Hello Sandy and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your poem so beautiful written, captures the true essence of love the way it used to be-But now, very seldom seen in this world gone mad.
A privilege to read
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends
Your poem is written with a lot of emotion and pain of being alone and I truly hope, this is not your true situation.
May I suggest the following to improve the flow of the poem:
to reside-----[to go]
only drives me---[that drives me]
Take care and keep writing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Iris and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends like me, who love to write.
Your poem has a nice feeling to it, but lacks the flow that will earn a better rating.
One typo--forse---"force"
May I suggest- That you use this opportunity to experiment and better the flow.
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet a writer like you, that is not afraid to expose the truth of injustice that flows through the world today.
Bravo for sharing this well written poem, so full of meaning.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends that share your dream of writing.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you who can write a poem that describes your feelings in a vivid way.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
You ask many questions without any answers in your writing and it poses the question for the reader-Is this about you, or only a figment of your imagination.
Nice write
In Kindness,
embe
Hello again and I share your pain in this heart felt personal cry for forgiveness.
A beautifully written poem by an accomplished writer like you that deserves all the high reviews in your potfolio.
To London you must go and finish your book, before you loose the urge for it.
So nice to have met you
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet a lovely person such as you who can write fabulously.
Your poem captures the inner meaning of the hopelessness of the homeless souls, seen all over the world today where no one cares.
I help out in our local shelter for the homeless and have cried many bitter tears for their plight in life.
God bless you for caring
In Kindness,
embe
PS- Thanks so much for reviewing and gift points too.
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This well written piece that feels so real in it's description of a soldier coming home to his loved one,
is a wonderful way to start as a newbie to this site.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your sad poem, reflecting the hurt of a relationship gone wrong, is a nice start as a newbie to this site.
Your awakening and getting away from, what can only be a bad mistake, takes a lot of courage.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you, who have taken the time to write about your faith.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
As a Christian I can relate to this well written analogy of Christ/yourself on the cross forgiven by his grace, to set you free.
I pray that others reading this, will find their faith today.
God bless you
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to hear from you, with this wonderful poem that captures one's imagination of a canyon so well described.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where others like me are waiting to see more of our newbies work.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
HI and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This analogy on love and family is Awesome in it's uncomplicated inner feeling of desperation to find the answers that so many of us are seeking.
A super write with conviction-It takes my breath away.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet a writer like you, that can write a darn good poem.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Thanks for sharing this well constructed and imaginary
vision that seems almost real as it exposes the savagery of wars of old.
Well done
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet a poet like you, writing at forty three
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Nice analogy of being young and not wanting to accept getting old--Lucky that you have such a lovely family to bale you out.
Thanks for the write
In Kindness,
embe
HI and nice to meet the real you, who would like to be a Raccoon in the Algonquin Indian World.
Now I know how you write so well and can relate to your beautiful poem that will keep the children awake as the story unfolds.
Thank you for sharing your professionalism as a writer of note.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet a writer like you, that can inspire with a pen.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your poem so well written as clear as the sky where you fly, is a lovely way to start as a newbie to this site.
All I can say, is follow your dreams-Shaunty- and write.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you, who can write a pretty poem.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Sweet Reverie-
You have captured this dreamy scene in a wonderful way and then suddenly reminded the reader of it's reality.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you, who have given us wise words of yourself in your portfolio.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Your beautifully written poem, with so much clarity, is a wonderful tribute to your mother and I hope that others will learn to love like this.
Thanks for sharing
God bless
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This heart felt account of inner conflict is well written and exposes the problems that so many people have today.
Pity that the previous reviewer did not see it.
My personal view is that I would delete the last sentence, which is a question and spoils the beautiful flow of the story.
In Kindness,
embe
HI and so nice to meet a fellow writer like you, that tries to help others to do what you do.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Loved this well written poem with images of beauty in a tree.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
HI and thank you for your insight into the deapths of the tsunami disaster.
I lost family in that and have expressed my feelings in a poem in my portfolio.
In Kindness,
embe
Hi,
Visited you again.
This is a wonderful poem that captures many inner feelings of a dream that may, one day come true.
Lovely analogy of two strangers connected through technology over time and space.
Thanks for sharing
God bless
In Kindness
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
This delightful little poem so well written,is a wonderful way to start as a newbie to this site.
Thank you for sharing the experiance
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Ivan,
Disturbing and frightning.
How did you have the courage to clearly describe this episode in your life, without it re-consuming you?
Thanks for sharing and God bless you.
In Empathy,
embe
Hello and so nice to meet you, who can take a word or two and turn them into a song.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
Love your work, so keep writing for us while you settle down on our site
In Kindness,
embe
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