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Review of Alone In Silence  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Alone in silence the still of the night
Joseph J Heley Sr in his study,
how do I break the silence
my thoughts of trying to speak,
I must escape awakening
for no one else to see the me,
in a poem review lovely from embe
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Review of To night I go  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I lay on my bed staring
the ceiling my fingers
touching my phone,
deciding to write
something I think
of what to write,
and finally sleep.

It makes sense
when drowsy
yet I remain
on the brink,
my conscious
refusing myself
drifting into sleep.

My fingers tremble
in the cool of the night
my legs seems too wobbly,
my body to raise my head turning
into jelly as every thought disappears,
from my mind seconds after they come in
still awake I begin to daydream while awake.

Now wanting to be fully awake neither do I want to be asleep
It is 1,01am far past my bedtime and I have to be in school,
9am remaining enjoying my semi consciousness betraying
I did not know when I closed my eyes and snored loudly,
hearing embe scribbling a poem version review
of a short story - To Night I go lovely the write
by t-Pavilion on a journey of dreaming.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

In a moment of time
reflecting a poem
under graphite’s
familiar smell,
so inclined
like a baby
crying,
attention
with a smile
born the poet,
poetry – fanatic
how to write a line
lovely rhyme scheme,
requiring rhyme
imagery
for embe,
with a review
lovely .....

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Review of Sea Song  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
For a star to weave a sea song
gentle upon the golden sands,
she hides a wondrous world
a light of fishing boats below,
bobbing twinkling in a row
weaving a spell for Starr
sitting by the seashore,
for embe to review
Sea Song a poem
lovely here today.

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Review of Reafs  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Igniting inspiration of critical thinking
obsessed through rationality,
makes one blind
to the light
of our own beliefs,
an eye for an eye the answer
focused devoted,
perceptions
forgiving
in a poem review,
lovely my review by embe
for Joe Tidei.

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Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cody C, in the free verse poem
is for me,T.V. is our education,
hazy minds spark rebellion
no love for fellow man,
a lure brings death
unsung, unknown
and unloved,

for embe
to review here
stunning the write
by a new poet of note
my welcome to you my friend
may stars shine in your writing.

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882
Review by embe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
For deannarich the poet
to write a brilliant poem,
honor your father
and your mother,
do not be unruly to them
so you may live
by right the child.

This is all you know
a voice to lead and teach
in a poem review,
my honor to award
with many stars,
by embe,
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Review of Lost  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
No need for the fiction sign
the tail told boldly
by Connieann a poet,
in a picture painting
se real the swing 1876 ago,

filtering through the trees
a little girl staring at me
in the museum that day,
with a poem review
lovely to read,

realizing
I had dreamed it
with stars shining here,
by embe.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For a hidden prince to write
a wondrous free verse
tale in a tavern,
Black Widow
near by my familiar table,
I sign my name I read it loud
dark the feeling at night,
invincible to believe
the final journey,
written with great haste
during a dark hour,
in a poem review by embe
for a poet of note,
one of the best in the west
and maybe in the dark ages,
what a journey there
never seen before
on writing.com.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Where upon the door a closed sign
Alzheimer's takes over in a scene,
why my mother by Kathie Strehr
hanging a closed sign,
the mind retiring
lost forever
craving the flight,
a window in her mind
she seeks and then retreats,
quiet the library in a review by embe.

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for Kathie, a poet of note.
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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The shadow I read lovely in a poem
another hopeless romantic,
to review by embe
the scenery
constantly staring,
waiting for mine to meet hers,
even though without reason to trust
some memories,
so beautiful
the conversations
without fear of interruption,
flashbacks come and go without fear.

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My eyes glaze over from the constant staring,
Where it seems I'm looking at nothing,
Yet everything at the same time.
A couple of minutes drag on to a couple of hours,
With nothing changed,
Yet everything has.

Flashbacks come and go without fear of interruption,
My good memories, and my bad ones too.
My whole life, it seems,
That my bad memories have left a bigger impression on me,
Then my good ones did,
And every minuscule detail can be remembered in an instant,

When the outcome left me broken
But most recently it seems,
That the only times I can think about,
Are those spent with her.
Our conversations about everything,
Yet nothing at all.

Her eyes,
Oh her eyes,
Intently fixed upon me waiting,
Just waiting for mine to meet hers,
And finally when they do, I quickly turn them away,
For fear of being lost in their beauty.

Her trust,
Her trust even though she has no reason to trust,
For her trust has been broken many times before.
Every detail spent with her can be recalled perfectly,
As if they were some of my worst memories,
Although they were in fact some of my best.

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Review of Gathea CH1  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Eve Orchard writing lovely
the awardicon shining down,
white a pretty ribbon deserved
in words of wonder this short story,
a young girl from a far off world crying
in the adventure she never dreamed of,
receiving a review from embe in a poem
flowing with descriptive images in my mind.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am embe
seeking Joey C
in time to say thank you,
your great first try awards
mission accomplished today,
for me to review lovely the thought
for Eve Orchard a ribbon white awardicon.

A young girl from a far off world adventure
a dream come true in her mind today,
the good news seldom given freely
by a caring soul paying for it,
with a joyful feeling -
"You deserve it."

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam, I'm your loving Savior
come to hear you sing my praises,
Prince of Peace the message of hope
in ages past and new in peace to save you,
fully undestanding the meaning of my words,
for embe to review in a poem that I will remember.

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Review of SLOW DOWN  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Slow down until tomorrow
today you may not last
to say a prayer,
will I live forever
in a dream from above -

Why do you ask me
these questions
if you believe in me,
to save you
from hell today?

Oh dear God on high
please forgive me,
as I bow my knee
the lost sinner
saved by your mercy.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
To find a friend so kind
you need a carpenter
in a cabinet shop,
his hands safe
no scars
to heal,
but help
another soul,
weary a wanderer
who will take pity on me,
my name is Randy
nice to meet you
Mark,
in a poem
reviewed by embe,
once a newbie now a friend.

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Review of BCT Graduation  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To board a plane
my husband flying away
duty calls the brave,

his smile I remember
in pain that day,
my head on the steering.

Tears flowing,
when will hold him again
without fear of failure,

never to part
our dreams alive,
till our Savior calls us home.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In truth rationalized denial
the sadness of Africa,
lost to the tourist
to be ignored
a lie on TV,
only a hoax
for a hand out,
the lazy beggar
begging alms please,
a tiny bread for my family.

But how can we ignore
God's plea for help
in this desert dry,
babies crying
dying, daily
without a grave
to see their Savior
rising, healing them
a new life heaven bound.

This poem review
inspired by a poet of note,
Kjo on my mind so brilliant
with words wondrous for embe,
the awardicon ribbon come true.

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by embe.
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Review of Change  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hey, for some advise
a poem lovely
by bunni,
a poet
to change
when the sun rises,
very strange
really
if you believe,
your'e the one to write
listen to me,
life's
boring,
when you don't transpire
no stairs
to climb,
change
is precarious
in this advise write by bunny.

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by embe.
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Review of Raising Sons  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

I am woman
a powerful poem
by Poeticdiva,
for embe to review
in shame,
the color of another
till this day,
woman raising sons
from boys,
to strong black men
with woes,
seeking employment
standing firm,
to support dear mother's
still bold,
to be proud we raised you.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

The Journey through this life
indeed a difficulty question
written by Shortstuff,
for me to review
my sympathy,
their history of pain
in a sad poem of reflection,
the color of another by embe.

“Democracy Denied”

Memories of a man
Beaten on the ground
The white man so mighty
Muttering with tempers high
You bloody nigger a slave to die.

The cotton picker where to hide
A baby of color mixed from semen
The Governor dressed in white and tie
Boasting his mansion built bleeding there
The foreman’s delight to shag a maid tonight,

So frightened with eyes seeing her Africa
God ordained the home to die in peace
My continent far away from the whites
Your bastard America a demons nest
To hunt and burn your Indians dying -

Buried the buffalo a dream of home
Their ancestors beating a message
Clouded Democracy a stolen heritage
Hanging from the tree swinging choking
A white man's version of our transgressions -

O racial segregation where are our rights
Mixing with whites as colored citizens
Then denied by the color of our skin
Sweeping streets beaten and blue
Daring to drink from a fountain.

Where to now and hide from view
Black and brown a bastard color
White our masters the bastards
Blood of red not only for whites
God ordained in the beginning.

If you have a heartless heart
To hate the color of another
You cannot buy your soul
Burning away with a devil
White colored or black.
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897
Review by embe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
With the beat of the drum in your heart
truly a most brutul account of war,
written with inner meaning
the waste of life, what for?
The jungle a burial place
not a soldier to find,
now a corpse
buried deep,
what a waste of life
in this poem review,
by embe for Kjowil
the writer of note,
I read today.

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Review of Joy and Pain  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

The joy of life in Christ
the Savior,
freely given
when we bow the knee,
his guidance
he died for us,
rising anew the dawning
faith, love
and hope,
there for eternity always
believing
on our knee,
praising him with singing
hymns
to rhyme,
in a poem review of faith
lovely
the write,
by Charity Ann.

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by embe.
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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Spring a day to remember
by embe a newbie
long ago,

too afraid to write a line
until one day
Whome,

WhoMe found the time
to help me
try,

Just one day at a time
with her vision
a poet,

My dreams come true
slowly each day
a lesson,

Then entering a contest
to my surprise
winning,

The awardicon a ribbon
to remember
forever,

In this review lovely
the haiku
above.

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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)

On a page of canvas
Magdalena
a poet of note in creation,
my words
to review lovely the write
in vastness,
clear white on this page
by embe,
picturing your thoughts
breathless -
Alive in words wondrous,
art helps me,
to understand my writing
seeing stars,
a gift to remember forever.

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