I buy my brew
from beans
roasting in a jar
with the smell of aroma
that comes in waves
to blow my mind away! -
Now served
To go
hot in a cup
with a lid,
or if you choose
in a mug with milk
and sugar
with a biscuit
dainty on a plate
the American drink
at the Coffee House
with roasted beans
and aroma to go.
embe to visit
on pay day,
one day maybe
if they pay me
soon.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
A poem for Maggie
from her sister Sherri
inspires me to write a word
in verse, the feeling within me
a family supporting each other.
The need to be for you always
no one to hurt you, Maggie
you are here to stay
safely in my arms.
The courage for Sherri
to write to her sister,
my reason to pray
speedy recovery,
dear Maggie.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To look in a mirror
not being afraid
of yesterday
is the joy
I see
in Cindy
to write it
Pieces of my life.
The woman I admire
no longer to bare my pain
abuse in a relationship
pieces once broken
now a safer place
a soul to mend
by God's
grace.
A poem review
for dear Lucindabaker,
her courage to write it
in faith.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
To gaze and wonder why
the brown and black owl
will scowl while flying by
heading for the woods
you need to follow by
a wise friendly bird
daily and nightly
a hooting call
to echo
home
a vocal sound
for other nighty owls
wise to write - "The Hooting Owl"
by Tim Chiu a nature poet for you to read.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
I wake a dream passing through the night
the Angel singing praises to our Savior
a baby born in a manger here on earth
for the lost and lonely friends to care
peace hope and joy to all men
that they may believe
and be saved
this day
rising up
with hands held high
there to see Jesus on a cross
our sins to bare to God on high our Christ.
May Countrymom be praised
for her words of comfort
this Christmas Season.
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