TO Our dear Darling Country Mom.
The one, that everyone looks up to, for the wonderful work done on Writing.Co
Your beautiful poem is a tribute to the aged, that so unfortunately have to bear the pain of getting old all alone.
My prayers are with you today.
Thank you for your kind review that means more to me that anything else on this site.
HI IdaLin and a happy New Year to you.
I hope that the sly old Santa kept his word and delivered your presents on Christmas day.
Loved your poem that has a beautiful flow as it tells the tale of sadness and then the surprise at the end.
Hello! Dear French and so nice to read an excellent poem by you, that captured the inner meaning of your reference to the ways of old in Babylon, the faithless city where many still dwell today.
Your english is fine and will not detract from your ability to write on this site.
I welcome you as a newbie and wish you success in this journey of joy.
In Kindness,
embe
O Dear Wise Aleta; Who can sum up the true meaning of faith the way it should be, many will thank you for writing this, but alas, with time they fail for the reasons you have exposed.
I thank you for reviewing my honest exposure of myself, that has lead me to my Savior.
May God bless you and your family.
"Happy Christmas"
HI Dear Emily J, and so nice to meet a fellow writer like you, that can express yourself so well with few words, that have more meaning than many others that write reams of nothing.
Thanks for reviewing my poem and Yes, your suggestions are well founded.
Bless you and your family this Christmas time.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Dorianne and so nice to meet a girl like you, that has an engineering brain to write a poem or two.
Scotty was my favorite when first I saw the movie that
I still remember today.
Thanks for sharing these memories that you have captured so well in your writing.
An extra special thanks for the kind review and gift points, for my poem;Writing.Com.
Hello and I am so glad to read your story of life that sometimes hurts, but if we deal with it the way you have described, the healing will begin and we will be at peace knowing that our loved one are at rest
Your story is well written and holds the readers attention to the end.
It would seem that there is more to follow in future chapters.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
HI Magoo you wonderful writer, who has summed up my past in a wonderful way, when I was married in May so long ago.
Such a pity to see that you are not writing much any more, but if you do- please tell me soon.
I am truly thankful for your kind words of reviewing my poem.
Go in peace
embe
Hello the haunted Sherri, who can write and describe with such explicit imagery, the tale of those behind the haunted shadows, where gruesome creatures wait for embe, who is in a state of shock with the unbelievable news that he has received another Awardicon, from the kindest reviewer he has ever known.
Sherri! You blow my mind away.
What more can I say, but thankyou in kindness.
embe
Hello kind Clarissa who took the time to review my poem, with lovely words that mean so much to me.
Your poem-"Ode to a Certain Boy"
Is for me, a lovely way to express your feelings of love for this boy that you have written so well.
Perhaps a follow up to this-would be a story of how he feels for you.
Keep writing, it gets easier as you grow older.
In Kindness,
embe
Dear Sherri
I am truly blessed to have found a treasure like you- An inspiration to so many like me, who are trying to find ourselves in our writing.
Your piece-"A Bit About Me" is how I would like to be.
Thank you for the kind review of my poem about Patience, who is an orphan that I am fostering.
Her name is Simone and she calls me-Daddy.
Thanks for the wisdom of your words above.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and thank you for this disturbing write which I can only attempt to review as follows:
Stanzas
[1]The opening stanza sets the scene of terror
[2]Seeking comfort to be away from here
[3]Now the reality
[4]Of acceptancy of what is to come
[5]Posing questions of hope
[6]Destroyed by a blow
[7]That shadowes the inner hurt
[8]Now transposed into hope in the light of the mind
[9]Undone by demons eyes
[10]To the questions of shame
[11]Turned into evil
[12]Of silent release
[13]Returning to normality
[14]Of forgiveness before the demons return
[15]And the final escape into the universe.
Not an easy read to write and understand-The Author to be applauded.
Hello Jusy Lola [For me you are more than, Just Lola]
Thank you for reviewing my work.
Your poem-"Anyway" is for me a beautiful play on words
that exposes the true inner feelings of disappointment that we all experience in life.
Thanks for sharing this
In Kindness
embe
Hello and nice to meet you, who have the ability to clearly capture with compassion the ending of a person's life.
Your poem will certainly touch the souls of those, who like me- have lost a loved one in this way.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club where I trust you will meet new friends like me, who love to write.
In your well written poem, you have captured the inner feeling of the artist in a way that exposes the true meaning of the love to perform to your audience.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Sandy and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your poem so beautiful written, captures the true essence of love the way it used to be-But now, very seldom seen in this world gone mad.
A privilege to read
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends
Your poem is written with a lot of emotion and pain of being alone and I truly hope, this is not your true situation.
May I suggest the following to improve the flow of the poem:
to reside-----[to go]
only drives me---[that drives me]
Take care and keep writing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Iris and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends like me, who love to write.
Your poem has a nice feeling to it, but lacks the flow that will earn a better rating.
One typo--forse---"force"
May I suggest- That you use this opportunity to experiment and better the flow.
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet a writer like you, that is not afraid to expose the truth of injustice that flows through the world today.
Bravo for sharing this well written poem, so full of meaning.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends that share your dream of writing.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you who can write a poem that describes your feelings in a vivid way.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
You ask many questions without any answers in your writing and it poses the question for the reader-Is this about you, or only a figment of your imagination.
Nice write
In Kindness,
embe
Hello again and I share your pain in this heart felt personal cry for forgiveness.
A beautifully written poem by an accomplished writer like you that deserves all the high reviews in your potfolio.
To London you must go and finish your book, before you loose the urge for it.
So nice to have met you
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet a lovely person such as you who can write fabulously.
Your poem captures the inner meaning of the hopelessness of the homeless souls, seen all over the world today where no one cares.
I help out in our local shelter for the homeless and have cried many bitter tears for their plight in life.
God bless you for caring
In Kindness,
embe
PS- Thanks so much for reviewing and gift points too.
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This well written piece that feels so real in it's description of a soldier coming home to his loved one,
is a wonderful way to start as a newbie to this site.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your sad poem, reflecting the hurt of a relationship gone wrong, is a nice start as a newbie to this site.
Your awakening and getting away from, what can only be a bad mistake, takes a lot of courage.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you, who have taken the time to write about your faith.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
As a Christian I can relate to this well written analogy of Christ/yourself on the cross forgiven by his grace, to set you free.
I pray that others reading this, will find their faith today.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
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