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Review of Hidden Darkness  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
a hidden vision there,
in the darkness of night
the faintest glow of light
I have never ever seen,


around me in thought
who where and when
will I receive a review,
this quest for love
that will not part.

embe in a dream
reading your mind,
the light that shines
bright stars on a page
for Brandondreaming -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Goodbye - poem  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)

Freedom in free form
by KafkaDreams,
lovely for me
embe in a review,
with kindness
for our new poet,
ending there
unwinding in a mind.

I think it's time
to say my goodbye,
so let's break it off
the fool in you,
trying to be me
stringing me along,
I need not ask you why
Simply Positive Review.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of directions
gotta believe it today,
by a poet of note
ShilpaKapoor
the dawn broke,
the voices inside
your life is a blessing
take my hand to paradise,
the short steps today
tomorrow home,
I told you so
in faith and hope,
pain is just temporary
reviewed lovely by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just another ordinary day
Xylch the writer for me
lovely to review
by embe,
thanksgiving day
God has blessed us
the bells in the steeple,
St. Felicity's started to ring
echoeing fading away,
in a couple of hours
for Dad
an ordinary day,
plucking the turkey
basted in a pan in the oven.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The Search  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

In a moment of time
will it be religion for me
the need to believe the truth,
before the reaper draws near
believing that there is no soul
with the need to console,
searching all religions
in the holy books,
but the answer
by AJVega
is this question,
will God force his hand
one day at a time the score,
your choice who will win today.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Tempered  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sheps in a moment of time
the surface settles
glass
dancing on water
the leaves tossed away life
a bottle of glass
cracks
her arm outstretched
clutching her purse with lies
a man without motion
her man swivels
to a door
his cell phone checked
a new life towards the door.

Simply Positive Review
for a fine writer
by embe.
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807
Review of Truth  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
confession of truth
sitting on the floor,
sin faith or love
choices
by aquathena,
our poet of note
reviewed by embe,
lovely the reasoning
choices are made,
this path to take
God in mercy
or marriage,
the final truth
will be exposed.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Puppeteer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Anorexia Nervosa the curse within a puppeteer,
who pulls the string to dance a lonely fantacy
unzip, unfold me with your mainipulation,
the imposter the puppeteer there
screaming at Mbollinger,
reviewed lovey
by embe
your bravery,
to expose the hurt inside
for others to share the inner meaning,
within a broken heart now healed in this poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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809
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of time in a town
celebrating with Christmas lights,
bright tiny bulbs reflected off the lake
displayed by our poet of note - Magoo
the true believer in our Savior's grace,
stars twinkling down on this scene
that lit a view of a figurine beautiful,
cameras flashing the lovely sight.

Simply Positive Review,
sure to be a winner.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
Drew Augustine in a story
The Fig Tree's Blossom lovely,
for embe to review a writer of note
the fictional tale about letting go of love
until grandmother had spoken the truth,
in a prayer from heaven her new home
one more piece of your wisdom now,
the legend of the fig tree blossom
true love conquers all your fears,
happy now the man I love.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Thank You Daisies  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Who Me, the Jenny that I know
always gifting others thank you
with tiny daises my memory,

lovely her kindness for embe
when I was a newbie confused
trying to write poetry on a page.

Lonely without a review in sight
until she held a pen in my mind
wondrous words flowing there,

my first three stars shining blue
the vision of heaven my prayer
answered to thank her kindly.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What Christmas means to me
by embe painting this scene -

On a journey below the stars
my view of a lovely lady Sherri,
the darling Indiana girl in love
with presents for the children
Wyatt, Sherridan and Landon,

her grandchildren so beautiful
the greatest gift for Christmas
a door way to her loving heart,
this little poem by embe today
Simply Positive Caring Review -

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Review of Three Circles  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
in a moment in time
questions of three circles
by x-scribbler a writer of note,
religious philosophy in spirituality
just because God gave us a bright brain,
quantum theory discussed with embe in a review,
fine writing from Martin far away across the sea in Ireland.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of A Rough Day  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Dear Lord I may be late,
time at twenty past four
to rise this new day,
dressed in haste
our bus calling
the conductor,
half way tree
by Highgate
our new ride,
mom praying
for my teacher,
log in my exams
on this rough day,
the lord will forgive us
in a poem review lovely.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
Autumn a fragile glory,
herbinger of emptiness
waiting to rob our nature,
stillness and hibernation
are shed by the season,
in this sudden seizure
the urge to review it
by embe for Quest,
our poet of note
sad to rob nature,
consumed in the fire
these contoured fields
sunset dreading the end.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Streets  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment of time
down lonely streets
hidden from sight,
in the darker side
by a poet of note
Shawnsmiles,
in a review
by embe,
lovely
the write
by our poet,
read a newbie
welcome home
to our writing, com
with more fine entries.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wandering through Writing.Com,
Diane welcomed me to her contest
the inspiration offered to Authors and friends,
in time to enter her fabulous poetry in motion of life
the snapshots of journeys through genres today,
to win the prizes bright stars in the universe.
embe happy to accept this in a poem
reviewed lovely for our poet of note,
sgambill72.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Doomed  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Doomed tender nature of cruelty
unsheathing the hard outcrops,
in a poem by a poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe,
for Garnetrocks
the field is fragrant,
basking in the sunshine
near the shimmering brook,
trickling down to the glorious sea.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of time
the American disorder
assignment by Marcjdwelis,

the writer of note for the nation
without the risk of sounding rude
raise your children to save America.

We will not lie or steal and cheat
living in rented accomodation
banks repossed our homes,

vote for a new democracy
based on Christianty
the will of God.

Simply Positive Review
by embe, concerned
for our future.

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Review of Adieu  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Adieu…the moment time moved on
walked away without saying goodbye,

the promises of yesteryears forgotten
turned you my friend into the stranger,

for embe to review lovely the poem
void within the poet eccentricities,

sure to remained etched in my mind
the new rising star on writing. com.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Ankimiss, welcome to writing.com
your first poem being reviewed by embe,

lovely your country I've seen on television
so proud are your people so beautiful.

Your faith in almighty God shining
the light on India your Nation,

sweet fruits of happiness
the fragrant flowers.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To truly see the light shining
when crouching in the darkness,
you need to read this lovely poem
by Sai_Hays a lovely fine poet of note,
reviewed by embe reading it here.
''Only Those Who Have Lost''
We can all learn from this
the scene in the poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of A Mermaid's Tears  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of time
noted with every wave
the pieces of glass
shaded in amber hue

some were yellow
from broken bottles
in the tides of time
for a poet of note

dear Bertie Williams
in Mermaid's Tears
for embe to review
this masterpiece

glass on a shoreline
in Dave's hands
laid the pieces down
fair Earth’s design.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
Top Hat's adventures
by Lesdonks to ride,

in the national forests
this great adventure
by our writer of note.

Lovely the story line
in time for a review
by embe to dream,

I wish this was me
so free in the breeze
on a donkey mule,

spotted and striped
with the winner ribbon
parading neighing -


Simply Positive Review.
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Review of A Child’s View  
Review by embe
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
to mow the lawn with weeds
the child cries why
the pretty flower is growing
so beautyful now
the man replied to his wife
soon he will forget
growing up to be a man
it's such a shame
the weed dying in the sun
for embe to review
lovely for Harry a poet of note.

Shoering Acts Of Joy Review.
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