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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello ShelleyA~13 years at WDC *Smile* This review is being made on behalf of the Showering Acts Of Joy and Simply Positive Groups.

*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Reading*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: I came upon your guest book when paying a visit to your portfolio again, and found it magnificent. This is a wonderful way to get to know others on the site better. Like always, it has been a pleasure visiting you. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello ShelleyA~13 years at WDC This review is being made on behalf of the Showering Acts Of Joy and Simply Positive Groups. *RainbowL**Smile**Rainbowr*

*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the page. *Flower1*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower3* MY THOUGHTS: This is a beautiful web page, and the introduction and poem included absolutely perfect in every sense of the word. They let readers know about the writer behind the briefcase. Wonderful web page and lovely images! *Flower3*

Sherri
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Review of TIME WILL TELL  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No punctual or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: I only have one to offer. I think "Nobody knows" would be better than "None knows" in the first verse. Please keep in mind that this is only an opinion from this humble reader. *Note3*

*Star* PLOT: N/A *Star*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is great, and the message superb. No one knows what the future holds. Faith that He is always there when needed gets us through the insecurities life hurls our way. Very good poem! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None for improving this wonderful survey. *Exclaim*

*Note5* PLOT: N/A *Note5*

*Check3* CHARACTERS: N/A *Check3*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: This is an excellent way to let readers know that another member is in need of our thoughts and prayers. I am proud to be a member of this group. God bless you for coming up with such a great idea. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello fyn *Heart* This review is being made on behalf of the Simply Positive and Showering Acts Of Joy Groups.

*Idea* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim*SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Flower2* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is excellent, and the imagery a poetic masterpiece. You did a magnificent job of defining the station, the sounds of the train, and the settings as they are passed. Very well written! *Flower2*

[b}Sherri
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Review of Earth Eagle  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would improve the poem. *Idea*

*Writing* MY LIKES: The imagery is fabulous. It is easy for readers to picture the squirrels gathering nuts and the turkey's red wattle. I also liked the quote by Wilder that comes before the poem. It is inspiring. *Writing*

Sherri

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none. I enjoyed the piece. *Thumbsdown*
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Review of icicle love  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, although the poem is not a traditional one. *Idea*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: None for improvement. *Note3*

*Star* PLOT: N/A *Star*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is absolutely superb. I could easily envision the frozen droplets melting. I like the style of the poem, and think it is well written. I wish you the best. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Night Terrors!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I can't think of any suggestions that would possibly improve the short story. *Flower1*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Both mother and child portrayed well, and the storyline terrific. *Writing*

*Flower3* MY THOUGHTS: You amaze me with how well you can write these short tales. It takes a talented writer to do so with a limited amount of words. Not only are the characters well defined, but the story well written. You did a great job of describing the child's fear of the dark. *Flower3*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Note4* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes spotted. *Note4*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I think would make for an improvement. *Idea*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of defining Jimmy's mother in just fifty-five words. Jimmy's emotions about meeting her were relayed just as superbly. Very, very well written in my opinion! *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of Just deserts  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one error was noticed, and that was that a comma should follow "Get me". I have no suggestions for improvement other than that. *Rainbowl**Smile**Rainbowr*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: In only fifty-five words, they cannot be defined as well as in longer stories. *Exclaim*

*Leaf2* PLOT: Good, considering the length of the tale. *Leaf2*

*Flower1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a super job of pointing out one accidental fall after another in such a short story. I liked that, and thought it was well done. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of When I Die  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Pencil* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, pr other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is terrific, and the verses flow well. I do not think a reader her will not be able to relate to this poem. We all have regrets about one thing or another and wish we could change things. Sometimes it is possible. I hope it is for you. *Smile* *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Locks of Gold  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: Not one mistake was noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None that I think would improve the item. *Idea*

*Check4* MY FAVORITES: Every line relays the emotions written about with clarity that leads up to the reality in the final one. Sad, yet true, reality sometimes strips an individual of the other feelings. *Check4*

Sherri
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Review of Color Me Crimson  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an errors was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would improve the piece. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery is fabulous, the verses flow well, and the emotions expressed just as good. My personal favorites are the stanzas about your heritage, lost humanity, and betrayal. Very well written! *Note5*
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Review of Awakening  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Note5* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improvement. *Note5*

*Check3* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Check3*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job with the imagery. A reader can almost feel the frosty bite. Very well done! *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of Alive  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Writing* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the item. *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is magnificent! I liked the combination of nature and emotion. I love a good rain, and the cleansing thoughts relayed in the poem are uplifting.*Star*

Sherri
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Review of Heritage Lost  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello warriormom *Heart* This is the first of three reviews gifted to you by the generous ~ Santa Sisco ~ as part of the READ ALL ABOUT IT DELUXE PACKAGE from
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and no suggestions for improvement to offer. *Flower1*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower3* MY THOUGHTS: The verses flow well, and the emotions relayed just as good. So much of Native American heritage has been lost, and it is sad. I revere Native American cultures and beliefs, and empathize with you not knowing of your great grandfather's tribe. *Flower3*

Sherri
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Review of The Fish Tale  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was spotted, and I can't think of any suggestions I could make to improve the short story. *Idea*

*Note5* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note5*

*Exclaim* PLOT: It was short, but to the point and humorous just as it was supposed to be, which says a lot in my opinion. It is very difficult writing a story using only fifty-five words. *Exclaim*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: I thought the story was outstanding. The imagery used in describing the way the fish eyes the worm and the worm sneering at the bass was super. Ah, and then it was dinner time. *Smirk* *Laugh* Very well written! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Jake and Bagheera  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: I can't think of any that would improve the story. *Reading*

*Note3* OVERALL OPINION: Sheila and the other characters are defined well and with realism. I liked that. The storyline was uplifting, and held my interest from the invitation made by Sheila to go to the market to the purchases made there. My heart went out to Sheila when reading about her failing eyesight. Meghan's idea for a guide dog was super. I was thrilled when both canines got along. Great story! *Note3*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other errors were noticed, and I have no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The verses flow well, the rhythm good, and the message terrific. As expressed in the poem, ignorance is not always bliss, although I think many misinterpret the old saying. I think in most cases this means that some things are better not known. There are times when one should refrain from blurting out their feelings for the sake of another. You did a super job of relaying both the optimist and the pessimist. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of From East to West  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed, and the only suggestion this humble reader has is that the first verse should follow the same length in pattern as the others. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good in almost all of the verses. In the second, "times" and "rhyme" do not follow the same rhythm, and in the fourth, "alike" does not rhyme with the other words. Still, the poem is very enjoyable. The imagery is great, and the emotions lovely. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review of As the River Goes  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No punctual, grammatical, or other errors were noticed, and I have no suggestions for improvement. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: N/A *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: You did a superb job of defining genuine friendship. As relayed, a true comrade is there through thick and thin. That ocean of love and dreams is always present as long as there is someone special to share them with. Very well written poem! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review of Paper Cuts  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Commas should follow "die", "can die", "like this", and "suicide" in paragraph one. In the second, a period should replace the comma after "feel", a comma follow "in words", a period come after "forever, "it's" capitalized, a comma follow "I mean" and "oxygen", a comma after "emptiness" in the second. "there gone" should be "they're gone" instead. Numerous others like these noticed throughout the story. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Other than doing some editing for errors like the ones mentioned above, there are no others. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The way you relay your reasons for having no feelings, although I do not agree that dying is a solution. Pain and emptiness are things that can be dealt with by talking to a professional, family, and friends. You are alive as long as you feel, which you obviously do even though they are bad feelings. I wish you happiness. *Smile* *Star*

Sherri
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Review of playgroup  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Writing* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: "i" should be capitalized, and there is an unneeded space between "jackpot" and the exclamation mark. Other than these, no other errors were noticed. Just this readers humble suggestion, but being as it is used in some of the lines, I think the poem would make for a better presentation if punctuation was used where needed in the entire piece. *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is good, and I liked the way love was summed up in just several short lines. *Thumbsup* *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or others were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the piece. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: You did a remarkable job with the acrostic. I could not agree more that our hopes, dreams, and goals must start at the beginning. Most of us are nervous about change, however, it is part of experiencing life. May your every dream be captured. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Other than the rhythm being off in a couple of the lines, no other errors were spotted, and I have no suggestions for improving the poem. For example, "see" and "think" do not follow the same rhyming pattern found in the other verses. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Other than the ones mentioned above, I thought the rhythm was good. The verses flow well, and the imagery is just as terrific. Personal favorites? I had none. I thought the entire poem was good. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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