All alone Pandora walks and talks as the wind in her hair follows a beat, of adrenaline that washes away her fear and anger, left on the paths beneath the trees, where at last she finds peace.
My thanks to you - The wonderful writer that has so much talent.
I do believe, you have made an error in sending me
2000 Gps and will return it as instructed by you.
To Sherri who never stops caring for others, the cNotes are awesome and such a wonderful gift to send to those who we love- like you! Who mean so much to me.
Please accept one of the cNotes above in lieu of your birthday, [A day I do not know] and advise me how to pay the Gps required.
My sincere thanks for being placed second in your contest, and the kind review and comments for-"When I was a Child of Five", that is a pleasure to receive.
Anita, the Gypsyrose that grows in winds of rage, where winter blows ice and snow with chilling pain that touches her soul, until the turning point returns with lessons that leave her rage behind.
Thankyou for your kind review,a friend in deed that I will always remember.
To Shannon, I offer a bonnet for a sonnet that has flowers of rainbow colors, in the fields of fragrant grasses beneath a shady tree, where our lives have just begun with a proposal of marriage.
Sorry for the duplicated entry, that you have so kindly reviewed with gift point too.
Hello the Arizona Man-Allen James,so nice to meet you
who can write a darn good poem that flows with inner meaning of the moment in time, that you have so expertly described.
I thank you for your kind review of my sad experience in life, that now seems a million years ago.
May your years ahead, fill the pages of forgotten dreams that are still in your head.
Hello Salvador and nice to meet you who so kindly reviewed my writing.
Your well written analogy of passion has a lovely message of hope, for those who have lost the ability to see the real world around them.
I trust that your message will inspire those that read it, to look and see the beauty that exists if they have the passion to seek it.
May I suggest you make a small alteration as follows:-
Without any passion(no emotion can exist)for it is only------
In Kindness,
embe
HI Archie and so nice to meet a fellow writer like you, that can paint such a vivid picture of the journey through the lives of the innocent and the old abused souls, in your beautifully constructed poem.
Enjoyed your take on the Tsunami-But for me it was the reality of the loss of a family member in my poem-"Tsunami"
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Hello CherokeeIrishPixie a joy to see on this site.
Your wonderful words of inspiration for my poem, tells me that you are one who believes in facing up to the hurts of the past, that you have so aptly captured in your fabulous poem-"Conquered"
May all who read this poem, find comfort to look ahead and change their lives as you have.
TO Our dear Darling Country Mom.
The one, that everyone looks up to, for the wonderful work done on Writing.Co
Your beautiful poem is a tribute to the aged, that so unfortunately have to bear the pain of getting old all alone.
My prayers are with you today.
Thank you for your kind review that means more to me that anything else on this site.
HI IdaLin and a happy New Year to you.
I hope that the sly old Santa kept his word and delivered your presents on Christmas day.
Loved your poem that has a beautiful flow as it tells the tale of sadness and then the surprise at the end.
Hello! Dear French and so nice to read an excellent poem by you, that captured the inner meaning of your reference to the ways of old in Babylon, the faithless city where many still dwell today.
Your english is fine and will not detract from your ability to write on this site.
I welcome you as a newbie and wish you success in this journey of joy.
In Kindness,
embe
O Dear Wise Aleta; Who can sum up the true meaning of faith the way it should be, many will thank you for writing this, but alas, with time they fail for the reasons you have exposed.
I thank you for reviewing my honest exposure of myself, that has lead me to my Savior.
May God bless you and your family.
"Happy Christmas"
HI Dear Emily J, and so nice to meet a fellow writer like you, that can express yourself so well with few words, that have more meaning than many others that write reams of nothing.
Thanks for reviewing my poem and Yes, your suggestions are well founded.
Bless you and your family this Christmas time.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello Dorianne and so nice to meet a girl like you, that has an engineering brain to write a poem or two.
Scotty was my favorite when first I saw the movie that
I still remember today.
Thanks for sharing these memories that you have captured so well in your writing.
An extra special thanks for the kind review and gift points, for my poem;Writing.Com.
Hello and I am so glad to read your story of life that sometimes hurts, but if we deal with it the way you have described, the healing will begin and we will be at peace knowing that our loved one are at rest
Your story is well written and holds the readers attention to the end.
It would seem that there is more to follow in future chapters.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
HI Magoo you wonderful writer, who has summed up my past in a wonderful way, when I was married in May so long ago.
Such a pity to see that you are not writing much any more, but if you do- please tell me soon.
I am truly thankful for your kind words of reviewing my poem.
Go in peace
embe
Hello the haunted Sherri, who can write and describe with such explicit imagery, the tale of those behind the haunted shadows, where gruesome creatures wait for embe, who is in a state of shock with the unbelievable news that he has received another Awardicon, from the kindest reviewer he has ever known.
Sherri! You blow my mind away.
What more can I say, but thankyou in kindness.
embe
Hello kind Clarissa who took the time to review my poem, with lovely words that mean so much to me.
Your poem-"Ode to a Certain Boy"
Is for me, a lovely way to express your feelings of love for this boy that you have written so well.
Perhaps a follow up to this-would be a story of how he feels for you.
Keep writing, it gets easier as you grow older.
In Kindness,
embe
Dear Sherri
I am truly blessed to have found a treasure like you- An inspiration to so many like me, who are trying to find ourselves in our writing.
Your piece-"A Bit About Me" is how I would like to be.
Thank you for the kind review of my poem about Patience, who is an orphan that I am fostering.
Her name is Simone and she calls me-Daddy.
Thanks for the wisdom of your words above.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and thank you for this disturbing write which I can only attempt to review as follows:
Stanzas
[1]The opening stanza sets the scene of terror
[2]Seeking comfort to be away from here
[3]Now the reality
[4]Of acceptancy of what is to come
[5]Posing questions of hope
[6]Destroyed by a blow
[7]That shadowes the inner hurt
[8]Now transposed into hope in the light of the mind
[9]Undone by demons eyes
[10]To the questions of shame
[11]Turned into evil
[12]Of silent release
[13]Returning to normality
[14]Of forgiveness before the demons return
[15]And the final escape into the universe.
Not an easy read to write and understand-The Author to be applauded.
Hello Jusy Lola [For me you are more than, Just Lola]
Thank you for reviewing my work.
Your poem-"Anyway" is for me a beautiful play on words
that exposes the true inner feelings of disappointment that we all experience in life.
Thanks for sharing this
In Kindness
embe
Hello and nice to meet you, who have the ability to clearly capture with compassion the ending of a person's life.
Your poem will certainly touch the souls of those, who like me- have lost a loved one in this way.
A warm welcome to the writing club, where I trust you will meet new friends.
In Kindness,
embe
Hello and nice to meet you.
A warm welcome to the writing club where I trust you will meet new friends like me, who love to write.
In your well written poem, you have captured the inner feeling of the artist in a way that exposes the true meaning of the love to perform to your audience.
Thanks for sharing
In Kindness,
embe
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