In a moment of time
you are not alone,
lonely in a room
with the window
in the night sky,
while I dream
a busy day,
true love
in poetry,
reviewed
lovely here
by embe now,
for Web Witch
the poet of note.
God made it right
his plan so Devine.
My thanks to Web Witch,
for highlighting this fine poem.
Please forward to Monty from me.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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To sing a song in poetry words
you need to read 2bemar,
it rhymes in time
lovely as seen
for a poet of note,
singing the super refrain
showing us in words of melody
this new music in a mind,
the thought of dreaming
will it be published
the best seller,
letting go
you changed my life.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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When the moment arriives,
thoughts of suicide in the mind
now unleashed wild and frantic,
who will save me at mercy's call
the light of the child of innocence?
embe with thoughts, the waste of life
in a sad review for feelings expressed
by Summer Wind, the writer of note
writing about this difficult prompt,
entering the two in one contest.
In a moment the deepest part of a soul
the physical desires of the flesh,
you are love and we are one
stripped bare,
there by the candle glow
a breeze blankets you in warmth,
under the sun embe with a review lovely
recognisind our writer of note,
dnadream
dreaming the scene,
the crashing of the waves haunting you.
Simply Positive Review.
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In my attic with the broom
sweeping away memories,
trying to reason with it today
there's a canyon in my mind,
and when I arrive I remember
to review lovely the poem by 2be,
our poet of note from writing.com
ready for some awesome music,
this must be the child laughing
one of the Angels I've heard of,
take me to my destiny today
I am ready to walk that way.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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When midnight calls
upon the moonligt shore,
I hear the bay silently sighing
come dance with me at midnight,
tears glisten down my cheek
with a lovely review here,
the ambivilent poet
sure to rise soon
the poet of note,
writing at midnight
with the dancing waves,
come sing with us at midnight
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment moving through me
I find you here in a tiny poem
2bemar a poet of note
lovely working it out
with stars above
in a review
by embe
been there
so sadly broken
with words of hatred
beaten bleeding on the floor
yells flying bouncing unknown.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of time
the shell I live in,
deep inside
must I hide
a living hell,
satan on attack
will i ever fight back,
a prison of sin
hoping to win
with a prayer,
embe praying for me
to win one day,
in a poem
so lovely
reviewed for Cianter.
The first love a revelation
by Ken the poet of note,
with words wondrous
impressions today,
embe to review
five stars shining
brightly on this page,
the magic of true love
by General Rose of Iron
two-in-one poetry contest
sure to be a lasting legacy.
O for a breeze on a brigth sunny day
Solaris LeRouche the poet of note
her pen to sketch a random man
filled with beauty for everyone
Amore! Amore! Amore!
by embe with a pen
reviewing lovely
the rain stops
wanting more
with a smile
poetry in motion
on a Roman road
two-in-one poetry
my review by embe
the bright stars above.
To be a warriormom is impossible
unless you are a team of twenty,
trying to keep up with her
our wonderful busy bee,
that saved my life
as a newbie
hopeless at poetry,
but she believed in me
with comforting words so kind,
her reviews changed my life around.
Dear Pat, may God bless you.
Thank you kindly for the Merit Badge.
embe in appreciation.
I see in a moment of pleasure
silent seduction in my mind,
sensuous thoughts of him
caught in mid-blush now,
the splendid smile
silver crown,
this man
I love
so dearly,
married now
being my husband,
in a lovely review by embe
a friend for life on writing. com
Rising Star Review,
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Thank you, Dear Sherri,
your poem reflecting my thoughts -
I pray that the nightmare ends with prayers
for all who read your sensitive portrayal of bipolar.
Herewith my memories exposed,
my daughter in a haze
begging me -
"Dad don't visit today
voices ringing confusing
my desperate plea,
seeing you weeping
in fear to scold me,
all screwed up
dark to dream,
lying awake
ashamed,
the arguing
when and how
will it go away,
my bipolar
the curse you see."
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Forgotten by Yellow Rose
she sits alone in her room
sweeping away the memories
finding little to smile about today
would she change it if she could
praying for her God to take her home
never again will she be alone in heaven
reading a tiny poem review by embe
lovely in a garden green the scene
above her head is a new cross
she peeps to see her Savior
God bless her soul forever.
Simply Positive Review.
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Anonymous to say the least
rhymer hidden from me without a bio block
but famous to bow the knee praising God almighty
even when prayers are unheard with cotton in our ears
poor souls only offering tears as he looks at us with a frown
a poem review from embe for a poet of note rhymer rhyming in my mind.
Simply Positive Review.
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