The illusion in my mind
going blind,
too far to see my shadow
dancing now,
there spinning around
in a circle.
Where will I be tomorrow
a fragment,
disappearing in a cloud
rising high,
one day I'll fly up to the sky
seeing him,
by his grace, I shall swim
in a poem,
lovely to review by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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With a broken heart I read your poem
the need to understand about your son,
avoiding the eyes of your friends in the bus
doing everything he can to postpone the exams.
Thinking what he can do to change the situation
being the friend of all the old men in that ward,
not lonely anymore your kind beautiful son.
My poem review, lovely for you dear Creek.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In need of a hug to ease the pain in me
the loss of a loved one so beautiful
would last my whole life long,
if your mercy came through
just for a moment in time
my prayer to you.
God of mercy on my knee
I know you need him with you,
could I simply hold his hand in love
the memories I have in the red velvet box.
Blessing from above
for our Dear Yellow Rose,
the professional reviewer of note.
embe in appreciation, her gift for us.
Simply Positive Review.
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Prophecy by Ken
the scarecrow brown
arms held high standing still,
beyond this place straw's scattered
sad and tattered contemplating
fields lying bare on the earth,
the chill in the air
wet in the rain
beyond horizon's,
we'll meet once more
in a poem review lovely for Ken
by embe in appreciation,
your fine poetry.
Simply Positive Review.
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Prophecy by Ken
the scarecrow brown
arms held high standing still,
beyond this place straw's scattered
sad and tattered contemplating
fields lying bare on the earth,
the chill in the air
wet in the rain
beyond horizon's,
we'll meet once more
in a poem review lovely for Ken
by embe in appreciation,
your fine poetry.
Simply Positive Review.
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To be or not be a poet
living on mars,
maria-n
there in time
within a vast expance.
God's universe
to see
his glory there,
even scientists approved
to be saved.
Seeing my life
so new,
no time for puzzles
to confuse
my journey home to him.
A tiny poem review
lovely the write
by maria-n.
embe in appreciation.
To go back there again
in wonder of yesterday,
you calling my name
where the castle stood
the sun shining brightly,
in the sacred kingdom
all roads led there now
in a poem so lovely,
by our dear rachie
reviewed by embe,
lovely to read out loud
for the stars shining.
Simply Positive Review.
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Oh to be a bull in a barn
with a camera
photos looking strange
those pictures
so sweet, so sublime
staring at me
my daddy helped me
I mooed
but all is forgiven now
say cheese
for a review so lovely
by embe
knowing it to be true
for hooves
a fine poet of note.
Simply Positive Review.
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The eternal encounter
struggling to write
images
there in my head
threading the neeedle,
sewing together
words
lost in a memory
vivid yet unreachable,
always moving
along
the concrete
a substance drying,
fundamental my words
in a poem review
lovely
for a poet of note
by embe, my thank you.
Simply Positive Review.
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Ruby Princess
Beth is a mama
the eternal flame
brighter than light
in a thousand stars
smiling, twinkling there
with a kiss a heart in flight
the thought of losing you
far too much to bear
shattered, lonely
night and day
in a poem
of healing
lovely for Beth
reviewed by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To read Mridu a pleasure for me
in a lovely tale from the heart
its a simple romantic poem
in a castle of dreams
the palace
to touch
your heart
a hidden treasure
fragrance of nite jasmine
hidden in drops of tears
lovely to cry the dream come true.
embe in a poem review
with one suggestion -
A simple touc! - Maybe you mean - touch!
A lovely poem to end 2010.
Simply Positive Review.
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Ah, to dream humanity
as seen in a scene by Brina
a poet of note to write so lovely
the need to succeed doing our best
while singing our songs of hope
the world never ending now
as we fall to our knees
emotions held high
our songs never ending
to be what we are beautiful here
in a poem review by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To wake a yesterday in a dream
you need a scene as seen
by many a brother
black to believe
brothers in white
holding hands praying now
a new democracy for our America
but why a man with a dream
hated in ignorance
falling from a gun
in the crowded scene
Memphis - April - 1968 deceased.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe for Jerseyboy
in a fine poem.
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When I was young
my hands to hold,
I was never cold
to hold a ball
aiming low,
a post box
in the snow
red with a thud,
by DexterCohen
the writer of note,
reviewed by embe,
lovely in the winter
grey the cloud above.
Simply Positive Review.
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Looking4ward2*2011
one twenty - four hour day,
a moonbeam casting shapes
displayed beautiful in picture books.
A wonderful place that left me breathless
writing a review lovely in this majestic scene,
cherry blossoms in bloom reaching toward the sun.
O! Mohonk, a memory of all my yesterdays for Webwitch.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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