If Harry were damned
he would be an old man
to write a funny line in time
for his mule to dance around
so cool a mule now mellow
in a field of brown hay
where are my shoes
buckled to repair
by Old Corny
the blacksmith
laughing at Mac
let's roll one in the barn
with rock music to get along
and sing a song
sweet and low
sweating
too fat
in a poem review
embe laughing
lovely.
Simply Positive Review.
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When the wind blows a winter's memory
the symphony there in my heart
my true love buried away
deep to lie in peace
I feel her presence
in this moment
my thoughts of her
the music in my mind
dancing with love in her eyes
the momentry light as darkness calls me.
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reviewed by embe
a fine poem
by Ken.
In thirty five words
with a trickle of blood
the dark moom arrives
mezmerising a thought
a tantalizing tune in rhyme
for a lover's embrace to kiss
a caress with lips to sing a song.
35 words I have used
no more may I write
another word
to review -
Ken the poet of note.
For the promise of light
we need the darkness
hiding in the street
awaiting the dawn
a lambent glow
the scale
on the window
morning raidience
awakening the sun
to shine a light bright
on Ken the writer of note
inspiring me to live life
in thanks to be alive.
to write a poem
review.
When a broken heart from the past
appears in a dream of loneliness
to cry away yesterdays fear
why the reason there
no moonlit kisses
to love and hold
forever
two souls
weeping sorrows
seperated divorced
doesn't matter anymore
trying not to lie to myself again
you will always be the love I need.
Inspiration by our Countrymom
for me to review her poem so lovely.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For Jayden
tears like rain
falling down low
unseen from everyone
battering against the window
a place to hide shielded from fear
a different person in a dream
from the outside world
a memory of you
tears like rain
Inspiration to review
lovely the poem
by Jayden.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
Thank you for defining the difficult subject of Islam in the world of terrorism.
We can view much of this on TV, but never really understand the deapths of confusion, given by misleading statements by opposition parties following their own agendas.
The statement by the Prime Minister of Australia, is clear cut and strikes at the heart of the problem.
Accept us for who we are, or Leave.
Sad that a country life America, so affected by terrorism, cannot apply the same rule.
Innocent law abiding hard working folk, having to bare the brunt of this.
Their dear children sent to fight a war they cannot win, only to die for nothing.
embe, confused reading about this madness.
Simply Positive Review.
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To hear the music in your mind
a sense of passion
play me now
in time
the Obeo
low and dying
a violin haunting me
dancing teasing the keys
stepping on the ivory
white and black
then pausing
a flute fluttering
sullen match with music
in my mind to review in a poem
this special poem -
by m a White.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
Where upon a pillow I lay
praying for a miracle
I saw a walkinturtle
sent from God
so kind a soul
with words of widom
written lovely in a letter
a message of love
to pray for others
lost in their sins
dying unsaved today
Inspiring me
to review in a poem
P. M. Walkinturtle.
Simply Positive Review.
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Sunny not pleasant here
another Gaza day
for a family
blown away
dying in a hole
why for being in the way
WhereI like to draw
the catastrophy
their terror in a pane attack
I cannot forget
building castles in the sand
by Bill Morrison
a poet of note
reviewed in this poem
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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From the ashes of yesterday
a light to shine a new day
on a daughter with a pen
to write a poem of love
so lovely for a mother
far away to cry
why only now
the teenager
to love and hold you
dying inside every day
remembering you as my baby.
Inspiration to review in a poem
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To see winternal beauty
you need irisheyes
siobhan
on the bridge
so beautiful now
the iced lake frozen there
on the land
a better view
with a naked eye
warm arms around me
I truly knew
what love was
and it was beautiful
my thanks to you
for writing it
so lovely.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
I'm leaving you tonight
is a brave write
by pittyful
heart
running
toward the light
in a poem review
to cry again
in the rain
nobody's gain
wincing in pain
by the man a boy
a poet of note
to write it
lovely
without fear
on the other side.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For a mother to be alone
she needs her daughter
in time to hold her tight
from yesterdays memory
how will I live without him
not knowing what to say
but praying he is safe
in the arms of our Savior
the guiding light in our life
all those wonderful years
as a loving family together.
A poem review
for a loving daughter.
Sophy the faithful daughter.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
From a distance far
beneath the stars
a land of love
I see
the girl
so fair for me
dreaming there
with a smile to stare
is this heaven
a dream
or a shadow
of her smiling
my mind in confusion
echos of the past
where to now
and cry why
this pain in me
seeing her far away.
Simply Positive Review.
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With faith you pray to God
you can carry the load
a lonely girl in a lane
cut deep to bleed
crying why
and who hurt me
with my clothing torn
strapped to a stretcher
the stranger dragging me
praying for me to be healed.
A poem review lovely
for YellowRose
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To feel a magical touch
in a moment of grief
with a tear of fear
you need an Angel
your Mother to hold you
there in her arms
with a prayer to God
to taste his eternal love
her baby born
so beautiful, our Jaya
a poet of note
with love for her Mother
in a poem review
by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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O the curse of man
joined by the police
to see a boy in a bag
without a care to cry why
if only i stopped in time
to save a life today
would it hurt me
or make a difference
to society in time
to heal a lonely soul
and take him home
with love and care
to change his life.
This review in a poem
for my friend White,
a scholar and a gentleman.
Simply Positive Review.
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To walk the trail well worn
traveling on a cloudy day
a fallen log appears
in nature's storm
upon the path
a distant sound
the peaceful place
hidden from city strife
seen through a window
a woodpecker in her nest
the wildflower waving
her cheery face
such beauty
never ever seen
as life passes you by
walking in a forest green
reading a poem review
by an old friend
embe to care
for Magoo.
Rising Star Review.
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To wake a dream
marveling in wonder
at the sun setting there
the morning light to shine
a fallen faery hiding in fault
weeping softly her love away
seeing the land once her home
seeking forgiveness and acceptance
unable to hide away and wake her dream.
Inspiration to review in a poem
lovely this faery poem by Kiyasama.
Simply Posite Review.
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by embe.
To be a soldier
linen up two by two
you need striped pajamas
in a house of toys
no nothing, not even a nod
being all alone
having lost your dear family
that you loved
when entering the dark room
the door closed
magically your spirit now rose
in a poem review.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
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