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Review of Memories!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the item. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The emotions are expressed beautifully, and so is the love felt for the individual. I wholeheartedly agree that life and faith need to remain fueled along the paths we walk. Lovely poem! *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: You did a spectacular job of using the prompt for this week. The imagery is outstanding, and the woman an inspiration. The last three verses are my personal favorites, for they are uplifting. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There are none. *Thumbsdown*
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* MECHANICS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that could make for an improvement. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: A naturalist, the poem drew me in from beginning to end. The imagery is fantastic, and the style used just as good. The verses about the powerful Mississippi and the surf of the Pacific were my personal favorites. *Star*
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Review of Skirts of Rain  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of to improve the Pantoum. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery perfect. It is easy envisioning the dance as the land is washed by the rain. Every verse was enjoyable and lovely. Very well written! *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of Why?  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "peopl" should be "people. Other than that, I saw no spelling or other mistakes. *Idea*

*Note5* SUGGESTIONS: Just an opinion, but I think using punctuation where needed would make the presentation of the item better. I also think "Why" is used too frequently. *Note5*

*Star* MY OPINION: I could not have said it better. There are simply no answers for some inquiries. The path in life is not always easy, yet provides us with learning experiences. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "saw our children grew up and got married" should be "saw our children grow up and get married", "together" could be cut before it, commas follow "married" and "earlier stages", "husbands have a successful career" be "husbands had successful careers", and a comma follow "flying colors". "along chat" should be "a long chat". Others like these noticed throughout the story as well. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Sumathi and the others portrayed well, and the storyline very good. *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Your concern for Vandana touched me, as did the conversation with your son when she became ill. The last two paragraphs were inspiring. Well done! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of I LOVE YOU  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and the only suggestion I have for improvement is that I do not think every word in the piece needs capitalization. Please keep in mind that this is only an opinion though. *Idea*

*Check4* OVERALL OPINION: You did a good job of relaying how deeply you love your sweetheart and children. I found that touching. I hope you and your family are reunited soon. *Check4*

Sherri
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Review of Lost  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: "i'm" should be "I'm" instead, "i" be "I", and "i'll" be "I'll". The only suggestions I have is that I think using punctuation where needed would make for a better presentation, and "a wasting" could simply be "time wasting". Overall, the rhythm is good, but "mind" and "time", "path" and "glance", and the last stanza do not follow the same rhyming pattern as the others. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a marvelous job of expressing the emotions many of us feel at one point or another. I think we all wish we could turn back the hands of time and slow the passage of it sometimes. The past is dead, yet oftentimes not easily conquered, which is relayed well in the poem. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize.

*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No punctual, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and the only suggestion I have is that I think the poem would make for a better presentation if punctuation was used where needed. Only a humble opinion though. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm is good, and the imagery sensational. Readers can easily envision the twinkling stars that are your friends. Like you, I love starlit nights. Super poem! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Ben Langhinrichs *Smile* This is the second and final review gifted to you by emerin-liseli from
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#1546758 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the poll. *Exclaim*

*Note5* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note5*

*Flower2* OVERALL THOUGHTS: I think this is a great poll. Many members are intimidated making reviews on moderators. I make reviews on all case colors, and have since joining the site years ago. It is good to get feedback no matter what the color of ones briefcase is. *Flower2*

Sherri
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Review of Jam Packed  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Ben Langhinrichs *Smile* This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by the wonderful emerin-liseli from
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#1546758 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: Not an error was noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Note1* WHAT I LIKED: You did a superb job of letting readers know what steams you, although I do not think the individuals emailing you consider the things they find humorous offensive. In my personal opinion, I think they just want to spread some sunshine. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed, but having read your work before, this did not surprise me. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None that would improve the item. *Idea*

*Note1* MY FAVORITES: You did a superb job of using this weeks prompt. The imagery is excellent, and the rhythm perfect. The mountain mentioned in the poem sounds like a Heaven of sorts to me. I would love having such scenic beauty surrounding me. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Lorien *Smile* This is the second and final review gifted to you as part of the Loyalty Package by the dear emerin-liseli from

*Idea* MECHANICS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None that I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: Like the one read before it, this published item is terrific. Your site is just as fantastic, and I like the way you share where this published piece can be purchased. Nice set-up! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines, yet in my opinion did not lessen the quality of the item. e:idea}

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Idea*

*Note1* WHAT I LIKED: Overall, the rhyming pattern is good, and the imagery is outstanding. Readers can easily envision Elly and Theodore. I liked the realism of making their clothes, shopping, etc., yet felt empathy for the ailments. Well done! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "Jane sit back" should be "Jane sat back" instead, a comma should follow "somewhat mean" "had money", "was selfish", "Emily Dear", and several other paragraphs, yet the story is still terrific. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: Emily, Jane, Darcy, and Heathcliff are defined well, and the storyline awesome. I enjoyed the fantasy almost as much as I love "Wuthering Heights". Terrific story! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Lock And Key  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just my opinion, but I think some of the lines could be combined to make for a better presentation. For example, instead of ending "As the", the next two lines could be added to make a complete sentence. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a fantastic job of defining genuine love. Without the lock, there is no key, and vice-verse. I also liked the way you go into detail describing why. Super poem! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Waiting  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in the first verse. Unlike the other two, three words in the verse do follow the same pattern. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

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*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in describing the settings is super, although sad. The doubt and pain that disturbed the wildlife could almost be felt. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*
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Review of Lost  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "battel" should be "battle" instead; "i" be capitalized; "crys" be "cries"; and "probluems" be "problems". *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: The poem really tugged at this readers heartstrings. It is hard going on when a loved one is lost, and you did a good job of relaying the emotions felt. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: I am not certain if it is an error, but is "A will" supposed to be "I will" being as it is a remake of "Hush Little Baby"? *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just that I would change "A will" to "I will" as suggested above. It just does not read right in this readers humble opinion. For example, "A will strangle you...". *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: Overall, you did a good job of remaking a dark version of the lullaby, although I do not think many children would agree. *Laugh* Well done! *Note2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "back" instead of "but" in the second paragraph. Other than that, no others were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any for improving the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a great job of expressing your feelings on a controversial issue. Some think that flowers and so forth are a way of showing they remember the deceased, while others feel differently. Me? Like you, I do not want a shrine. However, I do want to be remembered with smiles and for who I am as an individual. Memories come from the heart, not from monetary things. You did a good job of relaying that. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Brain Strain  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "one thing". Other than that, no other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Other than the one mentioned above, I have no other suggestions to offer. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm and emotions about your mother are fabulous. I think almost everyone has felt this kind of strain at one point or another. I know I have. Well done! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop *Smile* This is the third and final review won by you in
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*Idea* MECHANICS: No grammatical, punctual, or other errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: The rhythm is sensational and the message just as good. You did a wonderful job of relaying how the things we do in life are learning experiences that help us grow. Excellent job! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Snowdrifts  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the stanzas. For example, "ind" and "spin"; "groan" and "moans"; and "stubble" and "shovel".*Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those *Up* *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the snowflakes and how you feel about Jack Frost and the season are relayed well. Wonderful poem! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Drastic  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop *Smile* This is the first of three reviews won by you in
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "demons" and "scheming"; "tragic" and "drastic"; "see" and "somehow"; and "dramatic" and "sarcastic". *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: Other than those pointed out above, the rhythm is good. I think the message is super. Reaching out to someone who needs a lift is a dynamite trait, and we all need a big hug sometimes. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Fluffy  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were noticed.

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I have none to offer for improvement.

*Star* MY LIKES: You did a sensational job of keeping my interest from the moment Fluffy supposedly ate Cassie. Melanie and the other characters are defined well and with realism, and the plot awesome. The finale sent chills up my spine. Very good story!


Sherri
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