What an adventure!
Found your piece in Poetry Newsletter 10-24-2012.
Stormy saw something in it and what a great inclusion.
Form and structure are foundational for such a read.
Effortless rhyming enhances the wonder of the piece.
The imagery transports the reader to the island.
Flow is smooth as the conversations with different trees occur.
Pace is slow and easy on the eyes with the absence of grammatical snafu's.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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You're featured in Poetry Newsletter 10-24-12.
Flawless rhyme scheme gives this piece it's charm.
Form and structure are assets.
Flow is smooth and pleasant.
Pace is slow and easy going.
Unhindered by grammatical snafu's, no suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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You are featured in Stormy's Poetry Newsletter.
I use them for reviewing fodder.
The reader feels the regret, sadness, and sliver of hope.
Imagery that readers can identify with.
The form and structure are symmetrical in nature.
Form is easy on the eyes.
Pace is rapid as the lines are devoured one line at a time.
No grammatical snafu's stick out.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 10-24-2012.
I use the newsletter to garner reviewing material and Stormy included yours here.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is easy going and creepy.
Pace is slow as the reader interacts with your imagery.
Prosaic nature of this piece fits the tale well.
In the absence of grammatical snafus no suggestions for improvement are necessary here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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What a cool sig from the treasure designs.
I found my latest ones from there which i haven't revealed yet.
At least I don't remember.
You're super!
Have a happy, safe, and blessed harvest fest.
A dedication of your writing to the Lord.
Strikes an emotional chord.
August of 1987, this writer too dedicated writing to the Lord.
One of the skills He granted me with is the Acrostic.
They seem to flow so easily and in the lines or in between you see Him there.
Form and structure are consistent and eye catching.
Imagery is poignant and the reader understands this is a dedicating.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is medium.
Grammatically snafu free there are no suggestions for improvement needed in your piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Founder of Copenator's Crew
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 10-24-12, at the very end, where you submitted it for consideration. Shannon saw something in it and this reader did too. Thanks for writing.
A sad tale is found rounding out the pages of Spiritual Newsletter 10-24-12.
I use the newsletters often to garner reviewing fodder.
Shannon saw something in this and the reader clicked through.
Imagery is clear and telling.
Form and structure are solid foundations.
Flow is easy going as the reader gets a ringside seat to the matter at hand.
Pace is slow and it should be so.
Much is shown in lines that speak of ones un-requieted love ending in the worst of way.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out!
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Touche!
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 10-24-2012.
I use them as fodder for reviewing and what a piece.
Thanks for sharing your consideration, and for letting her sleep until the last minute.
Laughter and consternation are emotions the reader experiences.
Form and structure are strongly devised.
Flow is smooth and humor filled.
Hey how about a "head lamp" so that way you can still see and she can still sleep.
Pace is pristine and makes for a pleasant reading adventure.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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I can see why Shannon chose this one.
Wow! In reading over this piece much is just that.
Imagery is popping off the page.
Form and structure are basic.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slow as the reader lingers.
The message rings true in the end and the reader says wow!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 10-24-2012.
Forgiveness is the theme here and remembering the good things more than the bad.
Imagery is clear.
One emotion is the love of a father for his daughter who wrote a letter to her after an incident with her brother.
Form and structure are suitable to the piece.
Flow is smooth, unhindered by grammatical snafu's.
Pace is slow as the reader (your daughter first of all) reviews and considers what you have to say.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Carol you display such imagery. A task to write for fifteen minutes, such pageantry. Riding the winds of imagination, Oh the reader sees clearly such presentation. Look! There rides your beauty into the sunset.
Carol Your name an acrostic speaks of the beauty you so deftly depicted in this piece.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Flow is melodious and free too.
Pace is at a slow canter, as the images flow through the readers mind.
Grammatically snafu free,
You get a great big three!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Your limerick is a hoot.
The reader just has to laugh.
So few lines and it's finished.
The overall feel is humor.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is simple and entertaining.
Pace is rapid, because five lines just fly by.
Not a jot or tittle are out of place.
Thanks for writing in this space.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rivers of emotion flow here. Impacting us with each new line. Very real are the matters discussed. Even the form and structure contribute. Rising in tempo with each matter outlined.
River, your name an acrostic discusses the emotional toll this piece has.
The flow is like a smooth spring on a windless day.
The pace is not too slow, as the reader reads on.
Unhindered by grammatical snafu's your piece needs no suggestions for improvement.
Thanks for being here in the WdC, and having a heart for helping others through the many packages you have won in the auctions here.
This represents a bonus review combined with your name an Acrostic in your winning package for The Upgrade Membership Auction.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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The walls within are dangerous.
They serve to confine us.
Protection is not the result.
They become a cocoon from which we must burst.
Imagery in your piece brought forth these lines.
Form and structure are divine.
Rhyme scheme is magical
Flow is simple and rhythmical.
Pace is easy going.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement do you need.
Write on!
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Write on!
Copenator out!
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A very rhythmical flow is found here.
The rhyme scheme pops and creates a peaceful scene.
Form and structure are consistent.
Pace is slow and unhurried as the reader is mesmerized by the character.
The emotional ties that bind range from anticipation, freedom, wow, and beyond.
Overall feel at the end of this piece - You know your dolphins and speak the language of poetry so well even the reader feels they now know a little more about this magnificent creature.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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leader of Copenator's Crew
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Found you in Poetry Newsletter 10-10-12.
I use them to garner reviewing fodder and often find diamonds in the rough.
Your piece has been recognized already, and this reader now sees why.
You speak of the earth and the life she does spill.
As the world goes round and the grounds we do till.
Form and structure are efficient.
Prosaic scheme is clear and pleasant.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and the heart it does soothe.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Congrats on your first place win in the contest.
You're also featured in Spiritual Newsletter 10-10-2012.
Wow!
Pow!
That's the first reaction to this piece.
The feeling overall is one of peace.
You colored the horizon with your words,
In as little as 13 lines, you struck many chords.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Rhyme scheme is pristine and polished.
Flow is like a song that remains in your mind for days and days.
Pace is slow and tender, as the heart steps through the haze.
Grammatically snafu free!
Your piece deserves a 5 times three!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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The team work is the theme,
doing your best is the scheme.
Form and structure are awe inspiring.
Rhyme scheme is senses rendering.
Flow is natural and smooth.
Pace is alive as a chocolate smoothie.
Grammatically snafu free,
Suggestions for improvement are nil to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Amazing acrostic of your great niece.
Emotional tie that binds is delight.
You cherish the time you have with her.
Form and structure are suitable to the format of an acrostic.
Flow is adequate.
Pace is slow and worth the read.
Grammatically snafu free only 2 suggestion for improvement come to mind.
I would center this item. It would give your lines an easier flow and be more appealing to the eye.
Change the color choice of "G". It is so light that the letter is washed out.
Thank you for writing and sharing your story on the WdC.
Your support of the auction "Bear Hugs For You Auction" is appreciated and this is a partial fulfillment of that package you won.
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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You always have the best way to say things.
This piece of verse virtually sings.
Form and structure are sensational.
Rhyme scheme is melodic and practical.
Flow stops the show.
Pace is not too slow.
Grammatically pristine,
From you wisdom we do glean.
Write on and we will surely read on.
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Looking in your poetry folder,
this piece could not be bolder.
You address an issue of horror,
sending the readers heart asunder.
The imagery is so vivid,
There is emotion dripping from each line.
Despair, fear, it's all there.
The reader is exhausted by the end.
Form and structure are strong.
Flow is smooth and amazing.
Pace is slow as the imagery abounds.
The absence of grammatical matters is sufficient to negate the need to suggest any improvements at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Found your Coffee House in the Reviewers Items section on the left hand side.
Free advertisement helps every time. That's less GPs out of the coffers.
The form is standard forum fare.
The flow is somewhat halting as the amount of information seems overwhelming.
The pace is kind of slow as the reader digests the menu and extras.
Grammatically snafu clean no suggestions for improvement can be presented at this time.
Write on Lonewolf!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Very moving story.
Wow is all I can say.
Thanks for being there and sharing it with us.
Flow is amazing.
Pace is resolute.
The heart of the reader is captivated.
Imagery thst is alive and well one-step-at-a-time.
Grammaitcally pristine you're encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Wow what a story.
It so happens that our 25th wedding anniversary will occur on Christmas day 2012.
We were married on that day because the Lord provided the funds and opportunity to marry, what better way to thank Him than to be married on the day we celebrate the Lords birth.
An excellent flow is found in this story.
The emotional ties that bind are sadness, happiness, joy, and love.
You tell a story that the reader is grateful to read and see the happy ending.
Form and structure are foundational.
Pace is unhurried and appropriately so because of the wonderful story you tell the reader line-by-line.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Founder of Copenator's Crew
You shared your story in the Spiritual Newsletter and on 09-26-2012 the link was there.
Sophy thanked you greatly for sharing.
This writer does the same.
You were one of the first people I wrote an acrostic for when coming to the WdC, and I've seen you in the halls of the WdC for all that time, the WdC is blessed by that presence.
You present the reader with two situations in one story. A cancer scare and a 60th wedding anniversary drawing nigh.
The form and structure are excellent.
The flow is smooth all the way to the end.
The pace is slow as the reader reviews and digests what you are relating.
Emotionally the reader is left with a sense of happiness for the outcome that occurs.
He/she knows this family is blessed and takes hope for their lives.
Grammatically clean there are no suggestions for improvement.
Write on and best of blessings as you revise your novel.
Copenator out!
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