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Review of Mysterious  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Being as it is used in some of the lines, I think using punctuation where needed in all of them would make for a better presentation. A comma should replace the question mark following "my end". *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The poem is dark, yet expresses mixed thoughts to me. Although you say you prefer being the elusive force of death, you also mention mixed emotions. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Some spelling and other errors were spotted. For example, "time of there" should be "time of their" instead; "An as" should be "And as"; an unnecessary space follows "for me" and the comma" "i" should be capitalized afterward, and so forth. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a good job of relaying the importance of nurturing parents who provide morals and encouragement to their children. As our children mature, like you, these traits are usually admired and appreciated. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of Stars  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or others were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Being as it is used in some of the lines, I would follow a rhyming pattern in them all. Keep in mind that this is only a suggestion though. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: The imagery is excellent. A star-lover myself, the title drew me in. It was easy seeing the shimmering stars in the sky, followed by the shooting one. Well done! *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of Oh the Cost  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello BIG BAD WOLF Happy July 4th! This is a review won by you for being chosen by virtual dice as the "Lucky Random Bidder" in
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*Idea* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any for improving the item. *Idea*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: You did a great job of relaying the steep price paid by the individuals serving our country. Tears came to my eyes when reading this heartbreaking poem. A pacifist, these are just some of the things the people serving our country and their loved ones endure. Thank you for sharing this with us. *Peace* *Check2*

Sherri
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Review of MIDNIGHT DREAMS  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: None were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of that would possibly improve the entry. *Reading*

*Note3* OVERALL OPINION: You did a sensational job of using the prompt for this week. the emotions felt for the one you love are expressed from the heart and beautifully, as is the imagery. I was drawn in from the beginning by this touching poem. *Note3*

*Ghost* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were spotted. For example, no commas are needed after "suggestions", "question", "where" and several other lines. *Idea*

*Note5* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note5*

*Exclaim* PLOT: N/A *Exclaim*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is good, and the emotions relayed from the heart. I liked that. This individual seems to be your salvation of sorts and a reliable, trustworthy friend. That is a blessing.Welcome to Writing.com. I wish you the best of luck! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Jackolantern*ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in a couple of the lines. For example, "her" and "sister" do not rhyme. Other than that, I have no suggestions to offer. *Jackolantern*

*Cat* MY THOUGHTS: Other than those mentioned above, the rhythm is good, and the imagery awesome. The oldest sister's envy of the youngest was sad to me, for real beauty comes from within. I'm happy that the finale was a joyful one. *Cat*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Ghost* ERRORS: No grammatical or others noticed. *Ghost*

*Witchhat* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Witchhat*

*Cat* FAVORITES: Trish and the other characters are defined well, and the storyline terrific. The plot is nice and gruesome, perfect for the season. Jack's wife was my personal favorite. She was creepy. The plot is good for both younger and older audiences. Very well written! *Cat*

Sherri
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Review of AND-MOSES-WEPT!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Idea* MECHANICS: No mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None that could possibly improve the entry. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: You did a sensational job of using the prompt for this week. The imagery is perfect, and the messages just as excellent. You stressed the major thing we should always keep in mind, and that is to keep the faith always, trusting Him in all ways. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think "tears he refused to cry" would read better like so: "tears he refused to shed" or simply "burned with unshed tears". I also think that "instantly freezing" would read better than "instantly froze". "A" needs no capitalization after "his eyes". A comma should follow "of rage", and the one following "wailed" deleted. No comma is needed after " memory of his friend". A period should replace the comma after "since he left", ""if" capitalized", and the comma deleted after "about her". "motioned them inside" should be "motioning them inside, saying,". A period should follow "little food left". Others like these examples noticed throughout the story also. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: Velenna, Kale, and the other characters are defined well, and the storyline just as good. With some editing, I think it would be even better. Thorsious' description and intentions for the man was one of my favorite paragraphs, although Thorsious could use some table manners and a bit of restraint where Velenna is concerned. My favorite character is Aries. *Note1*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review of Winter Picture  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: The first line is off center, and "fields" and "squeal" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as in the others lines. Other than these, there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: As mentioned above, the rhythm is good in all of the lines except two, and the imagery awesome. It is easy for readers to envision the snow covered fields and almost feel the icy air. Wonderful poem! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in two of the lines. "hot" and "sought" do not rhyme. Other than that, I have no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is terrific in all of the lines except the two mentioned above, and the imagery just as good. It is easy envisioning the wetlands and animals lying around in the shade in an effort to cool themselves from the sun. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Shining Star  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The only suggestion I have to offer is that being as a rhyming pattern is used in most of the lines, I would do so with the ones before them. Just a humble opinion though. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: This poem drew my attention from the moment the star was believed to be your mother. Having lost mine seven years ago, I felt similarly. I even bought one in her name. She was an angel before God swept her in His loving arms, and like you, will always be my bright, special star. Thank you for sharing this with us, and welcome to Writing.com. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Being as it is used in some of the lines, I think using punctuation where needed would make for a better presentation if used in them all. For example, a comma should follow "other time", and a question mark replace the period after "a crisis". I also think the poem would be better if the verses followed suit. Just an opinion though. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a great job of laying your emotions on the line. I liked that. It hurts to be handed lines that we know are just that, and hard to move on. However, I would prefer the truth and moving on than living with deceit. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "plane" and "again" do not follow a traditional poetry pattern, and "form" and "borne" another example. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The imagery is superb. It was easy envisioning the dark woman and Baphomet. The poem sent chills up my spine, and left me wondering how anyone could want the demon summoned. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of CLOWNING AROUND  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the entry. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery outstanding. I agree that we can face anything if we brave the falls life throws at us. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Either "All of which" should be changed to "All of that" or the period that follows "malevolent" be replaced with a comma" and "All" not capitalized. I would change "so much of being secluded" to "so much seclusion". *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: Evelyn and Chloe are relayed well, and the letter very good. *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The letter/memo is well written overall. I was impressed with Chloe and Evelyn's description in an item so short. I wish you the best, and welcome you to Writing.com! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Idea*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: Having visited your portfolio many times, I was not surprised that the imagery is excellent. One can almost hear the lion's low moan intensifying to a roar, and I could almost feel his pride and see the battle amongst him and the young males. Very well written! *Star*

*Cat* Sherri
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Review of The Climb  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed through these teary eyes, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: Having lost my mother to cancer seven years ago, you do not know the impact this poem had on me. You did a superb job with the tribute to your brother, and I know God is smiling down on you just as your sibling is. Thank you for sharing your memories with us. *Flower1*

*Heart* Blessings,
Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. Welcome to Writing.com! *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "development"; Just my opinion, but I think instead of "they begin early searching for the crowd they fit into" would read better like so: "they begin searching early for a crown to fit into"; a comma should come after "different"; a comma should follow "saying goes" and "siblings"; a space is needed between "scary" and "wrong"; a comma should follow "comparison"; no comma is needed after "home setting". Several others like these noticed as well. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: I think you did a super job of expressing how love, understanding, and compassion help a child's development. I agree that negative responses stem from negative emotions. Children need to see and feel positive things so that they can obtain security as well. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of The Haunted Room  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Cat* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion intended to help, not criticize.

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "sorry" and a comma replace the period after "sir"; "the" should be capitalized after "Liar."; a comma should come after "understand"; a comma should replace the period that follows "please"; a comma should also replace the period after "around"; and "and" capitalized after "I know."*Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: With some editing and elaboration on the characters and setting, I think the story would be terrific. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: Almost everyone enjoys a good tale like this with Halloween coming up. I do think adding more depth about the characters and house would enhance the story considerably. I wish you the best! *Note2*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improvement. *Vine2*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm is perfect, the imagery just as outstanding, and the message superb. What I thought was going to be a dark entry turned out to be most inspiring. You did a wonderful job of using the prompt, but that wasn't surprising. You always do. *Smile* My favorites stanzas are the one about the full moon, not wooing Mother Nature, and the last. *Star*

*Hourglass* Sherri *Hourglass*
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Review of Abiku  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: 'Just buy the shirt...' should be put in quotation marks. Just an opinion, but I think spelling 5 and 3 would make for a better presentation also. A period should replace the comma that follows "know it's you" and "fine" capitalized. A comma should come after "Jide" in the paragraph following the one above. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: Shola, Jide, and the others are defined well. *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: The storyline is unique and held my interest from beginning to end. *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: As mentioned above, I thought the plot was terrific. I especially liked the paragraphs about the eerie figures and the fulfilling of Abiku's promise. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*Pencil* WRITE ON! *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of My Poetic Mind  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: First of all, I would like to welcome you to Writing.com. *Smile* You did a super job of expressing the many emotions that go through a writers mind. I think we all search for words that touch others, especially when writing poetry. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

*Vine1* Sherri *Vine2*
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Review of When will you  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other errors were noticed, however, just a humble opinion, but being as you began the poem with a rhyming pattern, I think it would make for a better read if you did the same in all of the stanzas. I also think that using punctuation where needed would make for a better presentation. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of relaying how much this individual means to you. I found it heartbreaking knowing that this person obviously looks past your tears and dying soul. *Frown* I wish you the very best! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*Crown* WRITE ON! *Crown*

Sherri
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