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Review of Rose Petals  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be the one in comeliness
for beauty to be physical
fondled by sun rays
in beads of dew
for Koyel
a girl,
that I know to be a poet
while waiting to complete her studies in mathematics
that will then multiply her skills to write many a longer versions of poetry.

embe, believing in her future.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Eileen  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to know a Del
with a crush to cry.
I love my Eileen from school
to be a Greek statue in my mind,
with long brown braided hair, the color brown.
Star smitten seeing her forty years later, my heart beating faster,
a disaster staring at me, she is a Catholic that I may not marry without a ring.

A little poem to console you.

Your friendly poet to thank you for the kind review.
embe

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
May the prince of night
undress the day
metaphorically speaking.

Written in a poem
by a lady from India;
a student named Koyel.

A new writer to me
to welcome her now
with this review to say!

"How nice to meet you
at Writing.com
to share our writing."

embe, once a newbie
helped by many to improve.

Simply Positive Review
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Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
O for a bob
to meet Jaspher
ice fishing,
chasing girls
for a bottle
of something,
smelling fishy;

some smelt
in a bucket
half hidden
from his eye;
to see him
the officer
arrest him.

Goodness knows
why he went fishing
to try and lay a girl?

Simply Positive Review
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by embe
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Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Only a countrymom
could write a poem
upon a page to say
what love means.

To end in lonliness
a struggle to be free
of heartache and pain
now only memories.

Just passing through
to a new day tomorrow
there to find peace
and happiness again.

embe, to care for you.

Simply Positive Review
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Review of Love and Romance  
Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
O to be Jay
flying around freely;
the bird with a sweet song
to sing of love and romance
for our world to be a brighter place;
where a lovely lady waits to write a story
of heartbreak that sometimes drifts bleakly by,
into our distant past, to realise it was all a dream.

A poem for Jaye
the lovely lady, I met today.

Rising Star Review.
by embe.
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Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
O to be a Judy the compassionate one
to tell of dreams of yesterday
when she was young
her parents to hold
close to her
lovingly,
but now older
to see them not so well
but still to love them in the the nursing home
celebrating Christmas with Bill
to hold her hand
shaking now
to cry
why?

My prayer for you
to see them
well.

embe

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Review of A GATE TO HELL  
Review by embe
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
No need for anyone else to enter.

Not the gate to hell.

But the contest in which to read

a perfect poem

written in style by Countrymom.

embe, delighted to read a masterpiece.

Always to remember

and tell others to read it to improve.
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Review of Bomb-Vest  
Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Michael
with a fine review
to tell me I'm brutal
the truth in many ways
some years long ago.

Now to read your poetry
to write my thoughts;
you have the talent
with a vocabulary
to fool us all.

To those who do not understand you
I feel sorry that they rated you so low.
Never ever compromise
write it as you feel it
in tune to your mind.

embe, to care

Simply Positive Review
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Review of A Woman Scorned  
Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
O to be locked in a hyperiongate
from a finger raised accusingly
to an innocent man without guilt.

Confused in a trial yet to come.

What had he done to deserve it
when all he really wanted
was to say! "No to be locked away."

by embe.

A Rising Star Review.
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
When life is like the weather
we change with the seasons
to see the sun shining bright
for the sunflowers to peep,

at the birds and butterfly's
spreading their wings to fly
way up to the blue sky so high
where God waits with a smile.

A little poem to thank you
for this creative poem
a tribute to you.

embe

Simply positive review
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
"O see an Angel"

Waiting in heaven
a gift with a smile
to meet a stranger,

recently arrived
to a mansion
called home.

Gods paradise
his son returned
scarred smiling,

with a little girl
safe in his arms
to see her daddy,

his love a light
for all to see
and believe,

that faith
is the key
to set us free.

to worship
on our knees
with hearts of glee.

My thanks to you a poet
to write a sweet rhyme
for our loving Savior today.

embe

Simply Positive Review
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to meet a poet
so sweet to write
a lenghty poem,

the journey of life
on a winding road
learning lessons,

while stumbling
along lonely
to find a way,

to a lost key
there in her hand
a new beginning.

So nice to meet you in a poem
from your inspiring words.

Perhaps your last line
could read as follows -
"There in my hand."

embe, love your writing.

Shower Acts Of Joy Review.
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Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Judy

My thanks to you, for the insight so clearly defined in your words of kindness and caring for your parents.
A lovely example to others, who sometimes give up on their ailing old folk, forgetting that they - will be old one day, waiting for someone else to pray for them.

embe, praying for you to be healed.

Simply Positive Review
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Review of My Own Rainbow  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
May the New Year Rainbow
shine a smile on the lady
vowed to to win today
victorious,

the black and grey
to disappear
the day
away.

A real smile to shine
her colors to define
and lock the door
to yesterday.


My poem to you
from your words
to inspire many;
your lovely poem.

embe, for all your kindness.

Shower Acts Of Joy
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Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
May Christmas day, be the Godly pageant
so well described in your words above -
Thoughts In The Night! 3 The Music.

For man to see and hear the beauty
of nature in an orchestra, conducted
by heavenly Angels singing praises,

to sooth man's soul, admission free.

embe, knowing it to be true.
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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To Dr. T-

I am returning your kindness.

The review and comment
on my jouney of abuse in my poem -
"Thankful For You."

Your well crafted and concice wording in your poem,is a world far from my imagination of how you lived such a lovely journey in life, to be where you are today.
A writer of note, sharing your knowledge in reviews to improve others like me, in appreciation.

Sadly, unable to come to terms with past abuse, not so easily forgiven, when blood and bruises are a way of life for far too long.

embe
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Review of Comfort Lessons  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to know
how you feel
to write a poem
with words uncomfortable;
to describe the fear and sound of pain.

The desperation;
a nightmare waiting to return
it's breath so near to shout and hit again;
as you hide your mind in the beauty of the sky.

My poem from your words
as a fellow abused and beaten soul;
knowing that your poem, is a five star description.

My congratulations to you -
The new Rising Star for us to see and read.

A Rising Star Review,
by embe
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Review of Embrace  
Review by embe
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In her embrace
with tenderness
for a lovers kiss,

she surrended
body and soul
to a shadow,

now dancing
without a name
burning with desire,

sensing her struggle
his fingers to touch
the darkness alone.

My review in a poem
inspired by your words
so well described
with inner meaning -
"The Embrace."

Shower Acts Of Joy Review
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embe to thank you - The River Story.
That means so much to me.
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Review of Petals like Time  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O how tearful to see
a petal falling down
floating softly
to remind me,

will we meet again
my mind to entwine
memories long ago
that they may return,

pulling them to me
to finally let them go
to where I do not know
waiting in desperation.

My poem to review
from your inspiring poem
that I read today, to tell you
nice to meet alexZandraLynn.

embe

Showering Acts Of Joy review
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Review of The Rose  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a child
lovely like a rose
in a garden green,

to love and care
with fragrant leaves
to watch you grow,

through stormy days
the tempest raging
your heart in despair,

waiting for a prayer
for me to hold you
my baby born a girl!

"Lovely like a rose."
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Review of I SERVED THE ARMY  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
To the Khalish that I know
to serve in the army.

Herewith my review
written as a amateur

not as one like you
a writer of note

that once reviewed
a poem of mine

the encouragement
of how to improve.

I only have one suggestion to smooth the flow of your poem.

War ensued, I thought
to do more for country
I joined the army to be
Captain, Medical Corps.

embe, in appreciation.

Simply Positive Review
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Review of IL'ja  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice write, with the ability to to keep the reader quessing, as to who and how to communicate
with a mouth full of words, on a first date; to concur that marriage is not an option in this case.

Case closed by embe to be a friendly buddy, been there, done that, for no satisfaction.
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Review of This, For You  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.5)
The kiss of the sun
is for me
a song from you
to know
we'll never part.

Whew!
I did it
with a ring
to represent
a wish come true.

For you to share
your delightful poem
with all who can read it
to know it came from you
written with love upon this page.

embe, in appreciation for a fine poet.
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Review by embe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O to be a chicken
disguised as a snake
brown and gliding
at a fast pace;

the snake to hate
the chicken
trying to be him,
stalking in a garden;

there to see
Tocal Girl,
a friend
I once knew,

with a shotgun;
to try
and pot me.
embe

A little poem
to you,
a pretty girl
from your poem;

to delight
me -
and others
who read this.

Simly Positive Review
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