To grasp one's inner meaning
you need to read a poem
sitting beside the sea all alone
dreaming of how to write
ready to create and hit the keys
that make it so complete
sparked by a thoughtful soul
Inspiring me to review in a poem.
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by embe
If Free is from Bored
you need to read this story
told with tears filling your eyes
a vision failing to erase a memory
bursting out of a door falling into a cloud
the rain washing away the fears of yesterday.
This review to remind you -
Read this lovely story, the dawn of redemption for a soul.
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by embe
Helo Lupus,
Nice to read your poem
In words seeing normal people
dressed in blue with silver buttons
always willing to help out others in need
seeing the Angels in us all,smiling older now.
A suggestion to edit --
(To help those not so well off)
Perhaps --
"Helping those not so well off"
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by embe
To see across the water
that far off land
a cross upon the hill
for Jesus to die
my sins for me forgiven
in the far off land
my soul in a mansion
now saved
where the journey ends.
Life is what you make of it
when inspired
by Jaiam, a friend of mine.
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by embe
To read a poem by Lawrence
the wind dancer..
dancing to weave a story
in lyrics lovely...
the wind whispering there
or so it seems
tumbling upon the waves.
Is the music I hear
sweet in my ear.
The inspiration of this lovely poem
to suggest a small change
in this line..."dancers dance upon."
Maybe....dancers dance along
before the onyx-eyed ones.
embe, a fan of this writer.
Simply Positive Review
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Wandering down a forest lane
my mind a picture of me
sitting by a stream,
the water dancing by
whispering as if in a dream,
leaving me lighthearted and free
until someone spoke
o ever so quietly,
a daydream
in me.
To whisper a note
in words to embrace
you need to feel her skin
in reality of the air you breath
to light the fire within your heart
in waters deep to cleanse you fantacy
misunderstanding your intention
in words you don't want to hear
however softly to be spoken
until soon they are gone
in this game
of silence.
Inspiring me to review
in words of a poem.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe
To love and miss your Granny,
you need to cry until your face is swollen
in the perpetual heartache of a final goodbye;
seeing her there in all your memories of yesterday,
where she would hold you near, from your fears of tomorrow.
My tribute to Kristilove,
who loves and misses her Granny.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
Who me, please read
to see the trees below
come alive to cheer you,
walking and talking now
in a language not known.
Too afraid to wonder why
a tree would talk to you
to tell a story in a poem.
Bishop Pine, you are requested
to invite the Japanese Cedar
and the Chinese Weeping Willow
to dine with the American Sycamore
at the home of California Laurel.
Out west, where Western Catalpa
is waiting with Silky Camelia,
the second sister of Hackberry,
to strike a deal with Black Oak
and his wife, Snowdrop Tree.
The petrified cousin of Black Locust,
scheming with Toona and Chusan Palm
to plant a Sycamore and a Mountain Gum
in the way of the invitation parade,
along Grey Birch and Hop Tree.
The crossing, where Silver Lime
will form a line of Coniferous Trees
that will confuse the crowd to panic
and bump into White Ash. Her friend
poor shy Magnolia gentle crying away,
while comforting little trailing Rubina
now in the way of the crowded crowd,
trying to see who will lead the parade.
Am I blind to the light through the trees
where I see eyes staring down at me,
strapped to this bed so bare?
Waiting to see the parade;
the trees waiving
peacefully now,
the color
green nature, thinking about you.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe a friend.
In the town of weeping
they find you sleeping
hiding in the snow
below the ground
the wind blowing
violently
burdened
by the weight
falling on the town
where will they find you
to go and tell your parents.
A poem review.
I'm sorry -" Jammer" - A Dutch word for I'm sorry.
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by embe
To pray a prayer
I need the snow
in my mind.
to find
a friend.
Prosperous
in words to guide
giving me strength
to transcend above
to the glory of the Lord
Her words in a prayer
in the valley of the shadow.
Inspiring me to review in a poem.
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by embe
To dream a haunting face
they need eyes to shoot you
your child to hide in a bath
waiting for help to Russia
to see the springtime new
their hiding with the Jews.
A review in a poem
inspired by Momo.
My Face Will Haunt You.
Rising Star Review.
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by embe
O to be a passy for a child
so Richard can sleep in peace
from lack of sleep till two in the morning
before he hit the road to run away and explode
for thirty two years, until a new passy was needed
for his daughters two year old son who cries at night.
A sorry tale of woe, for many a parent to remember yesterday.
Inspiring this whining review in a poem by embe.
Simply Positive Review
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