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Review of They Marched  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions to offer for improving the item other than adding "only" before "Daring" instead, and letting us know who "they" are. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm is super, and the imagery just as good. The poem sweeps a reader to a future that sounds promising. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of The Journey  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and the message excellent. You are right. One must be strong to make the journey and making the right decisions. This person chose to walk alone, and I found that sad. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Writing* ERRORS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted. *Writing*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: Only an opinion of this humble reader, but being as rhyme is used in some of the lines, I would do so in all of them. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: The imagery is outstanding, and the message just as good. You did a fantastic job of using the prompt for this week. I am glad Jacob changed in the end. *Thumbsup*

Sherri

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There are none.*Thumbsdown*

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Review of The oak  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would improve the cinquain. *Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

*Leaf2* PLOT: N/A *Leaf2*

*Flower1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the tree and your father is magnificent, and the verses flow perfectly. The poem is both inspiring and sad. Hang on to those beautiful memories. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of Just a Farmer  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes were noticed, and I have no suggestions to offer for improving the item. *Idea*

*Note1* MY PERSONAL FAVORITES: The rhythm is perfect, and the verses story-like. I enjoyed reading about how you began writing and how it progressed as you matured. Terrific poem! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a sensational job with the fifty-five word story. The turtle Jeremy missed had a shocking experience. *Laugh* All puns aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the tale. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Let Go  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were noticed. For example, no comma is needed after "I" or "like" in the first and second lines of the first verse, or "between" in the second. *Flower2*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Writing* OVERALL OPINION: Except for several punctual errors and some of the lines not following the same rhyming pattern as the others, I thought the poem was good. The last two verses were my personal favorites, for they expressed the strength to get out of the things darkening your life and moving on. *Writing*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Like the one read before it, the rhythm is off in some of the lines. The only suggestion I have is that following a similar pattern in all of the lines would make for a much better read. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: This does not sound like a friend many would want. Selfishness and pretense are not part of a lasting camaraderie, which is relayed well in the piece. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of I Found You  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhyming pattern is off in several of the verses. You begin with one, and then it drifts in and out. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Other than the one mentioned above, I have none to offer. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The imagery is super, and the emotions lovely. The perfect mess defined in the poem seemingly turned out to be very special to you. Well done! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of ubsurd argument  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "set-backs" in the first paragraph. "is" should come before "to change" in the second. No comma is needed after "a time" in paragraph three. Several others like these noticed as well. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: I wholeheartedly agree with many of your opinions. Too many base relationships on infatuation instead of love. Most of these kind of attractions result in nothing more than wasted time. I also agree with your definition of happiness, although I do not think a child's fantasy should be stripped of them. Parents need to remember that children need security, love, and morals. Their parents should not inform them of lost loves or bad relationships until they are at an age where they can comprehend these things. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A couple of errors were spotted, but did not take away from the poem in my opinion. For example, a comma should follow "gone" and "live" in the first verse. *Idea*

*Reading* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Reading*

*Check2* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is superb, and the prompt for this week used perfectly. The gift given is a magnanimous one. Being a donor is a blessing to so many, which is relayed well in the poem. *Check2*

Sherri
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Review of No Turning Back  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, punctual or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the short story. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The mother was portrayed well in such a short tale, and the storyline unusual, but good. *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The plot was mysterious to me. I would love to see more added to it explaining what happened to the parent. Very well written story with such limited word use. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Retribution  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Note5* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "Darkness" in the first paragraph, and "this" after "believed". In the third, a comma should follow "magic" and "dark". A comma should follow "suffocating" in the fourth. Just an opinion, but I also think the sentence would make for a better read if worded like this: "He could feel himself suffocating", or "He felt like he was suffocating,". Several others like these noticed throughout the tale as well. *Note5*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The spirit and the sorcerer are portrayed well, and the storyline good. *Note1*

*Flower1* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The sorcerer certainly paid an extravagant due for the sins he felt were committed. The plot was good. I found it both dark and mysterious. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of The Next Victim  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Other than a larger space between paragraphs one and two, no other mistakes were spotted. I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Leaf1*

*Flower2* CHARACTERS: Cathy and the demon are portrayed well. *Flower2*

*Star* PLOT: It held my interest from beginning to the mysterious end. *Star*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: Cathy and Peter's blessing certainly turned out to be quite the opposite. I thought the storyline was fantastic. It is dark and mysterious. I liked that. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review of Dark Visitor  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I could make that would possibly improve the item. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: The grave site was described in a dark, yet very well described way. *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is super, and the verses eerie, yet well written. From the storm to the hag, I was drawn into the poem that I think would make a great short story. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the poem. *Idea*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Exclaim*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: You did a marvelous job of using the prompt. The imagery is awesome, and the image before the poem an additional plus in my opinion. A reader can easily picture the eerie book and nearly hear the voices. Great poem! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the short story. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a terrific job of using the prompt for this week. The setting and Shawna's emotions are defined clearly, and the storyline good. You did a splendid job of relaying how no one can defeat mortality, especially if they think like Shawna. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a single mistake was noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of to improve the senryu. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: It amazes me how great the imagery is in such a short poem. The senryu left me with a serene feeling after reading it. Beautifully written! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery just as perfect. It was easy envisioning the chiseled face, tattoos, and sharp claws of the woman, yet I still felt a small pang of sympathy for her at the end due to the change after light came. *Writing*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "Soul" needs no capitalization in the first verse, "Son" in the third, and "Soul" in the last. No others noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim*SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Flower2* OVERALL OPINION: This is a beautiful tribute from the son to his parent. I especially liked the verses about making his dreams come true and believing in him. *Flower2*

Sherri
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would make for an improvement. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: I thought the poem was simply written, yet so lovely. The imagery used in describing the individuals assumed to be lovers is magnificent. A reader can easily envision the hushed conversation and the way they touch. Loved the poem! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Check4* ERRORS: No punctual, grammatical, or other mistakes spotted. *Check4*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Being as it is used in some of the lines, I think using punctuation where needed in all of them would make for a better presentation. Just this readers humble opinion though. *Reading*

*Note2* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery is absolutely wonderful! Who would not want to be carried over that rainbow? You are so right about love changing everything. Lovely poem! *Note2*

Sherri
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the story. *Exclaim*

*Note5* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Being as the story is dialog, the characters cannot be defined, but the storyline is fantastic. *Note5*

*Flower2* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Buddy is a feisty thing being as he is only the doll of a ventriloquist. *Laugh* I liked the bickering between him and his owner. Very well written short tale in my opinion. *Flower2*

Sherri
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Review of Chance Encounter  
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improving the poem. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and the poem reads almost like a short story. From the moment the wife left to meeting his old flame, you did a superb job of relaying that this was only an impulsive act, not one stemming from love, yet fantasy being something shared by most of us. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Change of Scenery  
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*Idea* MECHANICS: Commas should follow "bag" and "survival" in the second paragraph. In the third, a comma should come after "meetings". A comma should follow "you" and "home" in the seventh paragraph, and again after "foot" in the last. No other errors were noticed in making the random read. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: With the way Gladys behaved, I can see why Duncan smashed the phone. It is obvious his plan was to fake his demise on the mountain. You did a fantastic job of relaying why he wanted to do so. *Star*

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Sherri
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