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Review of Life As It Is  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Life as it is in this lovely poem
determines where we stand
reading our newbie MsKitty
the life we have is fragile
so delicate to touch
saying goodbye
fading away
but no never here
for a new poet of note
reviewed by embe a friend
welcoming you to writing.com.

Simply Positive Review.
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852
Review of Sleep's Image  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment of time
to sleep an image,
the thoughts of me
by stricuckoo,
in a poem lovely
for embe to review,
my night ending
my day begun.
Awaiting again
sleep's image,
now in my mind
a super write,
by a professional.

Simply Positive Review.
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853
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To fight for freedom
so far away from home
the fields of memories roam,
let us not forget our loved ones
honored in a poem, reviewed by embe
for Marti Stevens our poet of note I met today,
for all who fought for freedom to free our souls,
praying a prayer to God his vision of heaven our home.

Simply Positive Review.
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854
Review of all in my mind  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
All in the mind
rising from obscurity,
a soul decays crumbling
falling apart in front of my eyes,
but what if this is a scene of a dream
there in a thought of my own inner conflict,
reading a fine poem to review for eccentricities
welcome my friend, may you write many more poems.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In a moment of confusion
Cheddar the cat by her side,
Gwen trying to sleep all day
dreaming Christmas dinner,
depressed in a letter to her
mentioned by her mother,
beholden to her family
this sad tale of woe,
reviewed by embe
in sympathy
for Paige,
a fine writer
her Christmas Letter.

Simply Positive Review.
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856
Review of Genie as a gift  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Genie as a gift for the birthday kid
sad to say it was supposed to be
by someone else in a thought
instead of joy it brought death
all fingers pointed at me
in my golden lamp
trying to apologize
to embe in a review
for rhmn being R. H. N
the poet to tell a sad tale
C’mon it wasn’t my fault at all -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

To be alone towards tomorrow
striding lonely across the field,
I turned towards her in the sun
of a summer’s breeze drifting,

pulling down a cloud passing
tendrils of light dancing brightly,
in a poem reviewed by embe
for a poet of note our Cburke.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Our Poor Mailbox  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

O to be a mailbox shaped like a barn,
standing perfectly strong in the snow
longing for the summer to rise again,

far from the lonely snowpough driver
disguised as a new scrap metal thief;
can you think of a sadder mailbox story.

Reviewed my embe to dream the scene,
lovely by the writer of note, our Picodoll
down by the post office waiting for mail.

Simply Positive Review.
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859
Review of Fireworks  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Emotional encounters
where fireworks fly
high in the sky,
sparkling for embe
swept off my feet,
reviewing lovely for Amay
the fine poet of note.

Sparks flying
high in the clouds,
pyrotechnic explosions
there in my mind,
a crackling trail.
Oh, look at him
the fireworks shining....

Simply Positive Review.
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for entry "Englyn Unodl Union" 
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

Ten syllables with the rhyme
in time for the first line,
then six syllables
in the second
line in time,
for the A rhyme
by the poet of note, nfdarbe
is a wonderous scene,
for many a poor poet
like me, embe
in appreciation
to review Englyn Unodl Union.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The sun shines a light in the sky
below the shadow of the moon,
hiding away heavy on me
my hitchhiking days,
a distant memory
I cannot see,
the passing cars
promised to save me.
This review lovely for Andrew
a poet of note in words of wisdom,
for embe to study punctuation
not my speciality in poetry;
but willing to learn
from a memory,
of this friend.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Beethoven Speaks  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To read this fabulous poem;
in deed a masterpiece by Oasis.
I need to review it as a poem by embe.


Still loving this music in my mind
Hiding from souls sorrow in fear
The shame of thought in lyrics
Invisible tragedy was within
My life has passed me by.

Though inner life was richer
Nourished in silence profound
I sought the glamor of the theater
The nature of the work my impressions
Hence my art was bold and violent a sign,

Being proud and timid detached
Resenting every intrusion
Never in public view
Now fading away
Into music of old,

Playing orchestration
My baton directing melodies
Joyous the opera with tenors singing
Measured alive in spirit of songs vibrating
Relative to time the music there never dying –

Could this lover’s confusion within me
Be more deliciously enhanced
By moonlight from above
The music in my mind
Envy and jealousy,

Since the beginning
It was never Beethoven
Scribbling furiously on the floor
The score was always on my mind
For me to publish it was my symphony.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
YellowRose in a moment of truth
the need to write to the troops
may you hear our prayers
carried on the wind.
Loved and respected here
families waiting at the airport,
you know God will bring you home
in this poem review by embe
for our poet of note.
The caring soul wise in words,
wondrous good news to celebrate.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of truth,
brown eyes skywards
with a voice to cry why,
these footprints for me
cherishing my ancestors,
with blood sweat and tears
clearing a path for the future,
love and peace to be their shield
in a poem review for a poet of note.
Mangadude the image of hope for lost souls.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Ever After  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
For LdyPhoenix to cry her dream
a life caged lonely in the castle
the walls built from stone
another destiny
freedom flying high above
clutching white satin and lace
casting off cursed glass slippers
in a poem review by embe
the need to say it loud
happy birthday
dawning a new beginning
may your fairytale life come true.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To dream a mother's garden
a tale told lovely by Cassandra
with flowers in fields golden yellow
bright heads above the soil in sunshine
a testament to life, death, and rebirth
for embe to review before winter
our new rising star appearing
with many more fine poems.

Simply Positive Reviews.
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Review of Ambiguity  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
O the need for more ambiguity
unbound by rules of punctuation
eliciting squints of consternation
that bring antonymical clearness
to embe in dream with a review
in my mind words wooly vague
becoming a free range poet
the readers unsure of me
confirmed by Missjudy.

Simply Positive Review
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Review of Triad  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh! to review so lovely a poem
by Ignotum a three part piece,
triad in my mind
ignorance
enema,
a new life
procurement
wiped clean,
understanding,
knowledge abounding now,
please mother create a new me
to write of life anew,
in happiness
I believe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Clouds in the Sky  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To dream of clouds
so high above
snowfalls,
a crystal sky
baby-blue there
a perfect spectacle,
and at times
angelic
like the stars,
shining a light
on the poet Tim Chiu,
a writer of note
wondrous
words of vision,
read by embe today
in a poem review lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Mind&Soul  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Blessed be the Archangel
the truth exposed in God,
when you read the bible
knowing he exists today,

there on bended knees
his mercy from heaven,
free for all who believe
you will find him there.

In theory of evolution
disproved long ago,
Darwin was wrong
if you open your mind,

in a poem review
for a write of note
the_archangel,
by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
To read and review
Harry, in a stunning poem
five stars of shame,
why the white man so evil
his pleasure there,
to hunt them down dying,
Red Indians
laid to rest in the West.

My tiny poem attached
understanding
their fate today.

Practice what you preach never easy for me
anger and weeping in a poem of sorrow,
my mind unable to grasp a lie of the mighty
all powerful without mercy for the innocent,
hiding dying in their lodges, skins - of buffalo
covering a nation enslaved, democracy denied
by the rich and famous, where are they now?

Dead their bones rotting in hell, a fire burning
brightly with evil deeds for mankind the devil,
detailing laws with commas and dots, what for?
The uneducated a sign language, leave us alone,
long time our custom from birth roaming in tribes,
riding our ponies to the hills, our children laughing
whooping ancient games of old, now starving thin.

The fields filled with memories, dancing a trance
a mind to madness consumed we are drunkards,
their booze poisoned dark to die lonely in a hole,
locked away beautiful in our minds earth our hero,
fields in words of mercy on high, seeds of pride
signals proud Red Indians of old, blood so bold
the color of living strangers disguised the traitors.

Our souls sold for two dollars to die, tell us why
eagle in the sky seeing a new horizon on earth,
trinkets and beads sold to tourists on the reserve.
Our custom we preserve hiding our dignity here
in this land, the world calls it – “Freedom Now.”
Where are we in the land of paradise road,
hiding away where you shamed our heritage?

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Butterflies and sorrow
between two friends
a sad poem of loss,

in words and thought
sharing it together
seeing the butterflies,

flying by in the lane
down the driveway
O how I miss her so,

in a poem review
by embe a friend,
for Sandra Bennett.

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873
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
To work with mother
by yellow rose
a poem,
eleven lines
he was cozy awake
in a basket,
warm
I came to work
but mother was no fun,
a strange sound
grass inside
a pillow,
really good
to sleep away all day
in a review,
by embe
lovely
your gifted tickets.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

In a moment of time
no matter the path,
follow your heart
trust in our God,

he will save you
to read this poem,
in a review lovely
for the poet of note.

Thomas White
unafraid to say,
I write it boldly
my view of God,

we will all stand
there at his feet,
bowing our knees
praying forgiveness.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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875
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Drawing a line in thought
a picture perfect for me
pencilled a frown,
the mirror
an image of me,
inclined and slanting
ripples woven embedded
deep in my mind’s eye,
Robin the artist
so surreal
reviewed lovely,
embe seeing the thought
a merit badge
with my note of thanks.

Rising Star Review.
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