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1026
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To be reminded
of who we are
supposed to be
in a land of freedom,

is the question
posed to those of us
who immigrated
to a land far away.

Who and why
will have to answer
have we lost our way
to speak a language,

waving hands
in confusion there -
Who will help me
understand myself?

Maybe embe
in a poem review
with a view in my mind
living far away in Africa.

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1027
1027
Review of Be Not Afraid  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
How beautiful his garden green
a scene as seen from a window
down to the earth below a cloud.

The Rose Donnin with faith today
be not afraid in a poem so lovely,
a snapshot of death never to fear
with faith each approaching day –

Go boldly forward to your goal,
fear not the possibility of death
in a poem review by embe -
My appreciation for your review.

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1028
Review of HER PATH  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)



With yellow roses and a wedding ring
she cried as he faded away
all around her was gone
lonely on a bench
in a satin dress
crying alone
near the ocean
craching so loudly
the sound a memory now
close enough to touch a heart
so handsome his eyes looking down.

A poem review for a Yello Rose
lovely in the sunlight.
by embe.

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1029
1029
Review of Canopy of Weeds  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To show emotion in a fit of rage
is the courage to tell it straight
like an arrow in a heart
to bleed the poison
from a soul.
The one you hate
who stole your light
for being an individual
hoping for a single ray of hope
trying to find the purpose of life.

A poem review
for Umbramaster
a poet of note.

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by embe.
1030
1030
Review of Her Tears  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If only in that moment
to listen if one cares
for the fear of failure,

crying out in the dark
by one who speaks
the fate of her mistake,

with tears falling down
the need to cry out loud
why do you never listen,

to my voice unheard
a haunting memory
in my grave a farewell?

Here in a poem of hope
reviewed in kindness
by embe.

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1031
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When you are tired and weary
with no one to love you
remembering
yesterdays
sadness.

Follow your heart
and read a poem
by our Countrymom
the sage with words of comfort,

in her mountain of memories
to brighten your world
and smile again
with a heart
on fire to live life all over again.

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by embe.
1032
1032
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The unfinished symphony
in her living memory
a voice of another,

she would never sing
what she had heard
in the dream of being,

there in the summer
pierced by the rays
warm upon the earth,

casting a shadow
her new destination
a purpose for reason,

in a poem review
lovely to review
by embe.

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1033
1033
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To see a valley behind a wall
your hiding place for a heart
a soul on a journey of sadness
in a world of contrary existence.

Read a lovely poem by allison
where everything has a pupose
as you dream to sail on the sea
in perfect harmony now set free,

running in the wind of freedom
gathering the knowledge of life
forever knowing every season
set free by the will of nature.

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by embe.
1034
1034
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a bird to be a mystery
you need to follow him
into a cave
to a wall
a puzzle
appearing
the entrance closed
this is crazy
no puzzle
here
for me to see on the wall
changing now
into a bird
now a man
confused to dream
where am I
a puzzle
in time
to be solved I'm home
in a poem
reviewed
lovely to confuse
by embe.

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1035
1035
Review of (Bud)ding Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To plant a rose
that blossomed
yellow smiling,

a tip of red
glowing
shining,

the sunset
a Caribbean
laughter.

You need
Nikki
with a smile,

by the balmy sea
floating with a friend
sipping blue reef tea,

the friendship
now turned
to love.

A tiny poem
reviewed
lovely.

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by embe.
1036
1036
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
For a Mother to find peace
from dementia
she needs a son -
Chuck to pray a prayer
unlocking her memory,
a Mother so happy
talented and bright,
her eyes a glow
seeing her son
swinging up high
playing a game ,
look Mom
the sky is so blue
just like your eyes
smiling for me -
Drifting from reality
to the abstract
still remembering you,
In a poem review
lovely by embe.

One tiny error
"escapefrom"
space needed -
escape from.
1037
1037
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be below the snow
the light of the sun
falling cold
within a sestina
the format
by a poet supreme
Jace the sybaritescribe
lovely the life
of writing a poem
the magic in the snow
new flakes
ablase in the falling light
reviewed by embe.

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1038
Review of Divinity's Prayer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a raven Angel to write so well
you need a poem from her
lovely as the dawning
of youth in a child -
nearer to be
in a prayer
reawakening now -
in a dream her night in silence
things relevant and most worthwhile
in a poem review by embe,
with thanks to read -
Divinity's Prayer.

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1039
Review of Love is Forever  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh to wish upon a star
God on high
smiling
on a rose
yellow for me to bow
my knee
in praise
love is forever from me
for a review
the warning
ships beware the sea
the sailor
so lazy
where are we in a storm
to die
unsaved
without a prayer to pray
in a poem
a reminder
trust in God to save you.

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by embe.
1040
1040
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To streak through space
seeing the comet
in a sea of sun
for us,
no more
will we exist
in time for the dark avenger
his nebulous hand
to frighten man
to die -

Who now extends his hand
to God on high
with his nebulous hand
for us to live
forever,
crushed the demon hand
to whither away
dying in the sun.

A poem review
lovely for Squeewockle.

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by embe.
1041
1041
Review of Infinite Feelings  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the middle of life
who am I
helping out in my mind
by making it
warmer brighter, happier
with endings
that count the most
you're glad
my world has changed
giving all
infinite feelings of love
to everyone
it's good for me to say
in a poem
reviewed by embe.

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1042
Review of Follow Your Heart  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just because I want to pray for you
the Angel in my heart
Sherri the lovely maiden in a dream
I bow down to kneel
my prayer rising high up to heaven
seeing a lovely baby
all pink and rosy wrapped to fly down
born again a mother
my Sherri married with a beautiful family
always kind to others
just because Sherri wants to in her heart
so filled with love
overflowing into a rainbow of happiness
in this poem review
to honor our poet , Sherri the writer supreme.

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by embe.
1043
1043
Review of As It Was To Be  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
As it was to be for me
a review in a poem
lovely the scenery,
beauty of innocence
our youthful days.

I remember it well
played on piano,
with a solo violin
woven into two
a song sung lovely,

the language unknown
with a tongue to answer,
I remember it so well
as it was to be for me
dreaming the scene.

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by embe.
1044
1044
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
As time stood still
the earth a ravaged place
men of war torn buried in space
all but one searching in the ruins
the scavenger as the young soldier
seeing a beautiful young woman
with her rebel badge exposed
his dream blown away
why not die with her
no threat anymore
in a grave to lie
the ditch for two in a memory there
this poem review
for Ken the poet
by embe.

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1045
Review of MY LIFE  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In my memory I see a child
born to bloom the lovely baby
with her smile to break my heart.

This world a better place with her
the doyen to grace this stage
the writer supreme,

her way with kindness
my life so worthwhile
in this poem review,

for my Countrymom
so dear to me,
embe.

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1046
Review of Southern Woods  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Here
high up
from the tip
of this green tree
I dreamed a dream
a Warriormom supreme
lying lonely in her bed to heal
the hurt inside for her not to eat
but wait in a prayer from me to God.
His wisdom maybe she works too hard
without a rest to heal in the forest of trees
the fragrance of the pine waking her senses
he wants her to share this beauty with us today
in a poem review by embe.
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below the tree
where I stand
on this earth.
1047
1047
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Where upon a pillow I lay
a raindrop on my windowpane,
I hear thunder rolling not far away
with a dismal cloud in my mind,
a bird call to wake me now
hidden words in a poem,
with nothing to write
my pen empty,
the paper on the shelf.

Where o where is Tracey,
the writer of note to help me now
in a poem review by embe.

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1048
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be a flower growing wild
you need space to live
in a dream
set free
nothing binding
to tame the bird in flight
teaching her the ways of life
soaring high above you
in the deep blue
of the sky
it isn't meant to be
the dream she restlessly sees
in a poem review
lovely for Lily.

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1049
Review of IN THE MIST  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the mists of time gone by
there is a voice of love
for a yellow rose
promised
forever
in faith
the words
by one passed on
just a heartbeat away
my love a strong foundation
leaning on my God
to say I love you
waiting here
in heaven
for you.

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by embe.
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1050
Review of THE SIXTH SENSE  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Eternal love in a whisper
a golden moment
of truth
spellbound eyes
aflutter
a heart to touch
in a kiss
six sense awake
speechless
a sensation there
dulled
clinging too deeply
in words
the woman awake
a fake
did make me recoil
in a review
for the poet of note
Dr M C Gupta.

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by embe.
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