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Review of Waves of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it!
Couldn't resist the wave of love.
Poetry Newsletters features this and 2 others from your hand in the 12-12-12 edition.
Congratulations on that many in one newsletter on a very significant day in history.

Form and structure are cool.
Prosaic nature is unwound like a spool.
Flow is undeterred.
Pace by grammatical snafu's is undisturbed.
Emotional tie that binds?
Why love of course is the key.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of My Journal  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12
includes your entry among the choices.

Your loneliness is quenched.
From your words this is sensed.
That's imagery that lives,
And to the reader gives.

Form and structure are standard.
Flow is straight forward and candid.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically clear, this reader is thrilled.
No suggestions for improvement are forthcoming today.
All that is left to say:
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12
features your "book" of poetry.
Among the whole I read but a few.
Will read more to be sure.
Overall the layout of your book is clear.
The entries are not overly long.
The flow of the few I read have been adequate.
The attention to the details at the time in your life are sufficient to keep the reader engaged.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter on 12-12-12 was on journaling.
Your entry was among the choices and glad to read it.
Form and structure are splendid.
Rhyme scheme is quite well attended.
Flow is smooth and melodic.
Pace is slow and didactic.
Imagery plays a part in keeping the readers attention.
Determination appears to be a distinction.
Grammatically speaking,
Nothing is leaking.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of Namaste  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You are featured in Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-12
Among others that sophy saw something in.
I often use the newsletter for reviewing material.

Form and structure are noteworthy.
They form a foundation of progression.
Rhyme scheme is pristine,
and creates a song like effect.
Imagery shines throughout,
The reader is invested in the scene unfolding.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow and ideal showing.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Christmas Spirit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-2012,
featured your poem among others in their pages.

What an enchanting concoction you do prepare.
Leaves from the Marigold and other natural fare.
I liked the necessity to look up Calendula,
It increases my vocabulary and enriches the flavor of your endeavor.

Imagery shines; nay sparkles; throughout this piece.
An overall sense this reader receives is that of peace.
Form and structure are basic.
Rhyme scheme is award winning!

Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow as upon the imagery the reader does lean.
In the end the overall impression is enchantment.
Nary a suggestion for improvement is necessary at this moment.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of An Advent Choice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-12
features yours among others.
I use newsletters as fodder to garner reviewing opportunities.

This is a cool poem from the perspective of the lone shepherd.
The emotional ties that bind are present in these lines so well crafted.
The rhyme scheme is consistent and lends a melodic tone to the piece.
The form and structure are adequate. Conducive to a good starting point for reading.
The flow is smooth as silk.
The pace is slow as the reader follows the tale unfolding in these stanzas.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are presented to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Pink Christmas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing story of one blessed with seeing and interacting with a ghostly child.
Your tale is charming, like the tales of old, ones that uplift and bring cheer to the readers heart.
Form and structure are solidly firm.
Flow is immaculate and smooth.
Pace is medium and filled with emotional ties that bind.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out!
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good story of Christian care and concern for his fellow man.
The sailor did indeed display a heart of charity. The Lord served as the highest example of this during His earthly ministry.
Your introduction is intriguing and draws the reader into the story that follows.
The form and structure are solid.
The flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
The pace is rapid and grammatically snafu clean.
The emotional ties that bind are peppered throughout and serve to keep the reader engaged in the story at hand.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Ice Flowers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem featured in Poetry Newsletter 12-19-12.
Stormy Lady displays 9 in all and yours is there.
Form and structure are fair.
Emotional ties that bind are there.
Prose is well suited to your piece.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is detailed filled and slow.
Grammatically one minor hiccup (Line 5 - midlle) in no way alters the meaning of your piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Shadow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-19-12,
houses this beauteous poem to your dad.
Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is insistent and clear.
Flow is like a gentle stream,
As you pace the reader through line-by-line emotionally.
A picture of love is painted in the end,
And the reader is honored to meet your dad's shadow.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Two Empty Windows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Chilling poetry found in Stormylady's Newsletter 12-19-12.
Form and structure are solid and permanent.
Emotionally the reader is invested.
Flowing like a river down a mountain side.
Paced at roller coaster speed, the reader does subside.
Grammatically snafu free,
you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-19-12 shared your submitted piece.
It's a well rounded look at the Thanksgiving feast.
The finest lines of all sum it up in such an eloquent way.
"they taste better when company is around."
Well written, well formed, well done!
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed here.
Write on BBW!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Nightfall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry for your loss.
I lost my mother and never had a chance o say goodbye.
She lived to see the 21st century and in February she was lost.
Spiritual Newsletter 12-19-2012 shares your prose in their issue.
I often use them for reviewing fodder.

A sad occasion is so delicately presented here.
The emotional beams of loss and regret are present here.
The form and structure is solid.
The flow is stolid.
The pace is slow and filled with grace.
Grammatically snafu free you are the ace.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of John  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry for the loss at such a young age.
You are to be commended for telling your tale so well.
Spiritual Newsletter 12-19-2012, features your piece among others.
Emotionally charged and bitter sweet moments of hope are found here.
Form and structure are firm foundations upon which to launch such a personal account.
Flow is smooth and emotion filled as the reader sees and knows the anxiety the author lays out in pen and ink.
Pace is medium and sensual throughout.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement go to you.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Season of Sorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-19-12,
showcases your piece.
Sorrowful is the emotional tie that binds.
For in seasons of joy and happiness, much grief is often found.
Our family too has known some of that sorrow so know you are not alone in your grief.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Flow is steady and strong.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically pristine no suggestions for improvement come your way.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Nature Never Told  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-19-12,
features among others your memorial lines.
I use them often to review and grateful to find yours there.

The dominant emotional tie that binds is regret.
For you were deprived of the time to know your beloved.
The reader can feel the love you use to fill in each line.
The form and structure are efficient.
The rhyme scheme is melodic and a singer would be honored to put this to song.
The flow is smooth and senses filled.
The pace is slow as the reader becomes attached to the scene unfolding line by line.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Rays of Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-05-12,
features your Illumined piece.
The reader senses comfort and peace.
A knowledge that there is hope still in this world.

Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and masterfully constructed.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and easy going.
Grammatically nary a jot nor tittle are out of place.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Rainbows of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-5-12,
Shows the world an angel so missed upon this earth.
Snow your piece is beauteous and poetic.
Imagery is inspiring and heart felt.
The reader is drawn into this tribute.
Flow is smooth and soothing too.
Pace is slow as the reader marvels at the picture you do paint.
Grammatically pristine you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 11-14-2012,
speaks of your left over debacle.
Sorry for the loss of you fridge.
But fortunate for you kitties all about.

Form and structure are cool.
Rhyme scheme is pert.
Flow is super smooth.
Pace is just right.
Grammatically snafu free and that's the truth.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
poetry newsletter 11-14-12,
reveals the thankful side of your piece.
A tribute to the troops who fight for freedoms sake.
Fitting that the imagery elicits thoughts of national pride.

Form and structure are stalwart markers.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and a key to the rhythmical nature of this one.
Flow is song like.
Pace is slow and awe inspiring.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 11-14-2012
previews your piece on imagination.
I imagine it's a good piece,
remembering the past peace.

Form and structure are strong.
Flow is smooth and easygoing.
Pace is slow.
Imagery is clear and inspiring.
Grammatically snafu free, you get a big ole 3.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Need Help With An Upgrade???  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

Quite coherent considering it was a 15 minute write.
The things you speak of bear imagery the reader identifies with.
While the form is somewhat stretched,
the gist of your randomization is in tact.
Grammatically snafu free, i would make no suggestions for improvement.
This is your creation, your opinions spilling onto the canvas.
You have the right to change or alter that which you write.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Sand Castles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*

Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

A very clear picture you do paint.
The object is sand castles.
Their plight is the tragedy.
Eulogizing them in the end is your gift.

Form and structure is well suited to the Haiku.
Flow is smooth and defined.
Pace is rapid as the tide coming in.
Grammatically snafu free you are suggestion for improvement free.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Paralysis  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-14-2012,
Featured newbies and yours is among them.
I use the newsletter for reviewing fodder.

Oh my goodness, what an award winning tale you tell.
I too suffer from arachnophobia.
Brave of you to write of such an event.
You know personally the fear that these beasts cause.

Imagery alone gripped this readers mind.
Wanting you to win over these mutant spiders.
Carnivorous too! Wow what a scary thought.

Form and structure are a firm foundation.
The plot is suspense filled from the beginning.
Flow is a roller coaster of terror.
Pace is rapid, let's get the heck out of here!
Grammatically snafu free no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, Mdiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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