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Review of A fork  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and I have no suggestions to offer that I feel would improve the item. *Flower2*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Writing* OVERALL OPINION: I think the imagery is good, and the emotions relayed just as well. My favorite stanza is the one about the voice of reason. True enough, one feels better if they listen to it and follow the path that is right. Placing blame on others also leads to unhappiness. You did an exceptional job of relaying these and other emotions. *Writing*

KEEP WRITING!
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Review of Static  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "That way"; A comma should come after "Ah", "missing wire", "A Loose" be "a loose", and "wil" be "will" instead. Commas should also follow "at first" and "but then", and "sure enough". A period should come after "frequency", and the following sentence re-worded to some thing like "It sounds so good". *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: The item needs some punctual and spelling edits as mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The determination used in trying to find out what is wrong with the radio was my personal favorite. Like you, I love music. I would be lost without my radio also. *Wink* *Star*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Only one was noticed. "it's believers" should be "its believers" instead. Other than that, no errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing civilization and progress is outstanding. I liked all of the stanzas, but the last was my favorite. Knowledge without wisdom means nothing, nor does uncontrolled power. I could not agree more with your views on technology. The "why" is very important. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: The only errors spotted were that a space is needed between the period following "Prince Charming" and "Some", and "ebony hair" should be ebony-haired. No others were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: I like the way you go into detail about why you are like each of the princesses. It is easy relating to your love for animals and that special man in your life. I was drawn into the item fr4om beginning to end. It was almost like reading part of your autobiography. Well done, Megan! *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would make for improvement. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: Like you, I love Meg and would love to pay her a visit, although I'll pass on the Vegemite. *Sick* *Laugh* Vitamin enriched or not, I think this is a snack I would pass. I do not like blue cheese, and the aroma mentioned in the item would be another thing taken into consideration. Thank you for sharing the recipe for those stronger at heart than me. *Laugh* *Exclaim*

*Heart* Sherri
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Review of From the ashes  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1* MECHANICS: No grammatical, punctual, or other errors were noticed. *Vine2*

*Sun* SUGGESTIONS: None that would improve the poem. *Sun*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: A poetic masterpiece was painted by the use of imagery. I was drawn into the poem from beginning to end. The emotions relayed are sad, yet well written. My heart goes out to those feeling forsaken and suffer learning experiences such as the ones in this poem. I was heartbroken to see that this is not a fictional piece. *Star*

The best to you,
Sherri
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Review of Bike Riding  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a fantastic job with the imagery used in describing the settings. I liked that. I think the use of good imagery always draws a reader into the story. My favorites are the paragraphs about the ups and downs and signs. Although I'm not a bike rider, I can recall these things when younger. Very well written story! *Star*

WRITE ON!
Sherri
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Review of God's Love  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: Although this is not a story, I thought the prose was inspiring and written from the heart. I liked that. *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of relaying what faith is all about. I was especially drawn to how you felt before letting Him help you through things and to help you be all that He wants you to be. Thank you for sharing a part of your beliefs with us. *Flower1*

Sherri

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Umbrellab* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would make for improvement. *Umbrellab*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You did a magnificent job with the rhythm and imagery in such a short poem. Your friend moving away was obviously a disappointment, yet the ride uplifting your spirits. I liked that. Again, I commend you on the use of perfect rhythm and excellent imagery. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS: None were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: There are not any I can think of for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery just as good. I think you did a great job with the prompt. I also thought the notes before and after the poem were an additional plus. You're right. Writing pieces like this are not easy, but you did a wonderful job writing about the moonshiners and the graves. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the short story. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The imagery used in describing the setting and characters is fantastic, but what I really liked is the way Corbin found peace with the woman despite his condition and tragic circumstances. The plot pulled at my heartstrings. It is well written, although terribly sad. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Forgiveness  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines, yet did not take away from the poem in my opinion. Examples are: "felt" and "help", "go" and "sown ". *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: There are none other than the ones mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: It takes a good person to erase painful memories and turn to Him for help to overcome them. You did a sensational job of relaying this. The poem is inspiring and sends readers a great message. The emotions are expressed just as well. I loved the stanza where God lets you know that He is there to provide you with the strength to forgive. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Dear Diary  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of for improving the story. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: Sarah, Ricky, and the other characters are described well, which is always a plus in my opinion because it makes them easier to relate to. Teenage pregnancy is difficult for both the young parents and grandparents. You did a sensational job of pointing that out, along with how she felt at the changes in her body. I liked the realism of the story and characters. Very well done!

Sherri*Star*
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Review of Waiting  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A period should follow "a few minutes" and "now" capitalized in paragraph one. In the second, a comma should come after "Tuesday today". In the third, a comma should come follow "the ray" and none needed after "in the light". No others spotted. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: They are defined well. *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: I thought it was good. I liked the mysteriousness of the story from the beginning. *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: Was I ever shocked to discover what the knife would be used for! Pleasantly so, I might add. *Smile* The storyline drew me in from the start. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*
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Review of Damned to sin  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were noticed, but did not take away from the poem in this readers opinion. For example, commas should follow "this for you" in the first stanza, "Damned am I" in the second, and "I love you" in the seventh. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is excellent, and the emotions powerful. You did a great job of expressing how it feels when someone we love breaks our heart when casting our feelings aside. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize.

*Snow3* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Snow3*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: I was drawn into the plot from the moment the mysterious box arrived. The gifter was an angel. To help those in need after the hurricane was magnanimous, and something no one would forget. You did a splendid job of making the storyline realistic. I liked that, and the fact that the gifter sought no praise for being a good Samaritan by remaining anonymous. Great story! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of The Painting  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "long past". A comma should replace the period that follows "my destiny" and "For" not capitalized, or "For" deleted. No comma is needed after "all time". Please keep in mind that these are only suggestions. *Smile* *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The imagery used in describing the setting when the main character's spirit travels backward in time is awesome. I liked what the parasol and Monet's portrait represented to the woman, although they were heartbreaking. My heart bled for the woman when she said farewell to her love, but even more so in the finale. Loved the story! *Star*

*Heart* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, punctual, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the monologue. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Palin well defined, and the storyline good. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: You did a good job of relaying Sarah's viewpoints. What I liked best is her confidence, the bond she and her daughter share, and her intelligence. I think the monologue is a great tribute to the politician. *Check2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the free verse. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: James and Hayden are not described, only their thoughts. *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a good job of expressing the characters views on women. Both sound as if they have encountered the wrong ones that led to harsh feelings. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Best wishes,
Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "young by". I also think that too many semi-colons were used. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the setting is fantastic. I could not help but think how eerie this dream is, especially the part about the cloaked woman and her change from beauty to one with horns. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should replace the period following "dusty desert" and "And" not capitalized. Just a humble opinion, but putting spaces between all of the paragraphs instead of some would make for a better presentation. The first four could be combined into one. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Uncle Lark and Sabrina were described the best, and the storyline good. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: The settings are defined well. I think Anthony's character could be described more. I liked the description of his uncle's home and why Anthony wasn't certain if he wanted to meet his relative. Overall, the story is good in my opinion. *Check2*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the imagery excellent. I was drawn into the poem from the first line to the final. I think it is very intense and romantic. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review of The Chosen One  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a suggestion, but I think using "cold" or "freezing" once is sufficient. A period should replace the semi-colon following "freezing", and "he'd" capitalized. No comma is needed after "a trip", but should follow "abandoned". A comma should come after "later" in paragraph two. A comma is not needed after "the fields" in the third paragraph, but one should follow "her kind". No comma is needed after "place" or "urine". *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The mother and her offspring are well defined, and so is the setting. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: You did a super job of relaying the thoughts of an egg. I liked that. The storyline is enjoyable except for what the poor egg thinks at the end. Good job! *Check2*

Sherri
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Review of Stargazer  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "grave", and one should follow "persistence". *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in defining the three stars is fabulous. My personal favorites are the lines about the phoenixes and the the questioning of our existence. Like you, I love stars and the mystery of them. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of Final moments  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm was off in one of the stanzas. "goodbyes" and "why" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as found in the rest of the verses. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is excellent is all of the stanzas except the one pointed out above, yet I thought the poem was terrific. You did a great job of putting yourself into the thoughts of one who is perishing. My heart ached for him and his loved ones, and I could almost feel the pain he felt as he attempted to find logical answers. I liked the inspiration that was found in the box, and found it uplifting that he left the world happily. *Star*

Keep Writing!

Sherri
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