Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This beautifully written poem, full of sincere feelings for a loved one now gone, is a lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
God bless you for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends
This well thought out and beautifully written poem, is a lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
I have one comment {it is only an opinion)
Hello Gracie
So nice to meet a fellow writer like you that can capture emotions in a short poem, that many others would need a full page to do.
Sad that in the end, he would walk away leaving you lonely and wanting more.
True emotions flow from your pen
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you, who are not afraid to speak about God in your poems.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This is a beautiful, well written poem that has a special ending where the clouds affirm Gods presence.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness with Gods blessing
embe
Hello and so nice to meet someone like you that cares enough to express the sadness that reality exposes when a child has died.
Not an easy read for many who cannot face this pain in words, that you have captured so vividly.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
A lovely, beautifully written poem with tender feelings that grow is a lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
May your portfolio be full of the love that you show.
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet someone like you that will not compromise on the true values of life.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends and not the confused person who rated you 2.5
This beautiful tale is rich in the values of life, for those not so blind that cannot see.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet someone like you that is not afraid or embarrassed to write about a difficult subject that many cannot understand, so all they do is criticize.
With a will like that, I know you can beat this burden on your back.
Faith comes at the right time if you let it.
It worked for me when I struggled like you.
God bless
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This is a lovely poem full of inspiration that grows as it flows, leaving one with a feeling of hope from above.
Thank you for sharing
God bless
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet a Christian like you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends- who if needed will come to you for advice on 'HOW TO BE SAVED'
Your analogy on faith is well written and easy to understand.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club ,where I trust you will meet new friends.
The person who rated your story-2.5 Must be an idiot.
Your writing is fine and one can easily follow the interesting plot of words that describe this tale.
Please check typos:-
vacent---vacant
thoguht---thought
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club,where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your well written poem on love that may break your glass heart, is a nice start as a newbie to this site.
Please check following:-
I will do this you
I will do this "for" you
Thanks for sharing
embe
Hello and nice to meet you, Who is not afraid to speak your mind on the truth that so many avoid.
Your analogy of the subject matter should be published for all to see and discuss, to free the minds that are blind.
Thanks for the interesting read, so nicely done.
In appreciation,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet someone like you that can share with others, the pain of the past that takes time to heal.
I have also been there, but did not have the courage to expose it, until recently when I started writing about it in my poems on this site.
God bless you for this excellent write, that will teach others to come to terms with their hurt.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club,where I trust you will meet many new friends.
A beautiful inspirational poem with lots of meaning, so well described by you. What a way to start as a newbie to this site--Nice work and thanks for sharing.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
May your well written poem liberate your mind and show others what music can do, if they really try and listen to the message.
Thanks for the write
embe
Hello and so nice to meet a Mother like you who cares.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This beautifully written inspiring account of your journey of fear and hope, will certainly convey a message of hope to others like you, who are experiancing fear that you went through.
There are some grammar errors that can easily be edited out, but they do not detract from this heartfelt story.
God bless you,
In Kindness
embe
Hello and so nice to meet a Christian like you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This beautifully written poem of seeking faith and glorifying God through Jesus, is a wonderfull start as a newbie to this site.
Thanks for sharing and God bless You
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This beautifully written poem [ You have entered- Other ]Is a heartfelt tribute to a father, that you have captured so well in your words.
A lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet a poet like you, who can write a decent poem that has rhythm and rhyme and a message too.
A nice start as a newbie to this site, but already a seasoned writer of note.
I trust you will meet new friends here
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet someone new to this site.
A warm welcome as a newbie and I trust you will meet many new friends here.
A very well written poem that oozes with rhythm and rhyme as the story line unfolds, keeping the reader quessing to it's end
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your short poem, told with lots of feeling of the love you are expressing, is a lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
Keep on writing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This excellent poem is a wonderful way to start as a newbie to this site.
Your interpretation of my Muse, should be included in a Thesaurus of english words and phrases, to teach others how to use it.
Truly an inspirational write
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club,where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your short little poem is well written with feeling, that paints a picture of the ever changing seasons.
A nice way to start as a newbie to this site.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your fine poem is dazzling in it's content of honouring God for his gifts to man.
Thanks for sharing it and may God bless you.
In Kindness,
embe
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