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901
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A grand reminiscence of the great Michael Jackson.
There is evidence of real emotion that the reader picks up on.
The "Thriller" is gone but he lives on in the hearts of his fans who've loved him wherever they may be.
Flow is graceful and full of respect for Farrah and Michael both.
Pace is somewhat slow, however, the content keeps the readers attention from beginning to end.
Grammatically snafu free, you give the reader your heart about these two, and we are grateful to have found this piece.
Write on!
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902
902
Review of Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Abuse is rampant in a world gone mad.
One has chosen to break the cycle and leave.
Here is the hope for others sinking in the morass of abusive relationships.
Imagery that highlights the issue and extends the hope.

Flow is good throughout.
Pace is hampered slightly in the end by grammatical bumps in the road.
Form is consistent and gives the reader a sense of direction.

Suggestions for improvement are minor and include the following.
Line 10 - fill should be feel
LIne 15: "answers" should be answer.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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903
903
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Condolences at the loss of this son.
May the family find comfort in the Father's Son.
Found in the Spiritual Newsletter 04-11-2012,
Into the wonders of the Lord's comfort let us delve.

Poetically elegant and oh so gently flowing,
the readers are left with their hearts showing.
A grieving mother turns to the Lord,
knowing that comfort rings a sweet chord.

Paced like a liturgical plea,
the emotion is easy to see.
Structured to enhance readability,
there are no visible signs of grammatical matters to espy.

Bless you for writing for your friend,
and write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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904
904
Review of A Teen's Prayer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"And help me to accept authority."
This is a turning point in maturity.
Featured in Spiritual Newsletter,
Focused on the matter of prayer.

The emotion is real,
the reader does truly feel.
Imagery that comes from the heart,
from one who seeks to do her part.

Flow is smooth,
the senses it does soothe.
Pace is just right,
enhanced by no grammatical snafu's in sight.

Form, structure, and prose
All elements well chose.
Suggestions for improvement?
Nope! Thanks for your involvement.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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905
905
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your story in such detail.
Featured in the Noticing Newbies newsletter 3-26-12.
Your piece illustrated the genre; biographical; and did it well.
Hauntingly familiar as my wife now has a stint in her heart as a result of they finding 95 percent blockage in the "widow maker" artery doing a heart cath. It saved her life. True imagery illicits true emotional response.
Your skill as a writer is evident here. Well organized, written, and draws the reader in with your personality and humor placed in just the right timing.
Form and structure give the reader a good base to follow.
Flow is easy going and the pace is unhurried and interesting at each point.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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906
906
Review of My African Gray  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newletter 3-26-12.
An example of the animal genre,
Your poem rocks!

Katie the African Gray,
Appears happy and gay.
The reader feels the emotion,
and is left with a happy notion.

Your form is consistent.
Your flow is persistent.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Structure is conducive to a good pace.

Grammatical snafu's are non-existent.
Suggestions for improvement are not here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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907
907
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 3-26-12.
An example of an activity in an attempt to clarify the genre's.
The prompt for the day (4-3) will result in an entry from this writer.

The form of your forum, presentation, and rules are easily understandable.
Your format is suitable for the nature of your forum.
The incentives are clear.
The deadline is distinct.
The overall feel of this is that the writer is given an opportunity and he/she can take advantage of it or move on to other opportunities.
Thank you for your contribution to the WdC as host of this contest.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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908
908
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Condolences at the loss.
Our cat was a recent loss.
Form is consistent.
Flow is steady and strong.

Emotionally charged,
Through the imagery we are changed.
Rottweiler's, cat's, even goats.
More than just pets in the end, but family.

Pace is unhurried and graceful.
Grammatically no matters to discuss.
Prosaic poetry is found here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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909
909
Review of A Life of Roses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellence in poetry found,
and featured in Poetry Newsletter 3/15/12.
Form is consistent and conducive to a melodic flow.
Rhyming scheme is the crown jewel of this piece.
Paced in a sing song fashion,
the reader can feel the passion.
Grammatically not a jot is out of place.
Write on in the WdC whether win, place, or show.
Copenator out!
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910
910
Review of Rain on Stone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Stunning imagery found here.
Featured in Poetry Newsletter 3/15.
Poetry in motion as the reader sees the tear.
The emotion begins to well up.

Form is healthy.
Flow is strong.
Grammatically snafu free,
Here comes for you a big 3.

A melody is written here.
The matter is treated with such respect.
Search high and low one may try,
but here and now is a big five high!

Write on!
Copenator out!
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911
911
Review of Dragon's Wish  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A dragon's tale you do sell.
Found in Poetry Newsletter 3/15.
The tale is rich in tradition,
Full of intrigue and wishes come true.

The form is consistent,
The flow is persistent.
The pace is as smooth as lace.
Grammatically sound you're the ace.

Rhyming is a big ole wow!
Suggestions for improvement? Not now!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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912
912
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 3/15 spots a lady.
One who has a shillelagh.
The drinking and carousing,
Will soon be a ending.

Form is strong.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is moving along.
Rhyming is just wowing.

Emotionally the reader senses,
That soon the trouble commences.
Happy late St. Patricks day,
And come out tomorrow in the WdC to play.

Copenator out!
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913
913
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice piece for Stormy's Poetry Contest.
Your form is consistent and conducive to a gentle flow.
The pace is easy and filled with emotional tags, engaging the readers senses.
There is a strength in your structure that translates in the nature of your piece.
The absence of any grammatical snafu's puts you at the top of detail work.
Suggestions for improvement are nil, for you are on the mark with this wonderful spark.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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914
914
Review of Dear Dad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Featured in Spiritual Newsletter 3/13/12.
A stirring letter to your dad.
The reader feels the emotion within.
Flowing with a smoothness, the pace is enhanced by the way you treat the matter at hand. A dad who chooses to leave is a hard thing to overcome. Yo've made it thrgh the stages of grief and can now rejoice in the time you had with your dad.
The absence of grammatical snaf'u's made for a plet stroll to the end.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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915
915
Review of The Greatest Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-13-12.
The greatest gift indeed. This piece gives from the heart of the author.
The reader identifies with the emotional concerns sprinkied throughout the piece.
Flow is exceptional and enhanced by the lack of grammatical snafu's along the way.
Pace is easy going and the readers attention is maintained.
The gift given by a church that touches your heat touchhes the readers as well. Overall impression: The author touches upon a subject and leaves their heart upon the pages.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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916
Review of Because...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Simply out of this world.
The emotions are all aswirl.
The reader follows along at a rapid flow,
Paced like a rafter floating downstream.
The form is consistent.
The structure is living.
The absence of grammatical snafu's means no suggestions are forthcoming.W
Write on!
Copenator out!
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917
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sherri praying for your recovery.
Your piece is quite lovely.
There is a beginning here.
A growth and continuation there.
Imagery that sparkles with love,
Brighter than a single glove.
Flow is none too slow.
Pace is quite aglow.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thats worthy of a three.
Write on!
Copenator concerned about his friend out!
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918
Review of The Promise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Outstanding conclusion!
The reader felt the emotion pure.
From beginning to end, do not amend.
Form is consistent.
Structure is solid and persistent.
Flow is gentle and full of emotional tags throughout.
Pace is unhurried and melodic in nature.
There is the feeling of a ballad being sung.
The absence of grammatical snafu's means no suggestions for improvement are forthcoming.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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919
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice piece of poetry featured in Spiritual Newsletter 2-29-12.
Into the night sky you do delve.
Your character is fetching, the emotional dominance is glee.
Happiness that is real and not taken for granted through the trees.
The flow is cool and the pace is like dancing on a ballroom floor.
The reader is taken to the scene and led through a remarkable array of colors.
Grammatically there are no issues to consider, so this writer says write on!
Copenator out!
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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920
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Lily On the Water!
Found in Spiritual Newsletter 2/29/12.
The author writes a memorial,
that is touching and eternal.

The emotion is pure, real, and dear.
The writer uses imagery so clear.
Form, structure, and flow are superb,
the reader is gently carried to the curb.

At a pace that rocks the reader to sleep,
yet keeps them aware and in the story deep.
How refreshing it is to see one finds release,
When the loved one does in this realm of life cease.

Grateful to have found your piece,
this writer prays upon your heart peace.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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921
Review of Infinite Wisdom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Remarkable writing found in Spiritual Newsletter 2/29/12.
The piece resonates with emotional markers the reader grasps along the way.
There is a form that is steady and conducive to good flow.
There is a rhyme scheme that sets a melodic tone.
The structure has a shape that is hour glass in nature,
and fits the theme that speaks of an eternal nature within.
Grammatically speaking there are no matters to discuss.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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922
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Congrats on your winning story.
A lasting tribute of your loved one.
Sorry for your loss.
The main emotion is sadness.
The reads carried along at a fine flow,
The pace of which is reminiscent of a balladeer's song.
Grammatical snafu's are nil, and suggestions for improvement are not on the agenda.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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923
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A positively informative write.
The facts are laid out right.
The flow is unhampered and smooth.
The pace is easy, and the mind it does soothe.
Form and structure are assets in this piece.
One surely wishes Hippo's heaps of peace.
Don't change a thing about this please.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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924
924
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the Wdc Steve.
You're featured in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 2-29-12,
Your first chapter sets the scene of your future novel.
The form and structure are conducive to good flow.
Grammatical snafu's along the way slightly hampers the pace.
Overall the reader associates with the character on multiple levels.
That's good imagery at work.
Suggestions for improvement are spelling and can be shared in a future email if you are willing to receive same.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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925
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Where is this going?
Read it twice and still not sure.
Your subject matter is haunting.
The task of reading is daunting.

Flow is good.
Main emotional tie is confusion.
Is this introspection or experience speaking?
Pace is slow and steady, digesting it along the way

Grammatically there are no issues to discuss.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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