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Review of Picture Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your picture in a poem
with words from the heart
to swirl within a soul
a masterpiece,

to paint a poem
a vivid bolting light
in a thousand words
the eyes to see,

to blend the fibre
with a writing staff
for all to see
the poet that you are.

My thanks to you, in a poem.
for your review and Gps.

embe, that cares
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Review of Daughter  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to remember the day
your beautiful child was born,

to shine in your life
a moment never forgotten

the apple of your eye
with everyone around you,

to wonder why
God is so gracious

in his love for us
to be his family forever.

My thanks to you in a poem, for your review.

embe,that cares
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Review of A Comeback  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
To:- Ahhbee ,

who has been
so kind to reviiew
my sad poem
of the abused
society in Zimbabwe.

Your well writen poem
is a delight for me to read
and I wish you well
for more of your poems
to be seen on this page.

May I suggest the following that may smooth out the reading of your poem.

Her skin-----[ on skin ]
Her ankle gives way ---- [Her ankles give way]

embe, proud of you.
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Review of Demonocracy  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Brave Shanoma.

Not afraid to expose
the evils of the day
in a positive poem
that all may read
to understand
the fight for freedom.

Herewith, my poem
on the evils of a mad man
ruling a country without democracy.


Awake, awake the drums are beating
people in the streets of Zimbabwe-
Nine million zim dollar to buy
a yankee dollar in time
to buy a loaf of bread
to feed a family of five
to wonder why
they must die,
by order of
a mad dictator,
with force to vote
or see the whips
lashing upon their backs
to beat them black and blue
that they may fall down to wonder
how can it be possible in this day and age
to live in a land without a democracy for it’s people.

My thanks to you for your review.

embe,that cares
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Review of Written For Me  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Kristi in the corner
with eyes staring
at the shadows
passing by her,

to the inner light
trapped in a silhouette
to follow her
and hold her tight,

as she stumbles to run
to the echo in the hall
gliding along the wall
to the door so far,

from the writing table
to find a pen
and write a page,
the shadow in her hand.

Dedicated to Kristilove in thanks for the review and Gps.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jeanne Sparks-Carreker,
to dream I have a dream
to see me and my kin
converted to love and hold
and grow old with others
of color not like mine
but inside the same.

Why. why o why
should I be denied
to mix and play
with those who
love me as I am
a Christian child
loved by God.

My review in a poem for a brave stance by you.

embe,that cares
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The child a man
his head to rest
upon a shoulder,

the eyes to see
the monster in him,

now new born
a soul satisfied
to draw me near,

the endless pain
down the road.

My review in a poem, to say thank you for your kindness to inspire me.
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Review of Turning Point  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
To Donna dear,

O to be, Jeffrey's mom
to see the kindness
and the gentleness
from Stephen
the friend

to put a foot in the door
to know he is there to care
for Jeffrey and say-
"Yay! Hooray!"
"C'mon, lets play our game today!"

My review in a poem to you, for your kind review and Gps.
embe,that cares
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Review of "I Can Make It!"  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to grope along the slippery path
searching for my way home,

somewhere up ahead
for daddy waiting there,

to know I can go on
and hold his hand.

But then he disappears
for me to follow,

his voice so clear
to bring me near,

the path I know
soon we will be home.

My thanks to you in a poem, for this lovely inspiring story.

embe, that cares
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
O what a bother I am to God
the arrogance of me
too busy with myself
to be helping someone else,

or maybe to forgive myself
for the drunk that I have been
to annoy and dismay him,

in my unacceptability
of his love for me
who now needs to bow my knee,

for him to set me free
my life to be
dedicated to him.

I feel your confusion in this well written account of a wasted life, that I understand too well, for I have seen it too.

embe,that cares
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Review of Depression  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember the silence
and the blank stare
of my daughter-Tracy,

lying in bed
not knowing
i'm worried,

but insensitive
to her weeping there-
not knowing how to say,

Dad, you will never know
how this silence
is destroying me,

and I cannot understand
the reason why
I am this way.

Yes! Dear Warrior Mom,
I do have sympathy for you.

Thanks for speaking out on a difficult subject, that is hard for others to understand.

Your kind reviews are so appreciated, coming from a proffesional like you.

embe
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Review of Longing  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O to know the Brandiwyn
to love her man
whose crafted words
do lay him bare

with pleading prayer
to kiss a soft embrace
her face so fair
lying waiting there

so cold alone
in nights air
for passion burn
to ne'er be mine.

My tribute to you in poem form, for your lovely well written poem, that will inspire others to write the way you do.

embe, that cares
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Review of I Cry Silently  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI the Angel that would think of me
to write a poem about my misery
when I was young and afraid
not knowing why or what I did
to deserve the horrors, not yet
forgotten in my nightly dreams.

I have heard more that a hundred
"I am so sorry, Son,"
but the next blow
takes all the sorry's away
to another day
where he waits again.

Perhaps you will read my latest poem -
"Therfore I Cry."

This was my life that I try to forget.

embe
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to dream
to be a pirate
with a lovely
Lady

that takes
my breath away
for another day
in May
where we lay
safely.

There
on the cliff
by the rocky lighthouse
dreaming the night
away

For me
to propose to her
and marry her in May
today.

My thanks to you, for your kind review.
Bless you.
embe
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
To the archer
with vision strong

to hold the bow
the arrow straight

a squint to sight
the paper thin

blue and white
of centre soft

the hit so slow
now the silence

to stand
the champion.

Thanks for the well structured, informative poem of an Archer, that I enjoyed reading.

embe
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Review of The Truth?  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O for the truth to be known
of the horror and pain
suffered by a child of love,

who trusted and believed
in a man with a plan to
lie and cheat his way,

into her unexpecting heart
that longs to fly away
to hide from yesterday.

My thanks to you, for your kind review.

I pray that your hurt will go away.
embe,that cares
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Review of IN THE GREEN  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
To the Saint ,with the imagination of a well trained trooper. Who knows a trick or two of how to eliminate the dangerous invaders, threatening the country folk who are so afraid of the plastic bullets flying around them.

My thanks to you, for your review that means a lot to me.

Please check the following words in your story, to see if they are correct?
[ back int pod ]
[ like thing ]

Nice write.
embe
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Today you never lost a moment -
For a voice in my mind
told me to tell you -

You are so brave
to expose the mental
confusion in your brain,

that God will take away
when I pray for you today -
"Tomorrow is waiting for you."

My thanks to you, for a review that my father must be enjoying in heaven today.

God bless you for future happiness.

embe, that cares
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The tempest at bay
I like the way
you say -

Say to me
and set me free
for others to see,

what a fool
I've been
not to see,

that you
can write and
sing a song,

that will
last for ever
in eternity.

My thanks to you, for the kind review and spell mistake that means so much to me
to improve.

Your fine poem is all you need to know - that you are going places in your life of music, which I wish you all the success you deserve.

embe, that cares
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Review of Fantasy girl  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To the Klear minded Michelle
the Berardo fantacy girl
living in a new world,

but lost in the real world
in the fantacy of time
with her dreams of another day -

Where with patience, she waits
as living proof
that it can be done.

My thanks to you, for your kind review that means so much to me.
embe, that cares.
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Review of FREEDOM'S KEY  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The freedom's key
is for us to see,

the wisdom of the
wise and innocent,

that is now our own
"Countrymom" -
Who speaks to us today.

May she be with us
forever and a day
where embe prays
for her, today.
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Review of That Old Car  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now that's what I call a perfect write.

A journey of a boy to seek what others cannot see, because they do not believe in cars that are old and abondoned by men, who are too afraid to search for the truth and the superstition that will set their minds free.

My thanks to you for the generous reviews that I do not deserve.

May the pennies come rolling in for the upgrade.

embe, that cares.
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Review of The Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Not too late
for the random
Angel,

to wait
with an ache
for a rose

given in her hand
by the boy
she loved for so long.

But now in a dream
in time far away
a shadow waits

for her fate-
The rose withered
broken on the ground.

embe, that cares
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Review of A Pirate's Life  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
SoCalScribe
you and me -
Looking for a pirate
to see,
if he will
meet us at sea
and marry us
with respect
that we demand,
as pirates of the seas
in the Caribbean sun.

My thanks to you, for the kind review that means so much to me.
embe, that cares.
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Review of A MYSTERY TO ME  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
To the kind and gentle soul
that is our own
dear caring Countrymom.

A message of hope
she brings in words
of wisdom from all her years,
where she helps many to believe
and pray for Godly ways
to take away our sins.

A treasure in deed
"She Is."
May God bless her today
I pray.
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