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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should replace the period following "pale blue eyes", and "i" capitalized. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You did a fine job of relaying what it is like to love someone with all of your heart, yet losing that individual. My heart goes out to anyone who has gone through similar losses. Welcome to the community. I wish you the best! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of solitary rose  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "i" and "i'm" should be capitalized in all of the lines needed, and a couple of spacing errors were noticed. For example, a space should come between the comma after "become weeks" and "i survive". *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is outstanding in most of the verses, and the imagery just as good. I like the combination of nature and emotion, but what I liked best was the way strength is stressed to keep trudging along despite obstacles. Welcome to the community. I wish you the best! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Only two were spotted. "i'm" should be capitalized in the final verse, and the last line does not follow the same rhyming pattern as in the others. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of to improve the item. *Reading*

*Note2* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Note2*

*Note1* OVERALL OPINION: Except for the one mentioned above, the rhythm is good, and the thoughts of the child relayed well. Anyone with children can relate to them waiting for school to end and the embarrassment the child must have felt when colliding with Mr. Small. Well done! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of She Will Wait  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Check4* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes spotted. *Check4*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Note2* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery is absolutely great, and the emotions expressed somewhat sad, as well as beautiful. It seems like the love that was supposed to be unconditional was taken for granted. Her love is unconditional, but does not appear to have been shared completely by the other. *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of A Horse's Freedom  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the haiku. *Exclaim*

*Shamrock* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in defining the animal is excellent, You managed to paint a lovely picture in just three short lines. This was impressive to me. A sleek black stallion came to mind when I read the piece, for stallions are my favorite. *Shamrock*

Sherri
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Review of Homecoming  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* This is the second of four reviews gifted to you by the wonderful ~ Santa Sisco ~ as part of the REVIEW PACKAGE from
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No punctual, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the story. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Lyle described perfectly, and the storyline outstanding. *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: Earth and the other planets are defined well, as was the lighthouse. *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the breeze and the spire of the lighthouse were easily envisioned, and the poem an additional plus. The words and images that sprang to Lyle's mind were lovely. EXCELLENT STORY, Ken! *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions I can offer for improving the short tale. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: Reginald and Chatsworth are defined well, and the plot super. Like your poetry, your stories are just as sensational, Ken. You are a versatile writer. I like that. Not only are the characters relayed superbly, but the settings also. You did a fabulous job with the prompts given, and the, eh, accommodations Chatsworth suggested a lead up for continuation I am sure many readers would enjoy. *Star*

~Sherri~
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Review of Emily's Room  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, punctual or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improving the short story. *Idea*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: Emily and her mother are defined well, and so is George. The imagery and setting are described perfectly, and the storyline terrific. I liked the way Emily's imagination when looking at the clouds surfaced, and the comparison to mother and creature. Great story, Ken! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of James  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A semi-colon should replace the comma after "shoulders" in the first paragraph. A comma should follow "hole" in the sixth, and "to get" in the seventh. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: James was right. The key character is deranged in my opinion. Blaming James for his losses is ridiculous. I thoroughly enjoyed the short story. *Note5*
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Review of Innocence's Blood  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Check2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the short story other than placing a space between paragraphs three through five. *Check2*

*Exclaim* MY THOUGHTS: Sarah and the other characters are well defined, and the storyline awesome. I felt so sorry for Sarah when she heard the conversation between her relatives, which turned to anger when she cut herself over talk that should not have been discussed knowing there was a possibility she would hear it. Tears literally came to my eyes when reading the finale. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "thing" in paragraph one. "changing it up" does not read right in my humble opinion. I would delete "up". Only a suggestion though. A comma should come after "said" in the second paragraph. The same applies to "says", "asked" and "says" in the same paragraph. "not" should be capitalized in the third, and "i" in the fourth. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Just another suggestion, but I think the key character would be easier to relate to if given a name. The storyline touched me. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: The plot held my interest from beginning to end. The child wanting to give her parent something special for a gift was moving. Cleaning his or her room was the perfect surprise. What mother would not appreciate that? *Wink* I wish you the very best. *Check2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: The second paragraph could be combined with the third for a better presentation in my humble opinion. Only a suggestion though. *Smile* There is an unneeded space between "learn" and "the state" in the third, and "is one" should be part of the same paragraph. Similar things like these noticed throughout the monologue also. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: You did a super job of relaying the importance of providing the body with physical and emotional nourishment. Very well done! *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of LOVE IS...  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes of any kind were noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions to offer for improving the prose. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a splendid job of expressing the meaning of genuine love. The imagery is absolutely dynamite. I could not agree that love is medicinal when we are ailing, and that it is as vibrant as the sky and trees following a storm. You painted a masterpiece of the sentiment in my opinion. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of COMING UP FOR AIR  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Writing* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions that would improve the poem. *Writing*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery perfect too. The elements are relayed in a serene way easy to relate to. I loved the second, third, and final verse, although I stress that the entire poem is outstanding. It has been a pleasure visiting your portfolio. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, or other mistakes noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: Alice is well defined from her emotions to her singing. *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: I thought the storyline was most enjoyable. *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: The narrative touched my heart. The imagery used in describing Alice and the natural surroundings of her place of peace is excellent. My heart went out to her, yet the finale was uplifting. She could not be in better hands. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions to improve the poem. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a splendid job of using the prompt for this week. The imagery is fabulous, and the poem terribly romantic. I hope that color and quality never fades. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not one mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Note4* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note4*

*Pencil* PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in defining the woman, beacon, and ocean is superb, and the Cherokee spirit relayed wonderfully. I could walk the path forever. I hope she is never abandoned, and that your every dream is captured. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Dancing Alone  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: None were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any for improving the lyrics. *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is sensational, and the emotions expressed very well. I think the lyrics are powerful. Building a relationship with one who does not even attempt to help it flourish is impossible. Severing the relationship was best under these circumstances. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Tattered Edges  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Daizy May *Smile* This is a Simply Positive member review.

*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a single mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. Having visited your port before, this did not surprise me though. *Idea*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is dynamite, and the imagery just as superb. That tattered shirt reminds me of several articles of clothing I feel similarly about. Tattered or not, this shirt means something special to you. Hold on to it until it cannot be salvaged as mentioned in the poem. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This is a Simply Positive member review. *Heart*

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a single mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: This is a sensational contest for those who enjoy writing dark items, Ann. The details are relayed clearly, and the prizes offered super. The prompts for this month are excellent. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: None were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Note5* PERSONAL FAVORITES: You did a super job of letting readers know your thoughts on reviewing and rating a writers work. I agree with most of them, although every readers taste varies just like a good book or movie, and I also feel that the best reward one can get for writing is a great review and an honest one. Awards are an excellent way to honor an item we think is terrific. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of The Storm  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON
A LITTLE SOMETHING PACKAGE with the message "A little something from Staine."

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would possibly make for improvement. *Idea*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery fantastic. Readers can easily envision the prancing raindrops during the storm, and the darkness around you as the trees fall. I love a good storm, and enjoyed every verse. *Check2*

Sherri
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Review of Far Away  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello StephBee *Heart* This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by StaiNed- from
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#1546637 by SHERRI GIBSON
A LITTLE SOMETHING PACKAGE. She sends you this message: "A little something from Staine."

*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the acrostic. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: Although I am not familiar with the user mentioned or the characters used in the lands mentioned, you did a fine job with the acrostic. You haven proven to those who have not had the pleasure of reading your work before what a versatile writer you are, Steph. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of My Love...  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes of any kind were spotted, and I have no suggestions to offer for improving the item. *Note1*

*Check3* CHARACTERS: N/A *Check3*

*Note3* PLOT: N/A *Note3*

*Flower1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery is outstanding, and the emotions beautifully relayed. I was drawn in from the moment your love was compared to the moon and stars. To love someone so powerfully and know they will always be there is paradise indeed. Lovely poem! *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of Broard Shoulders  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: "daily" could be deleted in the first verse and still have the same effect. "complait" should be "complaint" in the third verse. A space is needed after the comma following "gracefully" and "though" in the fourth. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The optimism used to inform others that He is with us through the good and bad times. I also liked the way you advise us to carry on without complaints, although pain might be felt. Inspiring poem! *Star*

Sherri
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