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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*RainbowL**RainbowR* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Other than several of the lines not following the same rhyming pattern, no errors were spotted. For example, "feet" and "beach" do not rhyme. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in defining the setting surrounding the lighthouse is picture perfect. A reader can easily envision the sea and other natural beauty. Wonderful poem! *Peace*

Sherri
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Review of Wiener Factory  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Commas should follow "angry was he" and "Answer me", and "macabre shall" should be "macabre shawl" instead. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: Nathan and the plant manager described well. *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: I thought the storyline was creepy, but super. *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: The story sent chills up my spine. Pigs in human masks, and Nathan wearing the bloodstained whites and shawl presented a horrifying picture, and the finale was even more terrifying. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of The Home Visit  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Writing* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Writing*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: I can't think of any for improvement. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: The imagery is excellent for such a short story, and the plot awesome. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none. I liked the entire story. *Thumbsdown*

*Note2* OVERALL OPINION: The boy and the social worker are portrayed well, and the storyline terrific. Looks like the child practiced the writings in the dark book. *Shock* *Note2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, punctual, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Flower1*

*Note3* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note3*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Check2* MY LIKES: You did a magnificent job of letting readers know about the effects A.D.D. has on those who have the disorder. I commend you on doing such a fantastic job in such a short item. It amazes me how much detail is given in only fifty-five words. *Check2*

Keep writing!

Sherri

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none. The entire story is great. *Thumbsdown*
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* MECHANICS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would possibly improve the poem. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. I found the poem very touching, and a beautiful tribute to your mother. There is nothing better than being comforted in a mother's arms. This was my personal favorite, although the entire poem tugged at my heart:

In my mother’s arms
I rediscover lost dreams.
I regain the sap of spirit,
the gift of reaching out. *Star*


Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a fantastic job of letting readers know why you love music. Although I am not Celtic, I share your sentiments. Music relaxes me and is like a comforting arm when I am stressed out or depressed. Like you, I thank God for music. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions to offer for improving the poem. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You painted a poetic masterpiece in my opinion. The imagery is superb. I could almost see the colorful flowers and bushes. I love Spring and all of the beauty that comes with it with the exception of allergy attacks and the bird droppings. *Laugh* *Star*

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A comma should replace the period following "feast upon" in the second paragraph, and "Which" not capitalized. Other than that, no other errors were noticed, and I have no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: Dave was perfectly defined, and the storyline super. A naturalist, I was drawn to the short story from beginning to end. *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the bird and its surroundings was magnificent, and the moral of the story just as good. Dave was one wise bird. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!
Sherri
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Review of The First Blows  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "realization" in paragraph one, and commas should come after "Well", "10th", an unneeded space follows "I didn't", a comma after "alcohol", "my mine" be "my mind" instead in the same paragraph. In the second, an unneeded space follows "marriage I". Several others like these noticed throughout the short story as well. *Flower1*

*Note3* CHARACTERS: Steve was a barbarian, and defined well. *Note3*

*Writing* PLOT: The storyline left me feeling both angry and sad. How anyone could be so cruel and abusive is beyond me. *Writing*

*Check2* MY LIKES: The determination of the woman not to let her abusive mate take her inheritance, and when she decided to divorce the beast who blackened her eyes. *Check2*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none except for Steve. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "structure" in paragraph one. A comma should follow "cardboard box" in the fifth. "towards" should be "toward" in the ninth paragraph. A period should replace the exclamation mark after "where she was" in the eleventh. Others like these noticed throughout the story also. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Kyle was as mysterious in this chapter as in the others read before it, and Cathy portrayed just as well. The storyline held my interest from beginning to end. *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: Salus and the others defined very well.*Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: Although I enjoyed all the ones read before it, this chapter is my favorite because it explains why Kyle behaves as he does. Being shuffled from one foster home to another after the death of his father tugged at my heart. Kyle's reaction to what Cathy told him about Decretum was another mystery. WRITE ON! *Note5*
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: In paragraph one, Strut" should be "struts" instead, and a comma follow "demon". Only an opinion, but I think the characters would be related to more if all were named. Just an opinion though. In the sixth, a comma should come after "his spine". *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Kyle and the other characters well defined, although I think his roommate and attackers would be easier to relate to if given names. The storyline is just as super as the prologue read before it.*Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the settings is awesome in my opinion. The club and other settings once Kyle left were easy to envision. I also like the way you make Kyle mysterious in description, leaving a reader wondering why he is so dark in appearance. Personally, I felt the fight scenes were just as good. *Note5*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None that would possibly improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You have painted a poetic masterpiece using this weeks prompt. The rhythm is spectacular, and the imagery is just as sensational. Like you, I would give anything to be in my mother's arms again. I liked the way you swept me back to a time when it was so hard making ends meet, how your mother scrubbed floors for little or nothing, and how the garden and wild meet caught for by your siblings helped. In this day and age, so many take the simple things in life for granted and have forgotten these special people who worked so hard to provide in the Depression. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Blink  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Like the ones read before it, no grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

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*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The verses flow exceptionally, and the imagery just as good. You did a fantastic job of relaying how in the blink of an eye a loved one can walk away. Wouldn't it be great if we could capture some of those yesterdays? *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of 68 Minutes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I have no suggestions to offer for improving the poem. *Flower1*

*Note3* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note3*

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*Check2* MY LIKES: The rhythm is excellent, and the imagery sad, yet just as great. It's too bad everyone doesn't feel similarly about special children. How anyone like the driver could dismiss the child's emotions is beyond me, which proves that adults can be as unmerciful as the boy's younger peers. *Check2*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* ERRORS: Not one mistake was spotted. *Note1*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Note3*

*Note2* OVERALL OPINION: This poem is so heartbreaking. It is sad knowing that these things happen in our beautiful world. The imagery used in describing the neglected and sidewalk flowers literally brought tears to my eyes, and I agree with the last verse wholeheartedly. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of My magical ship  
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*Idea* ERRORS: Several punctual were noticed. For example, commas should follow "Alone", "taking me", and quotation marks come after "with the wind". *Idea*

*Flower1* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Flower1*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: You did a wonderful job of using this weeks prompt. the imagery used in describing the angels, the sea, and other settings was terrific. Well done! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions to offer for improvement. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: You did a fantastic job of using the prompt for this week. The verses flow superbly. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There were none. *Thumbsdown*

*Pencil* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is dynamite, and the emotions relayed so well I could feel them myself. I can easily relate to a time when loving came easily, and how it is sometimes dangerous to love. It is too bad that we are often misled and left with bitter feelings or are hurt. Like mentioned in the entry, I found comfort in moving on. *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of BorderLines  
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Let me begin by saying I do not normally read blogs, but spotted this on the review list, and I was drawn into it by the title. *Smile* No punctual or other mistakes noticed, and I have no suggestions for improving the blog. *Idea*

*Note1* MY PERSONAL FAVORITES: Your honesty despite how others may find it opinionated. I find that trait admirable. I also like the fact that you write what you feel even if you do not think it of real importance. For example, the entry about Shaggy. I wish you the best of luck with your novel. *Note1*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Inlove* MY LIKES: You did a magnificent job of using the prompts given, especially being as this item is not fictional. I was touched by your feelings regarding the individuals in the nursing home who were either forsaken or abandoned by family members. The loneliness and heartache these people feel must be tremendous. I am so sorry to hear about the tumor, yet feel it was His way for you to open your heart to the elderly. Thank you for sharing this with the community, and for being wonderful you. *Inlove*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just this readers humble opinion, but I would delete "all" after "children" in the first verse. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Inlove* MY LIKES: The verses flow well, and the imagery is super. The image before the poem is an additional plus in my opinion. It's amazing how hopping into the car with no destination can be so much fun and uplifting. You did a good job of relaying that. *Inlove*
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Review of Starting Over  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, punctual, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions I could make that would improve the acrostic. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Inlove* MY LIKES: You did a superb job of writing the poem. Like you, I believe we all should strive for doing the best we can and seizing opportunities when they arise. I could not agree more that everyone should keep in mind that He is in charge of our lives. *Inlove*

Sherri
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Review of Autumn  
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of ant suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Inlove* MY LIKES: The imagery is outstanding. You painted a poetic masterpiece in every line that describes the beauty of Autumn to a tee. It is easy for readers to envision the changing colors and night sky. *Inlove*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A semi-colon should replace the comma that follows "back", a comma come after "isle", a period replace the comma following "bones", and "it" capitalized, a comma come after "weeks", the first "I" in "I yet I" deleted, a period replace the comma that follows "go" and "it" capitalized, and "myself" be "me" instead. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: He was described well, but I felt the woman should be given some detail as well. Just a humble opinion though. The storyline was touching. *Writing*

*Inlove* MY LIKES: I thought the way she waited for him despite the tragedy was moving. The finale was inspiring, and the imagery good. *Inlove*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* No punctual, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and the imagery absolutely wonderful. It was easy envisioning the stars and creatures we were blessed with. The poem is so inspiring, and the message one everyone should make note of. The last three verses relay all that needs to be said. Very well written poem! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Sherri
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Review of Betrayed  
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*Exclaim* The rhythm is off in several of the verses. For example, in the second verse, "cars" and "eye" do not rhyme; in the eighth, "arms" and "job" do not follow the same pattern. You did a great job of relaying how one thing leads to another on a bad day. Your boss was one thing, but what transpired when you went home to tell your wife the news horrible. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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