To the Saint ,with the imagination of a well trained trooper. Who knows a trick or two of how to eliminate the dangerous invaders, threatening the country folk who are so afraid of the plastic bullets flying around them.
My thanks to you, for your review that means a lot to me.
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A journey of a boy to seek what others cannot see, because they do not believe in cars that are old and abondoned by men, who are too afraid to search for the truth and the superstition that will set their minds free.
My thanks to you for the generous reviews that I do not deserve.
May God bless you for the courage and wisdom inherited from your Mother, to share this most touching Eulogy for a Mom that shines above most others that I have met in my life.
Truly an Angel in heaven today, you must be missing her now.
SoCalScribe
you and me -
Looking for a pirate
to see,
if he will
meet us at sea
and marry us
with respect
that we demand,
as pirates of the seas
in the Caribbean sun.
My thanks to you, for the kind review that means so much to me.
embe, that cares.
Perfection from a Momma unicorn
on a hot August morning,
is where she saw her real Momma
laughing jubilantly
in the fields of wheat,
with sweetness in her speech
where she woke up in her bed
a fairy tale in her head.
My thanks to you, for your kind review that means so much to me.
To the Shannon fair -
Perhaps, the Irish Shannon
from County Fair,
who wants to be a nurse
to search for a pill box
to care for the folk
that need it the most.
My thanks to you, for a fab review and Wow!
A Merit Badge too.
Dear Poga
A writer who knows
how to expose
the inner feelings
of her aching heart,
so confused
in feelings of emotion
within her tears
where she hides
all alone in fear.
My thanks to you, for the wonderful review that means so much to me.
What can one say, when you view the tremendous responce to Sherri's most well organized contest,where so many poets have been inspired to write the high quality work seen on this site.
There are not enough words, that I can think of to say! - "Thank you".
All I can say -
Is Sherri,
You have us amazed
as we go on our way
to continue to write
the poems that bring joy
for all to see and read
once a week.
May God ensure-
That the day of reckoning
will safely pass you by,
for the bitter tears
that you have cried
for the rash decisions
innocently made
in a time of strife
within your life.
My thanks to you, for your kind review of my short story that needs serious editing.
"Poetry comes easier for me".
To Countrymom!- The mighty oak,
seen in beauty of her words
of how to trust in God,
to live a life
where love has found a way
to ease the troubles of the day.
May his light shine from above
to take our burdens away,
as we forgive and forget
and pray to live a life
that others will see in us,
the witneses of God's glory today.
My heart felt thanks to you!-
The inspiration needed
to write a poem or two,
for Jesus to say-
I told you, embe;
"Countrymom is my messenger on earth today".
Here come Arakun!-
The judge that we need
to read our poems
and story tales
that need editing
as she suggests
or face the wrath
that she can bite
with her angry teeth.
For me, who is
hiding in fear
I hope she will not find me
until my edit is cleared,
for her to say-
"I told you so".
My thanks to you, for wise counsel.
embe,that cares.
The fisher lady brought tears to my face, as she so courageously faced the turmoil in her heart, that tore her apart at the tragic loss of her child!- A daughter that couldn't stay - But wait for the day, to open her smiling eyes and see her saviour, that is in heaven with her today.
A feather duster to wipe away
the crumbs beneath the table
on late November day-
Is the day we celebrate,
down by the bay where we pray
for peace to spread across the world today.
My thanks to you, for the inspiring review that made my day-Today.
I have recently returned from a wonderful journey through Ireland and can relate to the excellent oatmeal I ate along the way, while writing my poem.
So nice to meet you!-"A writer of note"-That I could never be.
Shannon with a smile, to delight the readers that write a funny story for her, to see if she can laugh with us, who are brave enough to accept a star ot two or a review with gift points too.
What will life be?-Without Shannon!- To delight readers like me.
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