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Review of 4-A Paw Print Sig  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool sig Mike created for the group.
Still miss III.
The sig is not only visibly appealing it also explains what the group is about.
Those who are looking for a cause to support will know from the beginning what to expect out of this group.
Have a good Thursday and later on the www.
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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1002
Review of Aggression  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Congrats on your upcoming nuptials.
Your piece is in the latest edition of the Poetry Newsletter.

A few lines are used,
so emotion infused.
Flow is frenetic and fast.
Paced well to the last.

Forms consistency is visible.
Creating a framework strong and useable.
The emotional chord here is anger.
Expressed by the fight for freedom from a cage.

Suggestions for improvement are nil with the absence of any grammatical snafu's and a message that is so well delivered.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Reincarnation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found you in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter.
Confusion is apparent in this piece.
You are seeking comfort in a loss it would seem.
The flow is fairly well done.
The pace is enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
The form is varied and yet does not detract from the reading of same.
The emotional chord that is stricken here is that of sadness/wistfulness.
Suggestions for improvement cannot be made for this piece and you are encouraged to
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1004
Review of Reflections  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The Quatrain is superb and I'm sure you will pick up a winning spot in the contest. Let your readers know when the time comes for the results.
There is a flow that is smooth, easy, and enjoyable to the eye and senses.
It is a moving heart felt message that so many can identify with, and the consistent rhyming scheme serves to preserve the solemnity found within this piece.
The pace of this piece is rapid, but so full of great imagery the reader is blessed by what he/she observes along the way.
The absence of grammatical snafu's speaks of your awesome sense of details and leave no room for suggestions for improvement.
Well written, well presented, and worthy of a winning bid in any contest you enter it into.
Write on!
Your fellow Poetic Explorer,
Copenator out!
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1005
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How amazing is this letter from home to the troops.
There is gratitude, care, concern, and many other emotions.
There is a sense of respect for what they do every day.
The flow is marvelous and rhythmical in nature.
The pace is so unhurried and reflects respect as well.
Your use of just the right words will surely lift the spirits of one out there on a post far far away from home.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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1006
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry in motion,
Seeping with emotion.
Every line well planned,
Leading the reader ahead.

The reader can see, hear, and feel,
The love you have for him still.
Paced at a good clip,
No need to bite your lip.

Details galore keep a focus clear,
As over your shoulder the reader does peer.
No grammatical snafu's to speak of,
Thanks for expressing your love.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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1007
Review of The Clone  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A beginning, a middle, and an end. All in 255 characters? How can it be? It is a writers dream to speak with such brevity and get the point across so clearly. You accomplish that with aplomb and grace.
The character is clear, the emotional reaction to his work is sincere, and the poor clone loses it's peer.
Structure is compact and well suited to the task at hand, telling a tale in brevity.
Flow is good and the pace is just right for such a short story. The absence of any grammatical matters to review leaves little room for suggestions for improvement.
Congratulations on your win!
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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This represents review #2 of 5 in your winning bid in Showering Acts of Joys auction.
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1008
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A touching autobiographical account of your battle with illness. The Chronic Pain disorders are many and it is encouraging to see that improvement is creeping into view for you.
You tell the story of one who has learned from others and is wiling to pass on that wisdom to still others you influence through the written word. The emotional and physical anguish visible in this piece is compelling. But also within is hope, a blessing some will receive from this piece.
The unwritten pages you have before you, must surely be soon full of enriching and bountiful words to entertain, cajole, and even help some grow in the future days ahead.
Form, structure, and flow are superb. These elements enhance the reading and is bolstered by the absence of grammatical snafu's along the way. The pace is steady and unhindered by long strings of wordiness. Each word impacts and that's the key to a good read.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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This represents review #1 of 5 in your winning bid in Showering Acts of Joys auction.
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Review of Writing in Snow  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your free verse for the week is familiar to me. It is as if you read my mind and watched me playing in my backyard as a young one before anyone else sullied the white snow. Except in my case I broke my arm and that was the end of that fun.
I liked the way this moved along and there is an emotional attachment found in the sheer cold and joy of being first on the snow. The pace is unhurried and the reader is enjoying the scene unfolding so easily from your pen.
Thanking you for sharing and encouraging you to continue writing on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1010
Review of I Once Loved  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You speak of the things you once loved.
The theme is well covered and gloved.
The key element here is a rhythmical flow.
The emotional tones are genuine and those we know.

The structure is such as to enhance the readability.
Word selection and placement of same aids in the pace.
This is the work of one who cares about the words,
and knows how to get the message across in the end.

So what did happen to t he girl you loved? Inquiring minds want to know. A good ending to keep the reader thinking and wanting to know more.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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1011
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! What a way to go to sleep. Your story gripped the reader and dragged him along for the ride. Solid imagery that built deeper into the dark realm of fear.
The "Dark" is given life here and the reader can feel the concern of the one who is surrounded by this darkness. The pace is break neck fast, but oh so detail filled, so little is lost along the way.
The form is conducive to a crescendo of emotions and pleasant on the eyes with the centered factor.
The is no evidence of grammatical snafu's and there is a sense of personal experience in this piece that captivates the readers imagination.
Welcome to the WdC and if this is any indication of your work, you are to be commended and thanked for joining us here in this www.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of So Thank You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC. Found your piece in the latest edition of Noticing Newbies Newsletter.

An enchanting tribute to your dad.
There is love, awe, and concern along the lines.
A photograph etched onto the page,
One can clearly hear the thanksgiving for your dad.
A fine form and structure keeps the reader grounded,
And the flow is enhanced even more by no grammatical matters.
The pace is just right and delivers the reader to the end, full and not stuffed.
Thank you for thanking your dad in this way.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1013
Review of To the Heavens  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A rhythm of peace does flow.
The tribute in the end is touching.
Emotions ranging from awe to sadness,
Indicates that imagery is a tool you use well.

The form, structure and rhyme scheme are wow,
There is a natural flow and it's easy on the eyes too follow.
The pace is unhurried, giving the reader time to see the view you do carve out.
The presence of a small grammatical snafu in line 2 gives one pause.

Dicipating - should probably be dissipating.
Overall impression: What an enjoyable read from one who in the end is paying tribute to one who has passed away.
Welcome to the WdC and you are encouraged to write on, read your fellow authors, and have fun in this place on the www.
Copenator out!

Review #1900 is in the books and every day the desire to read, review, and remain here grows. Onward to 2000!
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1014
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story of the stages of the cross.
Your details are vivid, emotionally charged, and accurate.
The prose is a good choice, giving the freedom to complete a thought, rather than perhaps compromising a word to go with a rhyming scheme.
Your form and structure are conducive to a good flow in the write. There is no sense of rushing to get to the end, it is even and paced well.
Grammatically sanfu free, only one more thing need be mentioned.
Write on in the WdC!
Thank you for sharing your faith in a good poem that lays it all on the line.
Copenator out!
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1015
Review of Nothing!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very emotion filled piece.
The reader can feel peace.
The result of your attempt,
Is indeed something excellent.

Line-by-line the tension builds,
Flowing with details your pen yields.
Finding minor snafu's along the way,
Serves to slow the story down only slightly.

Suggestions for improvement will result in a complete and well planned attempt at writing when you start with nothing.

Brief Description: "having know idea. . ." Know should be "no."
Line 5: "In to" can be changed to "into" and you achieve the same meaning with a shorter line.
Line 6: Loosing - the context of this line indicates "losing" is the word you need.
Line 10: relax's - if you intended to shorten "relaxes" then it's okay. If not then changing this will increase the smooth advance of the overall piece.
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1016
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Featured in SP Review Group 04-08/14-11


Ebilest:

Your story is colorful and imaginative. The reader is intrigued by the natural elements swirled about in your piece.
The flow is good and has the potential for an even crisper story with suggestions for improvement that can be discussed in a later email.
I liked the way you weaved your story together and drew to a close one part of the story and opened a second scene of the story as the two had grown up. The graphic you used for the separation is not too big to make the reader think the story is over and stop reading.
Overall feel of the story: A complete look at two friends who have been together all their lives and are content with the way things have worked out in the end.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1017
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Featured in the SP Review Group 4-8/14-11


A very detailed depiction of the Princesses in a number of Fairy Tales.
There is a good flow to this that leaves the reader with the opportunity to delve into the writers personality traits. Imagery that stands apart and shines through the entire piece.
Your choice of Princesses; in the end; was well thought out, explained, and fits you to a tee. The pace is just right, and the overall feel of the story is one of contentment in the end.
Suggestions for improvement are unnecessary.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1018
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in the SP Review group 4/8-14/11

A charming Mother's Day story told from the perspective of the mom.
The story is heart warming and the reader is carried away into the story line-by-line.
The form, structure, and flow of this piece is excellent and enhances the reading of your piece. The absence of any visible grammatical matters to bring to bear, also improves the pace of your piece.
The most impactful moment:
When your son hugged you and you took in that "little boy smell"
Precious view of the family and no suggestions for improvement are necesessary.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1019
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You're featured in the Simply Positive Review suggestions for the week. Congratulations.
I've previously rated and reviewed this and am changing the rating.
Your article is a comprehensive look at gaining exposure for ones portfolio and the suggestions are presented in a clear and helpful manner.
There is a sense of awareness of the subject at hand and a confidence in the laying down of the matter. That's imagery in a nutshell.
The flow is good, there is no evidence of grammatical matters and you are encouraged to,
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1020
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found you in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter.

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall,
Humpty Dumpty broke his crown.
All the Kings horses
All the Kings men,
Could not put Humpty together again.
Scrambled!

Your piece gives the solution to a scrambled mind.
The illustration of an egg is brilliant and carried all the way through.
The flow is awesome and well kept, with no grammatical snafu's to distract.
There is a natural rhythm to this and that allows for a pace that is constant throughout the piece.
Suggestions for improvement are unnecessary and thanking you for sharing in the WdC!
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1021
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A calming prayer you do pray.
Lines well paced and none astray.
There is real emotion in here,
And the reader feels it so near.

The whole spectrum of daily life,
From joy, happiness, and even strife.
All considered and prayed over.
A real example of faith forever and ever.

The form, structure, and flow are conducive to leading the reader through many matters of concern. The pace is static and yet intent on moving forward to the next one. Overall this reader is impressed by the thought and faith that is present in this prayer.
You were featured in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter, leading off the list. Congratulations on the the feature and you are more than encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Secret Garden  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found this in the latest edition of Spiritual Newsletter 03-23-2011.

Good introduction gathers the attention of the reader and the game is on.
The use of emotional tools throughout the piece keeps the reader invested in what is going on in the story, that unfolds at just the right pace to not overwhelm the readers senses.

The characters introduced are not too complex, but are "fleshy" enough to carry the story from scene to scene. The emotional roller coaster that is ridden in such a short piece keeps the reader engaged and willing to see what comes next.

Grammatically sound and imagery filled, this piece has just what is needed to make a good introductory piece for something that can be carried on in another chapter. Thoroughly impressed with your piece and encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Hidden Flower  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Now you can add. Spiritual Newsletter 03-23-2011.

Good piece of art,
Each line with a part.
Nature is extolled,
As life is unrolled.

Flowing gently through the lines,
The reader sees emotions align.
Carried at a pace that is languid,
Yet full of character and not vapid.

Form, structure, and flow,
All serve to bring the reader in tow.
Depositing us in the midst of hope,
Happiness and glee on a gentle slope.

Grammatically sound and sanfu free
Only one more thing to say to thee.
Write on in the WDC!
For we are surely blessed by what we see.

Copenator out!
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1024
Review of Finding Me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found this in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter.

A tale of self-discovery.
A hope of recovery.
Emotional ties abound,
and leads the reader around.

Flowing from stem to stern,
softly and detail borne.
Grammatically flawless
Means suggestions for improvement are less.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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1025
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter and glad it was there.
A fine story of epic proportion.
Important to one-and-all alike.
A tale we can sink our teeth into,
In an environment that is always cold.
The character is developed from cold and matured into warm and cozy.
The flow is great and there is but one grammatical matter that detracted from the tale slightly.
"cosy" should be "cozy"
This slight adjustment will result in a flawless flow and enjoyable reading to the end.
Keep writing and sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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