Baddest Female in deed a pleasure to review
by embe seeing the scene in my mind
with a little help from my Savior
he was one too on a cross
beaten black and blue
for being a hero
to save us
nowhere now
never ever done
if we pray on our knees
her name is Nion like a light
shining in the hearts of the cruel remarks
that they will see the light of day in heaven soon.
Simply Positive Review.
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Oh! In a moment of sadness
only two items in her portfolio,
Renee Lange from so long ago
a fine poet of note in embe's eyes,
lovely the Black Widow where are you,
maybe waking a dream reading this review,
please stay in contact with a new poem soon,
just like this one above while sitting in darkness.
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Just in time to be taught
Voirrey moved by injustice,
rubbish for starving children
in filthy hills of making money,
who cares if the live or die today
without a little broken rotten bread.
Scavenged in bags of bones of bits
in a sad review for our poet of note,
the courage to tell the world today
in this Simply Positive Review,
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Thoughts of greed, to be free indeed
the truth, to re-distribute for the starving,
doesn't matter who you are in a poem review,
by embe for Markallenreed, more it's what I say
at least - that's what I'm told the poet in this poem.
Reading this Simply Positve Review with gift points.
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In a moment this time
a picture frame showing
time to hear her alarm clock,
you can do it yes now you can
limited herself to 500 calories
while stepping on the scales,
show ‘em now what you got!
in a poem review by embe,
our malloyd poet of note
lovely the scenery here.
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In a moment in time
Paris in nineteen forty five,
those years so long ago now
holding hands on the sandy beach,
there near the river with kisses sweet
the aroma of her scent number five in time,
hers was the lovely face he couldn't forget
fuelled by the cigars and whisky in jars,
too late when drunk and busted
an old man dreaming there,
the woman once met
in a poem review
lovely for Yslva,
our new poet
of note.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time it was too late to dream
the alluring and irresistible light summoned him
while floating to the doorway so fragile in his mind
blood seeped from the gaping chasm in his head.
She spoke remembered murmuring I hate you
my index finger circled this hole in your head.
Time for embe to review the scenery here
written by Max Griffin the writer of note.
Simply Positive Review by embe,
this stunning story - " In Dreams"
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WhoMe, so sleepy there on the yellow moon
curved on a bed, her wondrous dreams
the queen reviewer for members
struggling on writing.com.
We love you dearly, your inspiration
to write the lines of poerty in our dreams,
seeing you the angel weaving magic words.
God bless you in health and happiness,
may you spend time with your family
we can wait awhile for a time,
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embe, in appreciation.
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Please accept my comments for the review below, as a way to impove your poem.
Perhaps something went wrong in your layout that resembled a short story.
Don't ever give up writing because of the low ratings and few stars on the page.
You have the talent and with time and perserverance you will succeed.
embe, been there when I was a newbie.
I looked in your eyes and your beautiful face
I thought it was love at first sightI got to know you
We dated more often you turned out to be the jerk
We fight and fight and our realationship just isn't right
I'm only looking for love not someone to feel the pain
I'm only looking for love not just the pretty face i see
Your personality is all i need to find love in truth
Someone who will really cares with honesty.
Simply Positive Review.
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Can't you hear my sobbing heart
in a solitary cottage in the snow
or walking in the old woods
exposed to elements
without a scarf
tingling cold
in a brook
for the poem
by a poet of note
Creek near the stream
flowing with words of wonder
reviewed lovely a scene by embe.
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In fear of the horrifying truth
read Corey Walker's poem
the poet of note on a page.
Color of an oil spill today,
this Black Water Mist
so is the tale told,
lungs of its prey
sinking rafts
now drowning.
Eyes of spectators
motionless in water,
for embe to review sadly
crying the fear of blindness.
Simply Positive Review.
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In the memory by the river
sitting beneath the tree,
a view lonely now
for a yellow rose,
do you think of me
the days spent together,
my heart carved on the tree
wondering where you are,
my tears rolling by
without a goodbye.
embe crying this review
for our Yellow Rose,
so sad a tiny poem
praying a prayer of healing.
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In a moment of time
my favorite place
the river flows,
in a poem
a lesson
so clear
that helps,
my problems
solved this day
in a review lovely,
by embe who cares
for a poet of note,
our Zoie Frost
by the bridge
near a tree,
cast in shade
autumn leaves
the magic moment.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a game ancient played in Egypt
its just the way life is by nishabd,
our newbie new with a poem
cultural in wise words,
by a poet lovely
the scene
for embe here,
to review this honestly
knowing you are from far away,
writing wondrous words in english.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of time
to circle a word
new game,
on a blank page,
to start it by clicking
mouse button
for a review,
from embe today
for Peacedtogether,
my thank you
for your review
lovely on my page,
waiting now
your poem
to review by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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