Found in the Spiritual Newsletter dated 12/18/2011.
Interesting words.
The touch is vital.
It does make a difference.
Life needs touch points.
The flow is superb.
The pace is unhurried.
The form, structure and scheme is consistent and contributes to the life found in the story.
Confidence is a emotional tie that binds.
Courage to move forward with the task at hand as well.
The absence of grammatical snafu's makes for a smooth, seamless, transition from point to point.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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A good entry found in Spiritual Newsletter.
The criteria are met and you present a good case.
Flow is confortable and consistent.
Structure leads the reader at a smooth pace.
Emotional ties are plentiful, and touches the heart.
Overall the piece is gramatically snafu free.
NO suggestions for improvement are necessary.
Write on in the WdC!
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Basically doing a mini portour material.
This short piece has so much it' surreal.
Emotionally fear is the pervading sense.
Poetically and philosophically you do wax.
From the eyes of the combatants,
We see what war is really about.
Form is consistent rhyming is relevant.
Paced at a stacatto clip, the reader is a participant.
No suggons for improvement are needed.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Featured in the latest Noticing Newbies newsletters by sarah jean.
Your story is a quaint re-visit of a Thanksgiving day at the grandparents. There is a lot of warmth, fun, happiness, and joy found in this piece. A real pick me up of a story that is still needed in this day and age.
The form, structure and flow are good fits and the emotional tie that binds is that of nostalgia. You are telling a story that meant a lot to you then and still does even now when you are the grampa.
The pace of this story is easy going, detail filled and a pleasant trip all-in-all. Family centric it smacks of values that often tied families together even when separated by distance.
Grammatically your piece is sound and suggestions for improvement are not necessary at this juncture of the story.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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This is poetry in motion.
The peace is a noble notion.
The prevalent emotion is caring.
From the heart you are here sharing.
On your mind are profound and worthy thoughts,
Flowing smoothly and with excellent emotional shots.
Pacing the reader at a gentle canter,
The pursuit of peace is the epicenter.
This is a joy to read indeed.
It plants in our hearts a hope seed.
Grammatically again, your piece is not altered.
Suggestions for improvement would just falter.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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The suspense in this is telling.
Each line progressing the story.
Health appears to be failing,
And the time rolls on, it's history.
Form is consistent and brings closure.
Structure is well thought out and done.
Prosaic nature of the piece is good, for sure.
Flowing like a tumbleweed down a sand dune.
Pace is enhanced by the exceptional detail every other line.
One is being prepared for the inevitable outcome,
Grammatically speaking, your piece is not altered by the lack of periods.
Suggestions for improvement are nil and to this port the reader recommends you add more from your pen.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Loving picture of your cat.
Sorry she passed away.
Form is great, it stands pat.
Structure and rhyme just sway.
Emotional tie that binds is love.
Imagery that leaps from the page.
Flow is rhythmical and fits like a glove.
Paced ever so smoothly. it's all the rage!
Grammatically speaking it is just fine.
There is little one can do to improve this.
Encouraging you to perhaps finish the lines,
And end with the knowledge that her you do miss.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Located in spiritual newsletter.
The analogy couldn't ne better.
The theme of the newsletter is potential.
Your piece shows us it is so essential.
Form, structure and flow are exquisite.
Grammatical snafu's are non-existent.
Emotionally striking.
This poem is worthy of liking.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Concluding item featured in poetry newsletter is awesome!
Form, structure, and flow.
Just right don't you know.
Emotional ties are strong.
Dogs can live only so long.
Paced at s steady clip.
The readership bites their lip.
Smooth as silk gramattically speaking,.
No suggestions for improvement you need be seeking.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Cool story! Found this in poetry newslatter and am impressed by the piece.
Form, structure and flow are assets to the readability. The reader sees the emotional turmoil swirling all about.
Rhythm is carried by the rhyme at a pace that is pleasing to the readers senses.
Absence of grammatical problems = write on in the WDC
Copenator put
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Touching poem of tribute to your sons.
Emotional ties are so numerous.
Flow is melodic and adding a refrain = a song of two sons.
There is much that is humorous.
Much that is serious.and in-between.
Received at a pace that gently rocks.
Grammatically clear it is so serene.
Change nothing about the foundational building blocks.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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This represents review #5of 10 in your winning auction bid for the PDG/NHWUP.
The Fog is a very revealing piece.
One searching for at last a peace.
Emotional ties are apparent all through.
The flow is just so natural and thorough.
The pace is just sublime and details pop.
The reveal in the end is a wow, over the top.
The Fog is finally lifted and reality sets in.
Oh what a finish, oh what a fitting end.
The absence of grammatical snafu's is cool.
Suggestions for improvement are unnecessary.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Featured in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter.
An amazing journey you take the reader on.
There is much for one to identify with in here.
The emotional chords are expertly applied and the response is genuine.
You kept the main character interesting and cogent throughout the story.
Flowing at a great tempo, the reader is pulled along at a pace that is leisurely and so informative.
The absence of any grammatical snafu's through this impressive piece speaks of your grasp of the communication skills needed to write a grand story.
Suggestions for improvement are not necessary here and you are more than encouraged to write on in the WdC and beyond.
Copenator out!
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Ah the punch line is sublime.
The story captivated line by line.
Many a clowns dream come true,
And this is a simply positive review.
Your form and flow are consistent,
The emotional pull is persistent.
The pace is easy going and yet exciting,
As the story progresses to the exiting.
There is a color of red that dominates this piece,
The red of anger unleashed, if only in the head.
You do this at a comfortable pace and literally snafu free.
Encouraging you to make no changes and to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Found your piece in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newsletter.
Once a month I volunteer at our church "Food Pantry", giving a sack of groceries to the families in need. Why? Because I have gone hungry before. I have seen people suffering in the streets. I have seen homeless shelters full of people. I have followed the Lord's leading and seen nearly a hundred back packs with Bibles given to a homeless shelter. Clothing was given too, twenty people volunteered to feed the homeless and sit with them, talk with the, and care for them because they are important to God and them.
This coming from the emotional connection you created in your piece.
In a form, structure, and flow that keeps the reader wanting more and willing to read on.
Paced like a fable and full of good moral lessons your piece is worthy of the highest marks possible in this forum called the WdC.
Smooth and grammatical sound, this writer can but encourage you to write on!
Copenator out!
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You're featured in the latest edition of the Spiritual Newletter.
Totally believable tale.
An article it does sale.
The act of kindness,
From a new character.
Bulls get a bad rap,
They like fun too.
The form, flow, and structure are top notch and leads the story by the "horns" at a good pace.
The prominent emotion in this is humor. Especially when one realizes it's a "bovine" telling the story. A life lesson is included in the story and that gives the reader something to chew on.
The absence of grammatical snafu's eliminates the necessity of suggestions for improvement.
Write on and thanks for sharing you take on kindness.
Copenator out!
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Thanks for sharing the story of Darryl's Barber shop.
Here care and concern come out on top.
A conversational tone keeps the readers attention with pockets of emotional anchors along the way.
Pacing here is excellent and crisp. No hurry and yet not bogging down in one subject too long.
Flow is enhanced by the form, structure, and absence of grammatical snafu's.
An article worthy of being published in any magazine, thank you for sharing in the WdC.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew.
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Changing the world beginning from within.
A good approach and one good ideal.
Your form is well written and the piece flows with ease.
Broaching one topic and picking up with the next, progressing to the point at a very relaxed and introspective pace.
The emotional connection for this writer is found in "if I can change myself I can change the world." This is wisdom and keep the readers interest to the end.
The absence of any grammatical snafu's leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Copenator's Crew leader
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It takes skill to write in such a disciplined way.
This piece speaks loudly what you have to say.
Your flow is smooth, unhurried, and soothing.
The imagery shines through. No pandering, schmoozing.
The rhyme scheme keeps the reader on pace,
And the words of each line speak with such grace.
Grammatically sound and your words so precise,
No room for suggestions for improvement, not even a character splice.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC and beyond!
Copenator out!
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Thank you for sharing your journey.
There is growth and learning here.
Emotions the reader can identify with.
A well rhymed scheme that flows with ease.
Paced at an unhurried canter, the smooth movement is restful.
The end is worth the beginning and the middle is the meat of the piece.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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A good story and one that has much a reader can identify with.
Emotional connections with the "hero"/main character cannot be denied.
Who hasn't gone nuts over a sound they could not locate the source for?
I liked the flow of this. There were enough interesting twists along the way to keep my attention.
Your form, structure, and overall appeal of this piece is indicative of a skill in the writing scene.
Grammatically snafu free, enjoyable through each phase of the story, this is worthy of a big 10.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Prosaic verse creates a universe.
Memories are painful, but life is full.
Line by line you build the scene,
Flowing smoothly and so serene.
Form, structure, and flow are whoo whoo!
Every stanza is almost fresh and new.
Paced as a gentle wave of memories,
The readers imagination it truly doe seize.
Finding no grammatical disparity,
Suggestions for improvement such a rarity.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
So others might be blessed when they do soo.
Copenator out!
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Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter. I so enjoy reading what the writers say and then reviewing the excellence they recommend.
A gem is here in this prosaic piece.
An image of two minds at peace.
The form is complimentary to easy reading,
Flowing with the many images you are seeding.
Pacing the readers steps,
you lead them with your pep.
There is good found throughout,
Whom you love, there is no doubt.
Consistency and a good theme give this piece a leg up in the game and this writer wishes to know, did you win, place or show?
Write on in the Wdc!
Copenator out!
A heartfelt appeal to bring the troops home.
Would that all would write a letter to some.
With but one line, but one plea.
"Come home by land or by sea."
Imagery- speaks to the heart of the matter, their well being.
Tugs at the heart strings and bring the soldier into view.
Flow - Nice and slow but not too slow.
The reader in the end is so in the know.
Pace - Fluid in some and slow in others.
The end result is a different view of the soldier.
Form - Consistent and rhythmical, an asset to the piece.
Overall Impression - Wow! Snafu free and power packed message received loud and clear.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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