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Review of On Progress  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)

O to be a man alone
to stand on a pole,
to tickle my feet
below the blue sky.

A fleecy cloud
for a canopy
covering me
under the sun;

the world round;
now flying away
on a journey,

to Mumbai;
there to see
Jyothi crying.

A poem for you -
from your poem
that inspired me
to review - On Progress.

"A super poem"
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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi the writer to review my poem recently.

Herewith my review of -
"Sinners Redemption"

A great write of yours, that grips the readers attention right at the start of the episode.
Very descriptive imagery that flows freely, uncomplicated for the reader to follow the tale, wanting it to continue in future chapters.

Well done and good luck for the future.

embe, to care

Simply Positive Review
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Review of Supergirl  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bob from the County Krypton.

A Superman with a plan to clone
a Supergirl - Lyla Delight
floating toward him in a crystal
to kiss Kal-El.

Her eyes so blue, to fool a fool
like me to believe, Clark Kent
returned to the Daily Planet.

There to marry, Lisa Loss Cord
her cable to connect the news.

embe, confused to thank you! "A Bob for a review."

Simply Positive Review
Image - 1460626.
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
To my Countrymom.

You are the soul
a footprint in my life
to read a lovely poem;
your family round the table
the turkey on the plates with pride;
to put away your cares, on this Thanksgiving Day.

May God bless you
and your family;
for me to care.

embe
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Review of Queen of Swords  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
Abvyette!
The queen of poets
a name to remember
in my twiligth night
many moons ago.

embe, the name
lost touch with you
walking the hallways
in my memory
no one knows me.

To write you a little poem
from your words of wisdom
a poem to inspire many.

embe, thanking you

Simply Positive Review - Image 1460626
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Review of Age 19  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
So proud a mother
to have a daughter
smiling winsomely

to hold a teddy
tight in her arms
as a tiny child

so long ago
now a grown up girl
pretty like her mother

to dream of her
singing a lovely lullaby
she remembered in a poem.


embe, in appreciation for the Gps and review.
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Review of Soul  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tis a Bob from a county
to conclude in words of old
a man named Adam
created in a day,

to be with a woman
living in a garden
under his power
for his purpose.

The theologian
to reflect the notion
a wife may cry
for a divorce.

My review to you
for your fine insight
described in your article.

embe, in appreciation for the review of my poem.
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Review of A Sailor's Heart  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
To a child of Jesus
from one who believes
to review your poem.

A lovely line or two
to share your love
a dream come true
waiting in Puerto Rico
across the sea so blue.

Your poem flows with the longing for a loved one far away.

Perhaps you could consider the following suggestion.

In my heart the blast explodes

I'm a sailor on the ocean deep

embe, to care
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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Drowning like you
in silent screams
of being abused,

I am a child
lost in fear
beaten blue,

by the brute
my stepfather
cursing me,

what a sissy
to be afraid
hiding away,

till I find you
with a strap
to be a man.

My poem to you
for your courage
to write bruised
by abuse.

embe, to care
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Review of Heaven's Gates  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
To Caerberu to write
to erase
a memory of life
in coldness
of strife
to save lives
the heaven's to open
the gates.

My little poem to you, from your words that captures one's imagination.
Your poem to remember from a new found friend.

embe, to say Hi.
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to find a friend
filling my view
to know,

a place to breathe
then disappear
into space,

to fade so serene
in a stockade
engulfing,

compounding me
I cease to exist
tanspicuous.

My thanks to you in a poem
in your words of a journey
a place to disappear.

Great write and nice to meet you.
embe
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Review of Awaiting Wisdom  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to see the image
mirrored in a view
waiting to listen,

who and what I am
to seek the key
standing before me,

a mystery to unravel
my point of view
of finding one's self,

in words of wisdom
from life's experience
to know the ending.

Dear Audra,
My thanks to you in a poem, from your inspiring poem and reviewing my story to improve.

embe, in appreciation
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Review of She Struggles  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O Donna,

I am so sorry to know
you struggle with your child
and worry with a divorce to come
as you struggle with days and nights
in fear pain and doubts of the burdens that you feel
waiting there in faith for God to come and heal your soul.

I will pray for you tonight
that your deepest wishes will come true
to be the gifted writer that you are to me in this poem.

embe, to care for you
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Review of On Gray  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a world of white
below the night,

I see the gray
within my eyes,

a rainbow bright
to shine on me,

Quiet with gray
emerin disengaging.

My little poem to you, from your most inspiring poem.

So nice to meet a great writer like you.
embe, to care
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Review of Fleeing Bones  
Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O for a negative
to see a fleeing bone
that I may write
the words in a poem,

to flee transfixed
from clues to reside
in a finger print
saved photographically,

an element of surprise
the lens to see the victim.

My thanks to you in a poem, from your insightful, delightful poem.

embe, a friend to review.
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Review of MIDNIGHT SCREAMS  
Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To a Countrymom that cares
to write a line against drunken driving
for those who dare for the fun out there
until the wheels are spinning in the air
the broken bodies lying on the ground
families crying too late to hold them dear
the funeral waits for those who die drunken.

embe, in sympathy
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Review of Child's Play  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a child
in the circle of life
simple and innocent
perhaps guillible
to forget sometimes
the dangers there,

when he is older
to be a senior citizen
with a fragile memory
now to be protected
simply and trusting
like a child again.

My thanks to you in a poem
from your inspiring poem.

embe, in appreciation for your review.
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Review of His Eyes  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to see in a dream
his eyes a nail to claw
the lips that want to scream,

my sanity that has no choice
for his cold eyes to rest on me
now out of a dream: "Do you love me?"

Handsome, strong and secure
his voice whispers through the door
but I cannot answer: his eyes to make me weak.

My thanks to you in a poem from your inspiring poem - "His Eyes"

embe, in appreciation for your review of my poem.
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Review of Love and Life  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
To the irock of love and life
in a vortex churning fast
a discovery at last,

of a dolphin's cry
in a wave of friendship
an emotion like no other,

just you and your world
in a moment of pretence
lies your whole existence.

My thanks to you in a poem, from your delightful well structured poem.

Your review has allowed me to edit and impove my poem.

embe, in appreciation.
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to be a soul
Nicki on a journey
beyond birth and death,

passing countless stars
to race arms wide
out of breath,

to gaze in night's face
now bejewled
a masquerade ball.

My little poem from your magical poem, to say thank you for the review.

You are so kind and I appreciate the in deapth comments that are required to improve my attempt to write a short story.

Poems come so much easier for me.

embe, that cares
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Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Dear Pat,

I laud you for your great courage to adopt an abused child, as described in your
journey with attachment disorder.

I can relate to this from my own experience of child abuse, when I was young and afraid, always hiding from society.

Writing about it, has certainly helped me to bury my past.

I am indebted to you for the wonderful news of being awarded the Awardicons.

May God bless you and your family.

Your Son may contact me any time he likes, if he needs some advise of how I have healed myself.

embe, that cares.
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Review of PORTRAIT OF FALL  
Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A classic poem to reflect
the wondrous magic
of Autumn at it's best

while God's hand is busy
to paint colors in nature
for a Countrymom to rest

for she has given her best
in this poem of loving care
for us to remember Fall.

embe, at peace.
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Review of Madness  
Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Insanity
the dark abyss
to laugh in hell,

the irresponsibilty
to becon
a shattered soul,

harboring
the weariness
of demons,

to free themselves
in madness
to see the light,

waiting calmly
there for them
tonight.

My review in a poem
from your thought
provoking poem.

embe
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Review of STARLESS NIGHTS  
Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Once a Countrymom
created by God
to be a creation,

in glory to be shown
beneath the starless nights
where we see her gentle face,

for us to believe
and trust in God's
unfailing care.

How fortunate we are
for he to love us,
who read her poem.

embe, that cares
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
To a sparkling rose
Megan a mother
married with her beau
to have a son,

with memories
that he is married
playing in the snow
with presents,

from old Santa
for his wife,
mother and
proud father.

A poem to a lady
to review and share
her thoughts
with me to improve.

embe,in appreciation.
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