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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Pumpkin* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to be critical. *Smile*

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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Bird* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Bird*

*Peace* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Peace*

*Boat* MY THOUGHTS: You did a wonderful job of using this weeks prompt and painting a poetic masterpiece with the imagery. The thoughts and emotions are uplifting, and the message true, He blessed us with numerous things to be thankful for. *Boat*

*Thumbsdown* DISLIKES: I have none. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review of I've read  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Earth* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, and not to criticize your work. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: No particular pattern was noticed, however, no mistakes were spotted either. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is outstanding, and the emotions written just as well. You did a super job of relaying that real life can be read just like a book. Well done! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

Thank you for your entry in
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would improve the entry. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: N/A *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: N/A *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The rhythm is excellent, and the messages just as great. Everyone should keep in mind that we have so many things to be thankful for that others have been deprived of, as well as the loss of lives for those serving our country. Very well written! *Leaf4*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "was the car". A comma should follow "non-conformist". Other than the ones mentioned, there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the item. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: Anthony and Mary Anne are defined well. *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: I thought the interview was realistic, and the storyline inspiring. *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION: You did a super job of relaying the loss of a loved one, yet managed to make the item uplifting. I thoroughly enjoyed the interview, and agree with the advice and value. Schooling is very important, especially in our ever-changing world. However, the storyline was what touched me the most. *Leaf4*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of that could possibly improve the entry. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: N/A *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: N/A *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION: You did a superb job of using the prompt. The rhythm is magnificent, and the emotions relayed in a way that is so uplifting. Many have had rough times as mentioned in the poem, but turning to Him during these times as well as praising Him for the good ones is to be remembered. You did a perfect job of relaying these things. *Leaf4*

Sherri
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Review of Through the Storm  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "I asked" should follow "A what?" being an inquiry is being made. No comma is needed after "dash". "he at least" would read better if worded like so in my humble opinion: "at least he". A period should replace the comma that follows "options", and "it" capitalized. No comma is needed after "bushes". A comma should replace the period following "route", and "Stealing" not capitalized. Several others like these examples noticed throughout the short story also. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: The main character would be easier to relate to if given a name. Otto was described the best in my opinion. *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: The storyline reads a lot like "The Wizard of OZ" to me, yet is a bit different. *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION: As mentioned above, I thought the story read a lot like the "The Wizard of Oz", but "Aunt Em" being replaced by "Uncle M" instead. I think the plot would be better if it weren't so similar. Just my humble opinion though. *Leaf4*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "Riped" should be "Ripped" in the title. Other than that, I saw no errors, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: My heart ached for the loss of a loved one. Perhaps this person could not deal with the stress and pain despite your tears. Sometimes love just is not enough, which I find terribly sad. I wish you the best! *Check2*

Sherri
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Review of Love  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: N/A *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: N/A *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION: You did a magnificent job of expressing how much this individual means to you in every sentence. I had no personal favorites. I enjoyed the entire poem. *Leaf4*

Welcome to Writing.com. I wish you the very best!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Pumpkin* Thank you for your entry in
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: The question mark that follows "marry me" should be replaced with a comma. The only one needed is the one after "did I?". A comma should follow "Well". *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: You did a wonderful job of using the prompt. The story is so romantic. This is one of the many reasons one should never say never. Very well done! *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: There are none to offer for improving the item.

*Note5* PERSONAL FAVORITES: I enjoyed every line of the tribute to your sons. The rhythm is great, and a reader can easily see that the children are your world. It was so uplifting reading about the bond, heartfelt feelings, and how blessed you are. Thank you for sharing this with us. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Disease Spreads.  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is dark, yet superb. Having visited your portfolio before though, it did not comes as a surprise. The disease and what it does to one is described well. The poem sent chills up my spine. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Today  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "words" and "absurd", and "deep" and "defeat". Just my humble opinion, but being as a rhyming pattern is used in some of the lines, I would follow one in all of them. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: I could not agree with you more about everyone being at the bottom of a hill sometimes, and that things look black then. However, you did a super job of expressing that happiness can be found again. Very well done! *Check2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "Hello". A comma should replace the period after "jellyfish back" and "And" not capitalized. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just my humble opinion, but I think "jellyfish" is used too closely together. Perhaps deleting it and replacing it with another word might be considered. Being as it was just used in the sentence before it, I would change "a strange gravely", (which should be "gravelly) to "a gravelly". *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: My favorite paragraph was the one about the jellyfish hearing of the sea sky and his fear of it. I also enjoyed the part about the lack of discussion about policies. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and I can think of no suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Note1* MY PERSONAL FAVORITES: You did a fantastic job of expressing so much in the poem. I think all readers will relate to having things in the past they wish could be changed, Here's to brighter tomorrows! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A period should replace the comma that follows "to prevent it". "I was one" should be "I was on" instead. "grogy" should be "groggy". A period should replace the comma after "as I felt" and "it" capitalized. "the man eye" should be "the man I". *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: The characters are described well, especially Will, and the storyline terribly sad, yet good. *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a wonderful job of relaying the woman's emotions before and after the accident, as well as describing the settings. I liked that. My heart bled for the woman. The finale brought tears to my eyes. *RainbowL**RainbowR*
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Review of Decaying Beauty  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would possibly improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery outstanding. The photograph before the poem is an additional plus. It is beautiful. Spring and Fall are my favorite seasons. The last two stanzas are my personal favorites. A poetic masterpiece was painted in this poem about Autumn. LOVED IT! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of "Erased"  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Revelry new writings soon *Smile* This is the final review won by you in
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*Idea* ERRORS: Some punctual noticed. For example, a comma should replace the period that follows "Bringing me down", "serenity", and so forth. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: You did a wonderful job of expressing the mixed feelings of those who have lost loved ones. My heart went out to you. The grief and numbness does not fade in some cases. Let the angels and God help see you through the difficult times. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Revelry new writings soon *Bigsmile* This is the first of two reviews won by you in
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*Idea* ERRORS: A couple of punctual were spotted, but did not take away from the piece in my opinion. "by" should be capitalized. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in relaying the emotions felt is great. I think the poem is terribly sad though. To be a hypocrite is bad enough, but living with that feeling afterward even worse. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Thump Thump Beep  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Although this form of poetry is unfamiliar to me, no spelling or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: I think the piece would read better if it was told what put the person in the hospital. I'm guessing that the individual attempted, and finally succeeded, in ending her life, yet unsure. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: You did a good job of relaying the thoughts that the person in the hospital had. My heart ached for her. The end was so terribly sad. *Star*

The very best to you!

Sherri
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Review of help  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A space should come after "thoughts" before the comma. "i" should be capitalized. "dispare" should be "despair". *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a good job of expressing the emotions felt when the individual in the poem left. It is always hard to go on when we care so much about someone and the feelings are not returned. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Pumpkin* Thank you for your entry in
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Writing* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Writing*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of that would improve the entry. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: The rhythm is sensational, and the message one everyone should keep in mind. A person should never give up trying to to capture his/her dream. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: I have none. *Thumbsdown*

*Note2* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using this weeks prompt. I found the poem very inspiring, and the stanza about the man met on the walk romantic. The last verse says it all. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Pumpkin* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I have no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Pumpkin*

*Pawprints* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Pawprints*

*Cat* OVERALL THOUGHTS: This poem is simply beautiful. Every sentence tugged at my heartstrings. You did a sensational job of defining the meaning of genuine, undying love, and I liked that. Sharing everything from fear to kisses is something all of us desire. I hope it lasts forever, and not just in dreams. *Cat*

Sherri
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Review of Roses in Heaven  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Jackolantern* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Jackolantern*

*Witchhat* SUGGESTIONS: None that would improve this lovely tribute. *Witchhat*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Ghost*

*Pumpkin* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Every stanza written touched me deeply. Having lost my mother seven years ago, I still feel the aching in my heart as you do. Like you, I also ask God to let her know how much I love and miss her. Thank you for sharing this with the community. God bless! *Pumpkin*

Sherri *Heart*
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Review of Room at the End  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Jackolantern* ERRORS: Not one was spotted. *Jackolantern*

*Witchhat* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of that would improve the item. *Witchhat*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Ghost*

*Pumpkin* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The poem is terribly sad, yet very well written. The imagery used in combining nature with emotion is outstanding. You painted a poetic masterpiece about Dementia and the suffering it causes. The stanza about becoming a memory brought tears to my eyes, yet the lines about rising with one another in a night of stars uplifting. *Pumpkin*

Sherri
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Review of A Passing Away  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Pumpkin* Welcoming you with a Simply Positive Booview! *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Witchhat* ERRORS: No spelling or others were noticed. *Witchhat*

*Fire* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement except pointing out whether good or evil has claimed the soul. I like to think God did, yet the stanza before the last one left me wondering. *Fire*

*Ghost* WHAT I ENJOYED: You did a good job of relaying your feelings about death. The imagery is sad, yet just as good. Well done! *Ghost*

Sherri
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