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Welcoming you with a Simply Positive Booview! Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize. 
ERRORS: No grammatical or others were spotted. 
SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think adding more to the actual prologue would be better. 
MY THOUGHTS: I liked the way the use of colors define emotion. White is my personal favorite. The brief prologue reads like the beginning of a horror story. With more added to it to indicate whether my hunch is right, I think it would hold a readers attention more. 
SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any for improvement. 
CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A 
OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery is outstanding. It is easy envisioning the snowfall and tangled branches under the sky. My favorite lines are the ones about the angels. Well done! 
ERRORS: Some punctual were noticed. For example, a comma should replace the period that follows "his breath", and "Terrified" not capitalized; a comma should come after "diminished". A comma should follow "around the corner". Several others like these noticed also, but did not take away from the storyline in my personal opinion. 
Very well done! 
Seriously though, the storyline is unique and well written, although it tends to make a reader less inclined for a chicken dinner. 
ERRORS: No grammatical or others were noticed. 
MY THOUGHTS: The imagery and rhythm are superb, and the emotions expressed just as well. I hope the piece is fictional. It tugged at my heart thinking anyone would live in darkness when there is always someone who will bring light into their lives. 
I hope this is fictional. My heart bleeds for those succumbing to drugs and/or alcohol that refuse to seek help. 
WHAT I LIKED: You did a wonderful job of expressing the ups and downs you and your husband went through and survived. I could not agree with you more that love conquers all. 
Losing a child is the most painful experience one can have. You did a great job of relaying that to readers. 
MY THOUGHTS: You did a great job of writing about a most controversial topic. In my opinion, I believe that tradition should be followed in most cases, yet an open mind in others. As for religious tradition, I feel that it should be be up to the individual. The choice should be his/hers being as they will be accountable for the decision. 