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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Noticing Newbies Newsletters 09-05-2012, features your piece.
An appropriately rated item, there is such a depiction of a city gone mad and the main characters trek through that city.
Form and structure are an excellent foundation.
Flow is choppy due only to the cringing the reader does as he/she reads what transpires in the alleyway.
Pace is rapid enough, and free of grammatical snafu's making for a decent reading endeavor.
Emotional ties that bind are numerous and you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Phobic City  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

A very intense piece is found in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 09-05-2012.
You may see the issue that featured you by clicking on the Things to Do and Read Link,
Click on Newsletter Archives, and select Noticing Newbies Newsletter 9-5-12.

I liked the flow of this piece. It was filled with emotionally charged imagery that kept this readers attention all the way through. Well done with the imagery. Serves your story well.
The pace is decidedly rapid as the reader feels the desire to move on felt in the characters marching about on their way to who knows where in phobic city.
Form and structure are superb. The short sentences along the way keeps the reader on the edge of his/her seat, in anticipation of what's coming next.
One suggestion for improvement in addressed below, otherwise your piece is a highly readable and enjoyable featured item in the Newsletter.
Line 4: "the cluttering of heels" - "the {b)clattering of heels
Write on!
Copenator out!
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803
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 09-05-2012.
A very endearing piece and worthy of featuring in a newsletter that focuses on those new to the WdC.
Form and structure are solid foundations.
Flow is pristine with but a minor hiccup to be pointed out later.
Pace is a pleasant medium, peppered with such emotionally endearing imagery. The reader is caught up in the fun that is obviously going on and the rise of the author's observational skills. Well done!
One minor suggestion for improvement does no damage to the flow but is clear enough to cause the reader to hesitate for a moment.
Line 2: "listen" might be better as "listening".
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of American Reality  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Featured in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 09-05-2012.
A heart breaking poem about the plight of the American Dream v/s the American Reality.

Home ownership.
Hopes and dreams fill the home.
Then comes abandonment.
The stress and strain as thick as a tome.

Form and structure are superb.
Prosaic scheme is appropriate.
Flow is excellent.
Pace is unhurried.
Emotional ties that bind are despair, and a deep sense of loss.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement do you need.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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805
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good presentation of what's happening in the group.
Membership list with 9 pages = one big group.
Leadership has to be quite active to keep it going smoothly.
Keep praying Copenator's Crew will become more alive and still praise the Lord for 2 active reviewers (including me).
It's encouraging to see a group investing in the art of reviewing.
It is an integral part of the WdC and what makes it fun for me.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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806
Review of the library  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Poetry Newsletter of 09-05-2012.
I'm hungry! That's the feeling your piece filters out.
The good news is that you feed us along the way.
A unique presentation that draws one into the library.

Form and structure are pleasant to the eye and very readable.
Flow is smooth and the details along the way keeps the readers attention.
The pace is medium.
There are no grammatical matters to discuss and you are encouraged to write on forever more.
Copenator out!
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807
Review of September  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Featured in Poetry Newsletter 09-05-2012,
An acrostic that is this writers passion is well done.
The form and structure are super.
The prosaic format lends to a melodious timber.
The flow is smooth as glass.
The pace is slow and mystifying.
Emotionally the reader feels the melancholy in the midst of this piece.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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808
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good tribute to Neil Armstorng.
Our world has lost a legendary astronaut and man.
There is soul to your haiku.
Form is adherent to the syllabic criteria.
The moon is the subject.
The loss is the theme.
The emotional tie that binds is sadness.
One suggestion for improvement would be to change "envelopes" to envelops.
As in the darkness envelops the sky.
It's not being stuffed in an envelope. It' is being covered over by darkness.
Write on!
Copenator out!
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

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809
Review of Really, dad?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dads can be a pain to be sure.
But for the most part they care.
Their intentions are pure.
Imagery that makes the reader want to share.

Form and structure are decent.
Flow is okay and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is a little slow.
Rhyming is efficient.

Overall impression: A daughter want's to fly and the dad just keeps grounding her. Ah the classic battle between parents and their children.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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810
Review of Chick Flick Quiz  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Didn't do so well.
Chick flicks was a good quiz to take.
The movies were familiar to me but I just hadn't seen them.
Billy Crystal in City Slickers was fun to watch.
Presentation was well laid out.
Flow is smooth and the pace is easy on the eyes.
The absence of grammatical matters to discuss indicates your concern for a good product to release.
Thanks for being a part of the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Member Survey  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A pretty comprehensive survey set up.
The format is typical of most survey's.
The flow is consistent.
The pace is slow as you have some places the survey taker has to think about.
The absence of grammatical matters speaks of your detail orientation and dedication to publishing a good piece here in the WdC.
Write on, share on, and above all have fun in the halls of the WdC!
Copenator out!
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812
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found you in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-29-12.
The story you submitted is an awesome piece of writing.
Form and structure are interesting and serves as an anchor.
Flow is smooth and unhindered by grammatical snafu's.
The pace is steady, resolute, and succinct.
The emotional tie that binds is care and concern for your mother. Something almost everyone can identify with and want the best results for the author.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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813
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found you in Contest's and Activities 08-29-12,
The forum is well organized, distinctive, and the visitors know what's up for bids and minimums are a great way to get the GPs flowing.
Good packages and worthy causes make for a well rounded auction for this sizzling summer.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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814
Review of When a Cop Sleeps  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sobering view of a policeman's sleep.
Featured in Poetry Newsletter 08-22-2012.
The haunting demons pepper imagery of anxiety throughout the piece.
Structure is consistently distinct.
Form is well organized and conducive to an even flow.
Pace is slow, filled with emotional tags that rivet the reader to the material at hand.
The reader sees a side of the policeman, the human side, that may not always manifest in the midst of a day-to-day job.
Praying that the demons will dissipate and your sleep will be restful.
Grammatically speaking there are no real challenged that slow the pace of your piece. Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Tick Tock  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 08-22-2012, features your piece.
Anxiety is the theme and your Tick Tock is a telling symbol.
Form and Structure: Butterfly like with the wings pinned back.
Prosaic tempo is just right.
Flow is smooth and consistent.
Pace is fast but detail filled that keeps the reader riveted to his/her seat.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this case.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Is This Death?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Intensity visits the pages of Poetry Newsletter.
On 8/22/2012, a question is faced head on.
Is This Death? Wow the power of that question.
In so few lines you lead the reader on a wild ride.
The imagery is incredibly distinct.
The reader is on the edge of his/her seat.
There is a sense of anticipation that is palpable.
The flow is rapid fire and full of fear, wonder, and lack of hope.
The pace is race track speed. The reader is at the end far too soon.
Grammatically flawless and just plain wwwwoooowwww!
No suggestions for improvement are necessary here to be sure.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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817
Review of The White Blanket  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Whoa! The wow factor is found.
Spiritual Newsletter closes with The White Blanket.
A very chaotic scene unfolds.

Form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic formula is fitting in this piece.
Flow is somewhat stilted,
as the reader grasps to find the meaning of it all.
The pace is slow, due in part to the absence of punctuation.
The reader struggles to find an end, and a beginning again.
Emotionally this piece hits home. Your imagery equals that wow factor.
Overall impression is that the author has a story to tell that he/she has experienced first hand.
That is the kind of writing that a reader seeks.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Why Me?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Why Me? A good question.
The Spiritual Newsletter 08-28-12 shares your piece.
Are the answers forthcoming?
Or is there more to learn before all becomes clear?

Form and structure are consistently 4 line stanza's.
This gives the reader a good base from which to begin.
Prosaic format is fitting in this inquisitive piece.
Imagery is efficient and draws the reader in with your queries.
Flow is smooth and easy to follow.
Pace is not too slow. For within these lines are matters that causes one to pause and consider.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of The Road  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 08-22-12,
Finds a cryptic piece in The Road.
The issue deals with milestones,
and your piece deals with the road upon which life is driven.

The form and structure are consistent.
The rhyme scheme is a somewhat rocky road.
Emotionally the reader sees much they can invest in.
That's what imagery is all about, therefore a big 3.0 there!
The flow is stable.
The pace is palpable.
One suggestion for improvement would be to place this in a 4 line stanza format.
This would improve the flow, and the pace of the piece overall.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of The unfolding  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Your story finds it's way to the pages of Spiritual Newsletter 08-22-2012.
Your tale unfolds like pages in a book of life lived by the author.
Form and structure provide a sense of familiar grounds upon which to walk.
The reader is ready for what you have to say in this piece. He/she is invested from the beginning through the imagery you display line-by-line, scene-by-scene.
The flow is smooth, enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
The pace is varied based upon the topic you are sharing and the imagery that engages the reader.
Overall impression: this is a good unfolding of life and thank goodness that you shared it with us here in the WdC.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Questions Of Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your Questions of Life,
found their way into the pages of,
Spiritual Newsletter 08-22-12,

Your plethora of questions are loaded with imagery.
Making it easy for the reader to become invested in your story.
Form and structure are consistent and well organized.
It appears there is a progression and the tempo builds to the last lines.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is faltering; and that is an asset here.
As the reader is want to stop and ponder this question and that.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The Sky's the limit , soars through milestones!
Featured in Spiritual Newsletter 8-22-12.
The story is about milestones and epitomizes the theme of this newsletter.
The form and structure are standard and creates a clear launching pad.
Emotional ties that bind are numerous and include happiness, sadness, anger, triumph!
That's imagery the reader can invest in.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is unhurried and detail filled.
Grammatically sound, no suggestions for improvement are necessary.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dr Gupta's Milestone of 2010,
featured in Spiritual Newsletter 8-22-12.
An awesome number of years,
peppered with cheer and surely some tears.

Form and structure are impeccable.
Rhyme scheme sets the tone for the piece.
Imagery provides anchors for the reader to draw from.
Flow is melodic and easy on the eyes.
Pace is melancholy, a light stroll through the years past.
Grammatically pristine, no suggestions for improvement are needed here.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Politician  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter features the Politician, 08-15-12.
The emotional pull is to trust not the politician.
He/she speaks with a forked tongue, to the old and the young.
Form and structure are strong assets.
Rhyme scheme is pristine.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is slightly too slow.
Grammatically snafu free, encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of FAT IN THE SAND  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
samiam4 finds a place in Poetry Newsletter 08-15-12.
Into the political realm this piece does delve.
Fat In The Sand does pepper the reader with imagery.
Imagery that elicits a plethora of emotional quandaries.

Form and structure are traditional.
Rhyme scheme is almost supernatural.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
Pace is rapid and yet flowing.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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