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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Drowning like you
in silent screams
of being abused,

I am a child
lost in fear
beaten blue,

by the brute
my stepfather
cursing me,

what a sissy
to be afraid
hiding away,

till I find you
with a strap
to be a man.

My poem to you
for your courage
to write bruised
by abuse.

embe, to care
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Review of Heaven's Gates  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
To Caerberu to write
to erase
a memory of life
in coldness
of strife
to save lives
the heaven's to open
the gates.

My little poem to you, from your words that captures one's imagination.
Your poem to remember from a new found friend.

embe, to say Hi.
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1278
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to find a friend
filling my view
to know,

a place to breathe
then disappear
into space,

to fade so serene
in a stockade
engulfing,

compounding me
I cease to exist
tanspicuous.

My thanks to you in a poem
in your words of a journey
a place to disappear.

Great write and nice to meet you.
embe
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Review of Awaiting Wisdom  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to see the image
mirrored in a view
waiting to listen,

who and what I am
to seek the key
standing before me,

a mystery to unravel
my point of view
of finding one's self,

in words of wisdom
from life's experience
to know the ending.

Dear Audra,
My thanks to you in a poem, from your inspiring poem and reviewing my story to improve.

embe, in appreciation
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Review of She Struggles  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O Donna,

I am so sorry to know
you struggle with your child
and worry with a divorce to come
as you struggle with days and nights
in fear pain and doubts of the burdens that you feel
waiting there in faith for God to come and heal your soul.

I will pray for you tonight
that your deepest wishes will come true
to be the gifted writer that you are to me in this poem.

embe, to care for you
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Review of On Gray  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a world of white
below the night,

I see the gray
within my eyes,

a rainbow bright
to shine on me,

Quiet with gray
emerin disengaging.

My little poem to you, from your most inspiring poem.

So nice to meet a great writer like you.
embe, to care
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Review of Fleeing Bones  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
O for a negative
to see a fleeing bone
that I may write
the words in a poem,

to flee transfixed
from clues to reside
in a finger print
saved photographically,

an element of surprise
the lens to see the victim.

My thanks to you in a poem, from your insightful, delightful poem.

embe, a friend to review.
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Review of MIDNIGHT SCREAMS  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
To a Countrymom that cares
to write a line against drunken driving
for those who dare for the fun out there
until the wheels are spinning in the air
the broken bodies lying on the ground
families crying too late to hold them dear
the funeral waits for those who die drunken.

embe, in sympathy
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Review of Child's Play  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a child
in the circle of life
simple and innocent
perhaps guillible
to forget sometimes
the dangers there,

when he is older
to be a senior citizen
with a fragile memory
now to be protected
simply and trusting
like a child again.

My thanks to you in a poem
from your inspiring poem.

embe, in appreciation for your review.
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Review of His Eyes  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to see in a dream
his eyes a nail to claw
the lips that want to scream,

my sanity that has no choice
for his cold eyes to rest on me
now out of a dream: "Do you love me?"

Handsome, strong and secure
his voice whispers through the door
but I cannot answer: his eyes to make me weak.

My thanks to you in a poem from your inspiring poem - "His Eyes"

embe, in appreciation for your review of my poem.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be trapped in the freedom of love lost
the door now open to a new fresh start
where burdens are washed away
to yesterdays bitter memories
of sorrows now healed
for a new day
to love
again.

Hello Beth
My review in a poem, from your poem that was a pleasure to read.

embe, that cares.
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Review of Love and Life  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
To the irock of love and life
in a vortex churning fast
a discovery at last,

of a dolphin's cry
in a wave of friendship
an emotion like no other,

just you and your world
in a moment of pretence
lies your whole existence.

My thanks to you in a poem, from your delightful well structured poem.

Your review has allowed me to edit and impove my poem.

embe, in appreciation.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to be a soul
Nicki on a journey
beyond birth and death,

passing countless stars
to race arms wide
out of breath,

to gaze in night's face
now bejewled
a masquerade ball.

My little poem from your magical poem, to say thank you for the review.

You are so kind and I appreciate the in deapth comments that are required to improve my attempt to write a short story.

Poems come so much easier for me.

embe, that cares
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Review of PORTRAIT OF FALL  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A classic poem to reflect
the wondrous magic
of Autumn at it's best

while God's hand is busy
to paint colors in nature
for a Countrymom to rest

for she has given her best
in this poem of loving care
for us to remember Fall.

embe, at peace.
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Review of Madness  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Insanity
the dark abyss
to laugh in hell,

the irresponsibilty
to becon
a shattered soul,

harboring
the weariness
of demons,

to free themselves
in madness
to see the light,

waiting calmly
there for them
tonight.

My review in a poem
from your thought
provoking poem.

embe
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Review of STARLESS NIGHTS  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Once a Countrymom
created by God
to be a creation,

in glory to be shown
beneath the starless nights
where we see her gentle face,

for us to believe
and trust in God's
unfailing care.

How fortunate we are
for he to love us,
who read her poem.

embe, that cares
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1292
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
To a sparkling rose
Megan a mother
married with her beau
to have a son,

with memories
that he is married
playing in the snow
with presents,

from old Santa
for his wife,
mother and
proud father.

A poem to a lady
to review and share
her thoughts
with me to improve.

embe,in appreciation.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
On a day long ago
I saw a girl
ten years old,

Kay
was her name
with a smile,

to hold my hand
in the little church
where we lived,

down the lane
by the bay
to swim all day.

Then one day
she ran away
so far away,

but today
I met her again
In a note,

that she wrote
to say
let's go to church again.

My sincere thanks to you in a poem, for your understaning of a difficult time in my life.

embe, in appreciation.
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Review of Miracles  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Shari.

This is a great short story ,written in a style to keep one guessing,right to the end
where the red faces slowly turn away to shame for judging the book by it's cover.

My thanks to you, for your kind review of my poem.

embe, in appreciation.
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Review of Midnight Prayers  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O how lovely a dedication
to Pumpkin -
Your dear orange cat,

who sat on your lap
to the tick of the clock
for a stroke of your hand,

so soft in the night
to dream of the stars
that will shine in her eyes,

to remember the days
when she was a kitten
to purr in your lap.

Dear Dorianne,
my thanks to you in a poem
for your kind review.

embe, that cares
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1296
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
O to be Cathrerine
searching the blue sea
to see, fifty years passed,

with Joe in her arms
and love in his eyes
on their honeymoon,

but no to reality
with tears in her eyes
to open, Joe's gone

away into the sea
to wait for her
on their anniversary.

My review in a poem, for you to find happiness in your dreams.

embe, that cares
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Review of Shadow Wars  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
To Kl,

Who adores to write
with a pen in hand

for a shadow to follow
in tears and fears

for the dark in the hall
turning to the light

to see a silhouette
looking into the night

for a movement
laying on the table,

"A war of shadows."

My review in a poem for you.

embe
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Review of The Flower Girl  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
HI and please understand that I am slightly intimidated with being a buddy reviewer for a professional like you.

Firstly, my deep appreciation for your kind and clear reviews, of my poems that will futher inspire me to improve,

This is my first attempt at a short story, so here it is.

My first thoughts while reading your captivating account of the florists delema, was that you were in fact telling a story about yourself, which is why it is a five star story for me.

Two comments are as follows:-

Kenny were just --Perhaps [ Kenny was just ]

you do really beautiful work --Perhaps [ youre work is very beautiful ]

In kindness,
embe
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Review of Borrowed time  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
O to be a pressed flower
in a book of poems

a fragrant skeleton of time
meticulously preserved

a blurred featureless form
appearing in motionless time

a painted hue in proportion
to dwell in deceptive time

a past left behind
so unkind for a flower.

My thanks to you in a poem, for your incisive review and suggestions.

embe,that cares
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Review of Never Again  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
How brave can a child of twelve be, when confronted with the choice to run away ,or stay and shoot the abusive father, that beat her mother like the coward that he is, too afraid to stand up and say -Yes I am a bastard and need to run away and leave you to build a new future with a kind man that will love you and your daughter, to live without fear and grow old together.

Krisi, I laud you for your courage to write this.

My thanks for the wonderful news -The Awardicon and Gps.

Go in peace,
embe,that cares
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