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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes were spotted, and I can't think of any suggestions that would improve the piece. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: This is a very informative and well written article. It's imperative that people know the proper steps in avoiding identity theft and viruses. You did a magnificent job of letting readers know how to protect themselves. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review of Moonlit Kisses  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You did a fabulous job of using the prompt for this week. The imagery used in describing the flowers the passion and kisses was excellent. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Sun* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Sun*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: I think the article is excellent. I could not agree more about the themes writers should use. The addition of details about Faulkner and Maugham added emphasis to the piece. You did a fantastic job of relaying the moral needs. I especially liked the one about a writers characters. If they aren't defined well, along with the setting/s, a story usually lacks what it takes to hold a readers interest. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review of Tiny New Star  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* MECHANICS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: The only one this humble reader has to offer is that I think following a similar pattern in all of the stanzas would make for a better presentation and read. For example, "is" and "live" do not rhyme, and some of the lines are much longer than others. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: The imagery used in describing the little star is fantastic. It definitely seems to have brightened your world. *Smile*

Best wishes, and a warm welcome to Writing.Com!

Sherri
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Review of Untitled  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should come after "Alabama", "Dobbs", "the street", a question mark replace the period following "its neck", "Dobbs", "the pooch", "i'm" capitalized, a question mark replace the comma after "busy", "get" capitalized, a comma follow "insulted", and hours later". *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think the story would be more presentable if put into paragraphs where needed. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: I felt the storyline was missing something. It needs more detail. For example, perhaps more about the missing canine and its owner. Again, this is just my opinion.

I wish you the best, and welcome you to Writing.Com. *Note1*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review of My Rock Has Gone  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual and a capitalization error were noticed. For example, periods should replace the commas following "has gone", "stars above", "so clear", and "once was", and "i've" capitalized".*Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a good job of expressing the emotions an individual has when one they love leaves them. I liked the comparison to fading stars and the light leading the way to the pain felt.
Best wishes, and a friendly welcome to Writing.Com. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or others spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Being as it is used in some of the lines, I think using punctuation and rhyme would make for a better presentation and read. Please keep in mind that this is only an opinion though. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You did a good job of relaying what you think Bella feels when Edward leaves her. Twilight fans will enjoy the poem as much as I did. I wish you the best, and welcome you to Writing.Com. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of MOONLIT KISSES  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: You painted a poetic masterpiece using the prompt for this week. I don't think a reader here hasn't experienced the passion and experiences that leave nothing but memories. Very well done! *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review of Last Stand  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in a couple of the stanzas, but other than that, no errors were spotted, and I have no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery and emotions are relayed well. Dreams can be captured by the optimist and one who is willing to pursue them. You're right about choices. Making the right ones will lead to a bright future.

Welcome to WDC. I wish you the best!*Check2*

Sherri
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Review of HAUNTED CORRIDORS  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: You did a spectacular job of using the prompt for this week. The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery used in defining the woman's settings awesome. The evil nurse and her victim were relayed so well that chills raced up my spine. This would make for a great story. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Haunted Corridors  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Check4* ERRORS: Not one was spotted. *Check4*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: I have none to offer for improvement. *Reading*

*Note2* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a great job of using the prompt for this week. The tomb and its corridors are defined perfectly, and the people of the past described just as well. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of Nature's Voices  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I have no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery just as good. It is easy envisioning the mountains, birds, and other lovely natural things, and one can almost hear the whispers of the wind. Excellent poem! *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of THIS DREAM!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or others were noticed.*Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: No particular pattern was noticed, so I am assuming this is free verse. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a good job of using the prompt for this week. You remind readers of all He gave up for us. The imagery used in describing the crown and settings is terrific. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Cancer Girl  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "Trembling" needs no capitalization, and "I" capitalized in paragraph one. A comma should follow "me up" in the second, "whick/h" be "which", and a comma come after "weak". In the third paragraph, a comma should follow "months", "i" capitalized", and a comma come after "all year". In the fourth, a comma should follow "stopped, "i" capitalized, a comma come after "normal" and "debt". In the last, "i" should be capitalized. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: Having lost my mother to cancer almost seven years ago, this story of your battle was easy to relate to. I am glad your fight is over, and wish you the very best. Thank you for sharing this with us, and God bless you. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should replace the period after "at me", "wishing" not capitalized", and a comma come after "Hell". A comma should follow sound now", "looking down", "disgust", and "a torch". Others like these noticed throughout the story also. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Placing a space between paragraphs would not only make for a better presentation, but a much easier read. Only my humble opinion though. *Smile* *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: The imagery used in describing the torture was horrifying, yet good. I certainly would not want to be in the victim's place. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of Born in May  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the poem. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm is sensational, and the imagery of the season and the beauty that comes with it exceptional in my opinion. It is easy envisioning the lovely flowers, tress, birds, and insects. WRITE ON! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Pandora's Box  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "joined them" in paragraph one, a comma come after "night", and being as "had" is used just before it, I would change "had begun advertising his wares" to "and began advertising his wares." Just an opinion though. In the second paragraph, commas should come after "tall" and "hand". In the third, a comma should follow "grin". A comma should come after "thinned". *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: The characters are defined well, and the storyline good. *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the characters, box, and setting is good. What a disappointment the boy must have felt at purchasing an empty box after working so hard to get the funds. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Note1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and the only suggestion I have for improving the item is that I think "Well" and "some such thing/s could be cut and still have the same effect. Just my humble opinion though. *Note1*

*ButterflyG* CHARACTERS: You, your family, and the children are well defined. *ButterflyG*

*MushroomB* PLOT: I liked the storyline because it lets readers know about the individual behind the briefcase. *MushroomB*

*Flower1* MY THOUGHTS: As mentioned above, I enjoyed reading about the person behind the briefcase. The accident was horrible. I'll bet the child is thankful you were there to be of assistance. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello BIG BAD WOLF Happy July 4th! *Smile* This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by the wonderful InRain from
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*ButterflyV* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in stanzas one and five. For example, "mine" and "times" do not rhyme. *ButterflyV*

*MushroomG* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones mentioned above. *MushroomG*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: This is a wonderful tribute to your friend. Anyone knowing Kathy will agree. *Bigsmile* She is indeed as sweet as you think she is. I am certain she is honored by the dedication. WRITE ON! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Out of Time  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Commas should follow "Five" in paragraph two, "sallow" in the eighth, and "the room" in the twenty-second. Other than these, I can't think of any suggestions for improving the story. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: The characters are well defined, and the storyline terrific. *Writing*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in describing the details of the ruptured reactor core was fantastic, along with its effects. The short story is well written, and held my interest from beginning to end. *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of Blue Bird  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and the only suggestion this humble reader has to offer is that I would use punctuation where needed in all of the lines being as it is used in some of them. *Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

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*Flower1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of putting yourself in the jay's place. The imagery is outstanding. It was easy envisioning the garden fountain and other settings. The last verse was both sad and inspiring. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: The only one I have to offer is that "person" is used too closely together in paragraph one. Just an opinion, but I think changing one to something like "individual" would be better. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: I could not agree with you more about pursuing destiny before it might be lost to us. There are no guarantees on anything, which is pointed out clearly, but taking the chance is worth it in my humble opinion. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Starspear  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Commas should follow "oranges" and "violets" in the first stanza, "Longingly" in the second, and a period follow "the sky" in the third being as punctuation is used in the other lines. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery of the comet becoming a wishing star for the lovers is fabulous, and a reader can almost feel the chilly wind. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of Colored Glass  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "Not sharp" in paragraph one. In the third, commas should come after "Even now" and "old age". *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: You and your sister are portrayed very well, and the storyline touching. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: It is obvious that collecting glass was a hobby that made the bond between you and your sister stronger. I thought the story was well written and heartwarming. Welcome to the community. I wish you the best of luck. *Check2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or others were noticed.

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement.

*Star* MY LIKES: The rhythm is good, and so is the imagery. That pesky little gnat was easy to envision. I don't know what is worse; a gnat flying into your mouth, or how you felt about his demise. Keep writing! *Laugh*

Sherri
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