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Review of Losing the Thread  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To lose a thread
sitting on a chair
you need to see
your grandfather
in the kitchen,

walking away
with dignity
how are you
today John
having breakfast?

A strange place
coming and going
my wish to be alone
can I go home now,

in a poem review
lovely to read
by embe
for TWRussell.

Simply Positive Review.
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1052
Review of Cowpoke's Lament  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
By the light of moon
the rider arrived
a cowboke
in a bar
his lament
having a drink
crying to D.K.Moon.
My pard now
lying dead
cold the earth
his bones to bury
a memory
to ride
no more,
in a poem review
lovely the write -
Cowpoke's Lament.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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1053
Review of "Forever Echoing"  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To hear the echo there
in the stillness of the night
is a feeling that you can bare
with richness in your heart
to open your eyes in joy
remembering the life
that once was lost
now still present
holding back
the darkness
to live again
forever echoing
resonating new life
in a poem review here
lovely for Jackilyn Rodgers.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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1054
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To sense freedom
in it's truest form
you need a pen
to reason
a line
in time
for poetry
to shine forth
a path to walk
in body and mind
awakening
spiritual
quest
in life's
promise
a poem review
for this fine write
by blocks_in_writing.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
1055
1055
Review of The Plumeria Tree  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sitting by the plumeria tree
so rough and knarled
near a garden wall
by a spiders web
spinning there
in the breeze
the fragrance
of the flowers
when you wake
in your memory
under cloudy sky
in a poem review
lovely by embe.

Rising Star Review.
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1056
1056
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To see in time
and write a line
on paper skin
crumpled again
Lee_vhoi_ol
Caerberu
fading now
a memory
my name
I hate
in tears
the last line
bearing love
in and out of words
a bottle spinning
like the sunset
crumpled there
paper torn
a poem
review
by embe.

Rising Star Review.
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1057
Review of Reality  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The reality of life
is strife
in a poem,

I'm hated
for I am reality
everywhere -

The pain in me
in sickness
and tears,

a nightmare
haunting
in a dream -

The broken heart
I am lost
I am fear,

in tears
to hide away.
I can't escape,

in this poem review
lovely for Bwitchd3
by embe.


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1058
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
For Tim Chiu
to chew on a octopus
smelling his meal
is a clue for Carpenter's offer
to seal the fate of Smalley
by hiring a Navy Seal
named Small
with a speedy vessel
clutching a wave
to net Smalley the Octopus
in time to dine at nine
now a hero for the crowd
he couldn't avoid
writing a poem review.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
1059
1059
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To tie a red ribbon in a bow
you need to read a poem
all work and no rest
in the cotton fields
without a dress
only a rag
from a loom
torn on the floor
trying to cover your skin
as you ponder why must I live
without money for shoes
working my life away
without sleep
under a tin roof
raindrops dripping
on the ribbon without a bow.

Simply Positive Review.
Inspired by Kathie Stehr
the truth to be known
from long ago.

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by embe.
1060
1060
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the space of time
given to all of us
we need to know
how to cry out loud
for the one we love
now departed.

Why we do not know
but with compassion
and tears to cry
our eyes to see
the new life now
there in heaven
our baby at peace
no tears to cry.

Inspiration to review
my sympathy in a poem
for Ro - ro.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
1061
1061
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A tiny seed the bud in bloom
shining in the sunshine
a red rose in June
in the dark soil
to grow
tall with a stem
and leaves of green
for Alarissa the poet here
so lovely her words to review
by embe in a poem
wishing you all the best
as a poet of note in the future.

Simply Positive Review.
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1062
Review of At stake.  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I searched a million miles
for a mountain of pebbles
in January the year 2008
Katherine the poet
I still remember
in a review
for me
a newbie
lost and lonely
she spurred me on
with kind words of comfort
and now I hope to find her here
If only she would still remember me.

Simply Positive Review
with this request
by embe.
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1063
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Kota - Clay, where are you
come to stay in my mind
a thought of yesterday
a mouth that lies
about us
now we are faced
always the question
will I be just some person
with feelings for you
like a statue
in concrete
so complete
perfect to love you
in this my love poem
thank you for undersanding.

Simply Positive Review
for Clay Blevins -
His fine write to read
by embe.
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1064
Review of The Right Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to be at peace in a poem
by Renee Lange
from long ago
in my mind
so kind
to read -
The right time
with another chance
to ask for a new poem by her
without reason or rhyme
if it becomes our time
in a poem review
by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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1065
Review of Hidden  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To write of hard times
is difficult
when love runs away
to hide
who will hear me
to smile
a new day dawning
inside me
the words of love
returning
I wish to be strong
again
writing a new line
hearing
a poem review
by embe.

Simply Positive Review -
Lovely the poem by Kelsey.
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1066
Review of Most Inseparable  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If the truth could be told
of conflict being wed
with a view of love
for money,

you need to be hermit
and admit it won't work
and only end in tears
with a war of words.

Being close together
is more pleasurable
proving that true love
is not based on wealth.

If you don't believe it -
read poems by Tim Chiu
his wisdom in words
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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1067
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To Tim Chiu,

The philosophical genius
reviewing my poem of faith
in words seldom heard or read
so beautiful for me to weep away
yesterdays sorrows now healed in faith.

Thank you my dear friend
the poet of note
for me to read
and review
in return
soon.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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1068
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Nature in trees
bending on knees
posing a pure form

praying meditating
there in the clouds
the raindrops

falling down
upon the leaves
golden green

swaying gently
dancing together
in the breeze

a color of light
shining down
from heaven.

A poem review
lovely for a poet
Khaki.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
1069
1069
Review of GOD'S GARDEN  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When one feels sad and low
to her garden we must go
to see the flowers
all in rows
from Countrymom
the gardener on her knees
happily planting with fertilizer
in the old field
with cold and rain
her hard work not in vain
God's creation for our dear lady.

Simply Positive Review
for this most inspiring poem -
He's a mover and a shaker!
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1070
Review of After Dawn  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
SeanFear to believe in a name
your parents must have been poets
seeing the dawn of your birth under the stars
to write alone in the crowds is all I see in your name
beautiful on the horizen the face that of Angels smiling
in a poem review so lovely to read and write by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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1071
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be or not to be
a class king
signature
for February
March and May,

two thousand
and ten counting
down to eleven
in January
next year maybe
the King will say -

A paper doll gang
the leader a teacher
Prof Moriarty
with a degree
to review
a fool like me
embe, in appreciation.

Simply Positive Review.
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1072
Review of Spoken With Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spoken with love
the heart to say
Valentine's day,

O my dear me
where will I hide
from the mall,

crowds abound
in the aisles
spending wildly,

next weeks pay
on a crazy gift
for Valetine day.

No need for me
Kitchenaid mixer
from my hubby,

but a poem review
from him my love
and kisses sweet..

Simply Positive Review
for lovely Who Me -
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by embe.
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1073
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My yellow rose with a heart of gold
seeing a tiny daisy
hiding away
wishing evermore -
Won't you share your color with me
before I wake up
seeing
this is only me -
Dreaming my heart to love you now
in a tiny poem
a review of the flowers in the fields.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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1074
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

To a dear soul I met today
Patricia A. Colucci
the writer of note in words
remembering
in the depths of her heart
to ask a question?

Why am I so alone now
laced in pain
trying to see you again.
My dear father
holding your straw hat
hugging me.

May this tiny poem review
comfort you -
Your kindness in words.

Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
1075
1075
Review of Only words  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Only words to cast upon the wind
written with thoughts
of yesterday,
my existence
shared with another
to fill my heart with happiness,
your presence
hidden in my mind
a thought of your touch that day,
the gift of knowing
your loving heart
being the ever part of you and me.

A poem review for Luvleepoet
inspired by her tender love poem.

Rising Star Review.
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by embe.
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