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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "outmost" should be "utmost" instead. "and or" should be "and/or". A comma should follow "noticed" and "expiring". *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: Would I ever hate to be on your list. *Laugh* The Raccoon Family certainly ticked you off, however I don't think eating one of their offspring is the solution. WRITE ON! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS: A few punctual were noticed, but did not take away from the entry in my opinion. For example, no comma is needed after "disillusion", and a comma come after "the sun". *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a fabulous job of using the prompt. The rhythm is sensational, and the imagery just as terrific. I love the way the poem begins with the whispers of the rainbow. I have no personal favorites. I think the item is great from beginning to end. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Two Voices  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Other than a couple of words that did not follow the same rhyming pattern as the others, such as "all and "awe", and "ship" and "crypt", there were no errors noticed and no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm and imagery are excellent overall. You did a wonderful job of using the prompt for this week. I doubt there is a reader here who could not relate to the entry. It is like being on the ship mentioned in the poem when our Muse decides to falter for a bit. Thank goodness for the voice that keeps us inspired! *Star*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Dark Seasons  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would make for improvement. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: I think the imagery is positively superb. It is easy envisioning the settings as she waits for him to come. The finale was awesome! Keep writing! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Sweet Nightmares  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: The only one I have to offer is that I would use punctuation where needed in all of the lines being as it is used in some. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: The imagery is fantastic! The poem sent chills up my spine, especially the lines about the cicadas and prophet. I cannot imagine anyone having sweet dream after reading this Gothic poem. Keep writing! *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of My Little Boy  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted, and the only suggestion I have is that being as punctuation is used in some of the lines, that it be used in them all. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a beautiful tribute to your child. It is easy to envision those chubby cheeks and blue eyes. You've given him the best gift anyone could ask for with unconditional love. WRITE ON! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of The Shore  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A period should replace the comma following "eyes closed"; "against he sunlight" should be "against the sunlight" instead; No comma is needed after "But"; a comma should come after "approaching" and "and" come before "then"; a period should replace the comma that follows "itself"; a comma come after "approach"; a comma should come after "It's funny", "After" not capitalized, no comma follow "entire life"; and "i" capitalized after "How could". Others like these noticed throughout the tale as well. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: They are defined good, although I feel they would be easier to relate to if given names. *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: The storyline is good, although the woman's appearance seemed to be mentioned more than was necessary in my humble opinion. *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: As mentioned above, I felt more of the mysterious apparition would enhance the story, and not as much detail on the appearance of the woman. Keep writing, and best wishes to you! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "ive" should be "I've" instead, and "im" be "I'm". Just an opinion, but the poem would make for a better presentation if properly capitalized and punctuation was used where needed. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: I think everyone has felt similarly sometime in their life. We search for a brighter setting when things depress or upset us, which is relayed well in the poem. Keep writing! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of Mary's Plea  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS: No punctual or others were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would possibly improve the item. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a fantastic job of using this weeks prompt. The characters are well defined, and the storyline touching. My heart went out to Mary and her daughter, yet I was elated that Mary adjusted to the rehab center. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of that would improve the entry. *Idea*

*Note1* MY PERSONAL FAVORITES: The rhythm and emotions expressed are magnificent. You did a superb job of using the prompt. How anyone could stop believing in one who is giving her all is beyond comprehension. The words are musical and upbeat. BEAUTIFUL! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Your Poem  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the poem. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: The imagery used when describing why the poem was written was super. My personal favorites are the lines about weaving the words around your loved ones arms and verses three through five. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There are none. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review of Accused  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should come after "my mother", "not his" and "a vegetable". *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Note5* PERSONAL FAVORITES: The characters and emotions are defined well. The crime committed by Tomas was horrible, yet I felt a small pang of empathy for him due to the regrets he had. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of STORM WARNING  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the entry. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm and imagery are excellent, and you did a marvelous job of using the prompt for this week. Like you, I agree that things look dark sometimes, but to look past those times to find/make better ones. I loved the imagery used in describing the upcoming storm and your emotions. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
*Butterflyv*

*Idea* ERRORS: No punctual or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None that I feel could improve the entry. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The imagery is fantastic. My personal favorites are the second and third verses. The idea of the serenity found under the moonlight gave is lovely, and the doubts fading just as good. Super poem! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of The White Coffin  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "Slinging myself into" should be "Slinging myself onto" instead. "breath" should be "breathe".*Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just an opinion, bit I think "but I never thought it would be more requiring than there are hours in a day." would be better if worded like so: "but I never thought it would be so demanding." "in my ears" could be deleted after "The silence", and still have the same effect. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a good job describing military life from routine expectations to the coffin. The ending was a mystery to me. I wondered if it was fact or a dream about his brother. I liked that. *Star*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Beauty of Life  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A space should come after the comma that follows "of sun"; "peacefull" should be "peaceful" instead; "its slowly" should be "it's slowly"; and "i" should be capitalized in the last line of the poem. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: I think your poem is inspiring. Life is beautiful indeed. Time sure does move on to make room for many new memories. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Keep writing!
Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted, and the only suggestion I have that I think would improve the piece is that punctuation be used where needed in all of the lines being as it is in some of them. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the imagery just as fine. The poem tugged at my heartstrings. The suffering and death that come with war is saddening to say the least. Many take for granted what the soldier in the piece endure to benefit our country. Well done! *Exclaim*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a fantastic job with the imagery used in describing the house and its inhabitants. Although I know it might not be up to you and your friends standards, it is still home. I'm certain times will change as mentioned in the poem. *Note1*

WRITE ON!
Sherri *Butterflyv*
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Review of Dreams  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Numerous punctual errors were spotted. For example, periods should replace the commas that follow "flailing", "narcotic", and so forth. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Just an opinion, but putting the poem into verses would make for a better presentation. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: My favorites are the ones about best friends and sisters. I also think you did a super job with the imagery used in describing the friends, sisters, and man.

Welcome to WDC! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Her Tears  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: The only one this humble reader has to offer is that being that it is used in some of the lines, I would follow a rhyming pattern in all. Just an opinion though. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The poem really tugged at my heart. The imagery used in describing the woman and her emotions was heartbreaking, especially the last three verses. It is sad thinking that no one heard or saw her pain. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Love is  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "a tides rising" should be " a tide rising", and a period replace the comma that follows "its pray", which should be "its prey" instead. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones already mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a super job of relaying what love means to you, although I do not think genuine love is painful. If it is not real, love is only a word. It can be both painful and destructive if unreal. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Aftermath  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Some punctual and spelling errors were spotted. For example, a period should replace the comma following "white" and "it" capitalized. "dazzling then" should be "dazzling than" instead. a Period should replace the comma after "pain everywhere", and "my" capitalized. "smouldering" should be "smoldering" instead. Others like these noticed also. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: You did a good job of defining the key character. From his surroundings to the pain felt, the imagery is clearly painted. The last three paragraphs were terribly sad. It is easy to see why the man felt such grief. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of Who I am  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were noticed. For example, periods should replace the commas following all of the lines being as each begins a new sentence. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is super. You painted a splendid picture of the changing seasons, your surroundings, and your emotions. WRITE ON! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of TO HELL AND BACK  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*RainbowL**RainbowR* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the entry. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: You did an excellent job using this weeks prompt. The rhythm is fantastic, and the imagery just as good. The poem tugged at my heart, for so many of us take for granted what we have while others are suffering while serving our country. *Sad* I hope the prayer is answered soon. *Peace*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Some punctual errors were spotted, but did not take away from the story in my opinion. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than a bit of editing to correct the punctual errors. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: Cheryl is portrayed well, and the imagery used in describing the settings terrific. My personal favorites are the paragraphs about the rooster and photographs. The plot held my interest from beginning to end. Very good story! *Star*

Sherri
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