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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo!
Thanks for sharing this story, be it fictional or auto-biographical.
Your tale is equipped with all the basics to glue the reader to the page.
Structure is typical and serves as a good starting point.
Using the form of third person, telling the tale to your reader, you do so in a good pace and easy conversational manner. The reader is willing to listen to your tale unfold, as you have dictated the pace.
The subject of the story is peppered with imagery that hooks the reader throughout.
Grammatically clear and a delightful ending results in no suggestions for improvement needed for your piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry in motion, like the watery ocean.
Line by line you build, emotions the reader does yield.
Imagery that lights up the scene, so much to glean.
Structurally sound your piece goes to town.

Form that lends a good base, you pick up the pace.
Flowing smoothly and just plain grammatically snafu freely.
Overall feel in this piece, is anticipation and internal peace.
The ending stanza brings it all to bare, you're in love with your caffeine so fair.

The punchline is so well veiled, that the reader will (as did I) burst out in laughter when at last they arrive at the end of this affair.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found in Noticing Newbies 05-30-2012.
A sorrow filled tale from the dogs perspective unfolds.
Anger, sadness, and disbelief are emotions the reader encounters.
In a structure that draws the readers focus into the story.
The flow is crisp and smooth.
The pace is maddening as the readers emotions are boiling over by the time the end is reached.
Only slightly choppy created by a snafu in line #2 (becauuse) this writer suggests no other improvements be made to this piece.
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found in Noticing Newbies 05-30-2012.

Your definition of love is good.
About love there is a lot you understood.
Form is consistent and leads to a good flow.
Free verse motif fills the bill here.
Pace is comfortable and detail filled.
Emotionally the reader feels happiness, peace, and love.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are necessary.
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Review of I am Shattered  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter spotted your experiment,
and shared it in the 06-06-12 issue.
The shattered mirror lends it's help in defining yourself.
You see clearly now what you are.
The reader is captivated by the scene (imagery that spells success).
Form is experimental and works for the motif.
Flow is smooth, unhampered by the shards of words early on.
Pace is unhurried and grammatically snafu free.
No suggestions for improvement are forthcoming.
In fact this reader encourages you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Heart warming tale found in Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12.
A heart finds peace in the land of her ancestors at last.
A memory that will be with her, and now the reader through her sharing.
The emotional ties that bind are present in your stunning imagery throughout.
The reader is invested in the tale and left with the feeling there is more to come.
The flow is smooth as silk,
the pace is unhurried.
The prosaic timber is stellar,
unhampered by any grammatical snafu's of note.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12,
Finds the wow poem of the issue.
A photograph is used to evoke emotional responses.
The writer taps into the heart of the matter for the reader.
Form is great.
Prosaic nature is truly poetry in motion.
Flow is an eight.
Pace is steady,
Hampered only by momentary grammatical snafu's along.
Suggestions for improvement may be found below.
Line 3 "shades or}/u} grey" perhaps you meant "shades of grey?
Line 17 "you smile, could be, "your" smile.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Touch A Star  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your lesson.
Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12, included you in this session.
The reader feels the emotions of the teacher,
as youth misses the point and sally's forth.
Form is pristine,
Rhyming is a key theme.
Flow is melodic in nature,
Pace is unhurried and natural.
Unhampered by grammatical snafu's,
no suggestions for improvement are here for you.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Poetic Newsletter 06-06-12.
Finds feast in the midst of famine.
A tale of happiness and glee,
of sadness too, as away the couple must flee.

Emotionally impactful,
this piece is a hand full.
Form suited to readability.
Flow that appeals to our sensibility.

Prosaic scheme fits the theme.
Paced like a ballad, oh the melody.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good structure provides a base from which to launch.
Form is consistently aligned and lends to a smooth flow.
Pace is leisurely, peppered throughout with emotional tags that invests the readers heart, mind, and soul.
The sense of wonder at the creation, and the inherent responsibility one has shines through this piece.
The faith of the author is evident and comforting to those who believe in God, the father, creator, and provider.
Grammatically snafu free, there are no suggestions for improvement required in this piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Loss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good crossword and the story is good too.
Keep writing and sharing, for by doing so you are impacting another.
Look forward to the next crossword and story that goes with it.
No suggestions for improvement are needed at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Who's the Boss?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Enchanting tale of your puppies exploits.
The love you have for same is clear to see.
Structure is just fine.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate.
Flow is consistently smooth.
Pace is a grand slam, for it is grammatically snafu free.
Imagery keeps the reader invested in the glee.
Make no changes for your piece is fine.
Copenator out!
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Review of The Beach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Structure is excellent.
Form is consistent.
Flow is super dooper,
certainly not a party pooper.

Rhyme scheme is solid,
pace is really quite rapid.
Grammatically snafu free,
One suggestion for improvement this writer does see.
"perhaps you will say "yes"? = Is this a desired answer to a proposal? The ending confuses, perhaps a change to exclamation point or a little more to elaborate on what one is saying yes to.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Look at Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Wow! Wow!
Three stanzas of pow!
Here is how.

Structure is solid and persistent.
Form is strong and consistent.
Flow is rapid and detail filled.
Pace is snafu free and the reader feels,
the sadness that emanates from the plight of the shark.

This is out of the park!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of The Sea  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imagery sparkles and the reader is captivated.
The sea is drawing you and you surely answer.
Reveling in the fun found in the waves,
Your imagination abandoning itself to the sway.

Form is consistent enough to keep the reader in tow.
Flow is quaint and the imagery within does glow.
Pace is leisurely and detail filled.
Unhampered by grammatical snafu's, the reader is thrilled.

Suggestions for improvement are nil,
as this piece is cool and relaxing rolled into one.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA MDiv
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Review of Once Was An Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Precious comes to mind.
Heartfelt and so well composed.
The simplicity of the form is a charm.
The clarity of thought is remarkable.
Flow is as smooth as silk.
Pace is unhurried and pleasantly snafu free.
Tributes are always hard to write,
Because one has to struggle with emotional turmoil as well.
Suggestions for improvement in this case are not forthcoming.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Let Me Give  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Heartfelt prayer to the Lord of your desire to serve Him.
Using the skill of writing to express your heart is grand.
Imagery is real and the reader feels a great deal.
Form is consistent and well organized in thought.
There is a sense of one who is content to serve Him now.
Flowing smoothly with nary hint of grammatical snafu's, contributes to a pace that is easy going and sincere.
No suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
5 is just too small!
10 is getting there.
By gum this is a fifteen!
The Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 finds another masterpiece.

Congrats on your 2d place finish.
I'd of given you 1st to be sure.
The story is out of this world.
The details are so realistic.

Form and structure are anchors to read by.
Emotional tags are peppered throughout to keep the reader invested.
Flow is somewhat choppy, but does not hinder the readability of the piece.
Pace is break neck speed. The details are administered at the speed of line-by-line.
Grammatically snafu free, that alone is a big ole three.
Make no changes and continue sharing on the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of A Precious Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You certainly nailed the prompt and thanks for sharing your skill.
The Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 must have seen the potential as well for you are there for all to see and review.
The tale is that of a victim of abuse who is now in her own way trying to comfort the one who was her abuser. Her sister caught in the snare of a disorder that steals her away from the world.
Imagery that leads the reader into the depths of the mind of a sister who want's to say she's sorry for what she had done to her sister. Wow the emotion is real and the grey matter is graphically described.
The form and structure are standard and allows the reader to move forward at a decent flow. Paced at a good clip as the story progresses, the reader is engulfed by the scene you bring to life.
Bereft of discernible grammatical snafu's no room for suggestions for improvement is permitted.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy belated birthday Fyn. Your piece is in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-9-12.
Strength of character is visible here.
The husband walking with the wife through this time of battle.
Form and structure are solid and allow the reader a base from which to read a compelling story of life in the midst of diagnosis.
Flow is a wowser!
Smooth it is yes sir.
Pace is not too slow,
The story it does show.
Imagery runs the gamut of emotion,
Even down to the last line of elation.
With nary a grammatical snafu in sight,
to you a pleasant good night.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 locates stellar articles of courage in the face of tragedy.
Led off by a tale of ones last minutes on this earth due to a hit and run, the newsletter get's down to the facts of life.
Pam; a perfect Chantilly snowflake; shows strength of character in the face of dire illness. Strength that gives the reader hope that he/she might be able to be as strong in the midst of their own crises that may come their way.
Flow is flawless.
Pace is unhurried and enchanting even when the situation is so dire and compelling.
The conversational tone of this piece is indicative of the impact Pam's life had on the main character in this story. Almost an autobiographical snippet in the life of a nurse.
The absence of grammatical snafu's is sufficient to negate the necessity of suggestions for improvement.
Write on and write well as you surely are able to do.
Copenator out!
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Review of Ice cream night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Delightful.
Insightful.
Respectful.
Fun by the scoop full.

Imagery that draws the reader into the story.
It's just like a tale of life, told through experience.
Flow is superb and full of landmarks along the way to keep the readers attention.
Pace is smooth and unhurried, leaving the reader to wonder when so soon the end does come.

Life happens in this story,
A slice of familial history.
Told in such a way,
that in the story the reader wants o stay.

The absence of discernible grammatical snafu's leaves on suggestions for improvement in this piece.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Fighting Myself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story here.
There is fear.
There is humor,
There are emotions for sure.

Imagery that keeps the readers attention.
Flow is an asset in this piece, lending the reader a hand in maneuvering through the rest of the story. Pace is unhurried and full of still more emotional tags to keep the reader reeled in.
The small grammatical snafu's along the way are not sufficient to disrupt the feeling of reading a good story overall.
Suggestions for improvement include slight word choice changes.
"different then other girls", then should be than.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found you in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 04-25-2012.
A heartwarming tale from the eyes of a little one who had a series of calamities along the day.
Form is strong and well organized, with no noticeable grammatical snafu's to discuss.
Flow is excellent and conducive to a good pace that takes the reader on an adventure in lines that are full of cuteness and some hard times too. That's imagery that captures the imagination of the reader throughout your piece.
Empathy for the plight of the heroine in the tale is the main emotion felt.
The clincher is the heart warming hug and grand end of the day under warm non-boring covers.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter of 4/25/12

A very motivational treatise on the dream.
Your form is consistent and the quotes you add along the way inspire the reader to carry on towards their dreams and aspirations.
Flow is adequate with a few bumps in the road along the way, yet the meaning and intention of your piece is not lost by any means.
The pace is unhurried and gives the reader a sense of direction and confidence as you encourage them along the way to the end.
Emotionally charged imagery peppered throughout keeps the reader invested in the piece and makes the reader leave with anticipation of great things to come.
Suggestions for improvement are not necessary at this point.
You are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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