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Review of Melody of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A melodious piece.
Leaves the reader with peace.
Found in Poetry Newsletter 6-6-12,
Into the emotions of love you do delve.

Form is just right, out of sight.
Flow is not too slow.
Rhyme scheme has melody to it,
This song would be a country hit.

The woes of different work schedules,
Tempered by the moments in time when togetherness arrives.
Grammatically snafu free,
You deserve for this piece a thirty-three.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good structure provides a base from which to launch.
Form is consistently aligned and lends to a smooth flow.
Pace is leisurely, peppered throughout with emotional tags that invests the readers heart, mind, and soul.
The sense of wonder at the creation, and the inherent responsibility one has shines through this piece.
The faith of the author is evident and comforting to those who believe in God, the father, creator, and provider.
Grammatically snafu free, there are no suggestions for improvement required in this piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Loss  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good crossword and the story is good too.
Keep writing and sharing, for by doing so you are impacting another.
Look forward to the next crossword and story that goes with it.
No suggestions for improvement are needed at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Who's the Boss?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Enchanting tale of your puppies exploits.
The love you have for same is clear to see.
Structure is just fine.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate.
Flow is consistently smooth.
Pace is a grand slam, for it is grammatically snafu free.
Imagery keeps the reader invested in the glee.
Make no changes for your piece is fine.
Copenator out!
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Review of The Beach  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Structure is excellent.
Form is consistent.
Flow is super dooper,
certainly not a party pooper.

Rhyme scheme is solid,
pace is really quite rapid.
Grammatically snafu free,
One suggestion for improvement this writer does see.
"perhaps you will say "yes"? = Is this a desired answer to a proposal? The ending confuses, perhaps a change to exclamation point or a little more to elaborate on what one is saying yes to.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Look at Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Wow! Wow!
Three stanzas of pow!
Here is how.

Structure is solid and persistent.
Form is strong and consistent.
Flow is rapid and detail filled.
Pace is snafu free and the reader feels,
the sadness that emanates from the plight of the shark.

This is out of the park!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imagery sparkles and the reader is captivated.
The sea is drawing you and you surely answer.
Reveling in the fun found in the waves,
Your imagination abandoning itself to the sway.

Form is consistent enough to keep the reader in tow.
Flow is quaint and the imagery within does glow.
Pace is leisurely and detail filled.
Unhampered by grammatical snafu's, the reader is thrilled.

Suggestions for improvement are nil,
as this piece is cool and relaxing rolled into one.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA MDiv
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Review of Once Was An Angel  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Precious comes to mind.
Heartfelt and so well composed.
The simplicity of the form is a charm.
The clarity of thought is remarkable.
Flow is as smooth as silk.
Pace is unhurried and pleasantly snafu free.
Tributes are always hard to write,
Because one has to struggle with emotional turmoil as well.
Suggestions for improvement in this case are not forthcoming.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Let Me Give  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Heartfelt prayer to the Lord of your desire to serve Him.
Using the skill of writing to express your heart is grand.
Imagery is real and the reader feels a great deal.
Form is consistent and well organized in thought.
There is a sense of one who is content to serve Him now.
Flowing smoothly with nary hint of grammatical snafu's, contributes to a pace that is easy going and sincere.
No suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
5 is just too small!
10 is getting there.
By gum this is a fifteen!
The Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 finds another masterpiece.

Congrats on your 2d place finish.
I'd of given you 1st to be sure.
The story is out of this world.
The details are so realistic.

Form and structure are anchors to read by.
Emotional tags are peppered throughout to keep the reader invested.
Flow is somewhat choppy, but does not hinder the readability of the piece.
Pace is break neck speed. The details are administered at the speed of line-by-line.
Grammatically snafu free, that alone is a big ole three.
Make no changes and continue sharing on the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of A Precious Gift  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You certainly nailed the prompt and thanks for sharing your skill.
The Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 must have seen the potential as well for you are there for all to see and review.
The tale is that of a victim of abuse who is now in her own way trying to comfort the one who was her abuser. Her sister caught in the snare of a disorder that steals her away from the world.
Imagery that leads the reader into the depths of the mind of a sister who want's to say she's sorry for what she had done to her sister. Wow the emotion is real and the grey matter is graphically described.
The form and structure are standard and allows the reader to move forward at a decent flow. Paced at a good clip as the story progresses, the reader is engulfed by the scene you bring to life.
Bereft of discernible grammatical snafu's no room for suggestions for improvement is permitted.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy belated birthday Fyn. Your piece is in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-9-12.
Strength of character is visible here.
The husband walking with the wife through this time of battle.
Form and structure are solid and allow the reader a base from which to read a compelling story of life in the midst of diagnosis.
Flow is a wowser!
Smooth it is yes sir.
Pace is not too slow,
The story it does show.
Imagery runs the gamut of emotion,
Even down to the last line of elation.
With nary a grammatical snafu in sight,
to you a pleasant good night.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter of 5/9/12 locates stellar articles of courage in the face of tragedy.
Led off by a tale of ones last minutes on this earth due to a hit and run, the newsletter get's down to the facts of life.
Pam; a perfect Chantilly snowflake; shows strength of character in the face of dire illness. Strength that gives the reader hope that he/she might be able to be as strong in the midst of their own crises that may come their way.
Flow is flawless.
Pace is unhurried and enchanting even when the situation is so dire and compelling.
The conversational tone of this piece is indicative of the impact Pam's life had on the main character in this story. Almost an autobiographical snippet in the life of a nurse.
The absence of grammatical snafu's is sufficient to negate the necessity of suggestions for improvement.
Write on and write well as you surely are able to do.
Copenator out!
Review of "312 Snowflakes"
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Review of Ice cream night  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Delightful.
Insightful.
Respectful.
Fun by the scoop full.

Imagery that draws the reader into the story.
It's just like a tale of life, told through experience.
Flow is superb and full of landmarks along the way to keep the readers attention.
Pace is smooth and unhurried, leaving the reader to wonder when so soon the end does come.

Life happens in this story,
A slice of familial history.
Told in such a way,
that in the story the reader wants o stay.

The absence of discernible grammatical snafu's leaves on suggestions for improvement in this piece.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Fighting Myself  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story here.
There is fear.
There is humor,
There are emotions for sure.

Imagery that keeps the readers attention.
Flow is an asset in this piece, lending the reader a hand in maneuvering through the rest of the story. Pace is unhurried and full of still more emotional tags to keep the reader reeled in.
The small grammatical snafu's along the way are not sufficient to disrupt the feeling of reading a good story overall.
Suggestions for improvement include slight word choice changes.
"different then other girls", then should be than.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found you in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 04-25-2012.
A heartwarming tale from the eyes of a little one who had a series of calamities along the day.
Form is strong and well organized, with no noticeable grammatical snafu's to discuss.
Flow is excellent and conducive to a good pace that takes the reader on an adventure in lines that are full of cuteness and some hard times too. That's imagery that captures the imagination of the reader throughout your piece.
Empathy for the plight of the heroine in the tale is the main emotion felt.
The clincher is the heart warming hug and grand end of the day under warm non-boring covers.
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

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Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter of 4/25/12

A very motivational treatise on the dream.
Your form is consistent and the quotes you add along the way inspire the reader to carry on towards their dreams and aspirations.
Flow is adequate with a few bumps in the road along the way, yet the meaning and intention of your piece is not lost by any means.
The pace is unhurried and gives the reader a sense of direction and confidence as you encourage them along the way to the end.
Emotionally charged imagery peppered throughout keeps the reader invested in the piece and makes the reader leave with anticipation of great things to come.
Suggestions for improvement are not necessary at this point.
You are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A grand reminiscence of the great Michael Jackson.
There is evidence of real emotion that the reader picks up on.
The "Thriller" is gone but he lives on in the hearts of his fans who've loved him wherever they may be.
Flow is graceful and full of respect for Farrah and Michael both.
Pace is somewhat slow, however, the content keeps the readers attention from beginning to end.
Grammatically snafu free, you give the reader your heart about these two, and we are grateful to have found this piece.
Write on!
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Copenator out!
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Review of Questions  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Abuse is rampant in a world gone mad.
One has chosen to break the cycle and leave.
Here is the hope for others sinking in the morass of abusive relationships.
Imagery that highlights the issue and extends the hope.

Flow is good throughout.
Pace is hampered slightly in the end by grammatical bumps in the road.
Form is consistent and gives the reader a sense of direction.

Suggestions for improvement are minor and include the following.
Line 10 - fill should be feel
LIne 15: "answers" should be answer.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Condolences at the loss of this son.
May the family find comfort in the Father's Son.
Found in the Spiritual Newsletter 04-11-2012,
Into the wonders of the Lord's comfort let us delve.

Poetically elegant and oh so gently flowing,
the readers are left with their hearts showing.
A grieving mother turns to the Lord,
knowing that comfort rings a sweet chord.

Paced like a liturgical plea,
the emotion is easy to see.
Structured to enhance readability,
there are no visible signs of grammatical matters to espy.

Bless you for writing for your friend,
and write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of A Teen's Prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"And help me to accept authority."
This is a turning point in maturity.
Featured in Spiritual Newsletter,
Focused on the matter of prayer.

The emotion is real,
the reader does truly feel.
Imagery that comes from the heart,
from one who seeks to do her part.

Flow is smooth,
the senses it does soothe.
Pace is just right,
enhanced by no grammatical snafu's in sight.

Form, structure, and prose
All elements well chose.
Suggestions for improvement?
Nope! Thanks for your involvement.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your story in such detail.
Featured in the Noticing Newbies newsletter 3-26-12.
Your piece illustrated the genre; biographical; and did it well.
Hauntingly familiar as my wife now has a stint in her heart as a result of they finding 95 percent blockage in the "widow maker" artery doing a heart cath. It saved her life. True imagery illicits true emotional response.
Your skill as a writer is evident here. Well organized, written, and draws the reader in with your personality and humor placed in just the right timing.
Form and structure give the reader a good base to follow.
Flow is easy going and the pace is unhurried and interesting at each point.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of My African Gray  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newletter 3-26-12.
An example of the animal genre,
Your poem rocks!

Katie the African Gray,
Appears happy and gay.
The reader feels the emotion,
and is left with a happy notion.

Your form is consistent.
Your flow is persistent.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Structure is conducive to a good pace.

Grammatical snafu's are non-existent.
Suggestions for improvement are not here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 3-26-12.
An example of an activity in an attempt to clarify the genre's.
The prompt for the day (4-3) will result in an entry from this writer.

The form of your forum, presentation, and rules are easily understandable.
Your format is suitable for the nature of your forum.
The incentives are clear.
The deadline is distinct.
The overall feel of this is that the writer is given an opportunity and he/she can take advantage of it or move on to other opportunities.
Thank you for your contribution to the WdC as host of this contest.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Condolences at the loss.
Our cat was a recent loss.
Form is consistent.
Flow is steady and strong.

Emotionally charged,
Through the imagery we are changed.
Rottweiler's, cat's, even goats.
More than just pets in the end, but family.

Pace is unhurried and graceful.
Grammatically no matters to discuss.
Prosaic poetry is found here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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