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Review of The Prayer Quilt  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 8-20-14,
Houses your entry.
I often use newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Gem this is awe inspiring.
I too have heard the still small voice on many occasions.
The peace that followed doing Hiss leading was the truest of peace.
That's imagery that is top shelf and transforms your piece.
Form and structure is rock solid.
Flow is smooth and inspiration dotted.
Pace is slow as the reader marvels at the content.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are coming your way.

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602
Review of Greed  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very well written tale of greed and avarice.
The story kept the attention of this reader as the characters were developed enough to tell the tale in a nice package. The punch line at the end is priceless!
Form and structure are solid foundations.
Flow is even and moves along effortlessly from scene to scene.
Pace is slow and sensory filled with the characters providing the food for thought.
Grammatically clean and structurally sound, your tale is suitable for inclusion in any periodical or publication you submit it to.
Thanks for sharing this with the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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603
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An endearing story of a cat who would be King.
The hero of the story saw a need and acted without hesitation.
Imagery in this piece kept the reader involved and rooting for the stray that was near death.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and save for one small stumbling block at the end, your pieces is clean as a whistle and worthy of a win in the contest you enter it in.
Suggestion for improvement:
Fudgy eventually joined Magnus and her human on the large, soft bed.
Magnus, referred to in beginning of the story as HIM/King appears to be referred to here as "her". Are you speaking of the new cat or of Magnus.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Cat  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Diane:
Your piece closes the pages of Poetry Newsletter 08-06-14.
Impressive and enchanting is your piece.
The imagery just pops here,
You capture the chase with such grace.
Form and structure are fabulous,
Flow is nicely done.
Pace is slow, and then fast, and then slow again,
as the star of your poem goes from adventure to adventure.
Grammatically snafu free,
Welcome to the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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605
Review of Green Skies  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 8-6-14,
Includes your poem about the Green Skies.
I often use them to review from and glad I found this one.
Welcome to the WdC! I pray your time here will be fulfilling and that you will find a place to participate.

Form and structure are unique.
Ah I SEE! You created the shape of a funnel. Well done!
There is a building crescendo of emotions,
And that is a sign of good imagery to be sure.
Rhyme scheme affords one with that tempo of tension that prevails in your piece.
Flow is smooth, despite the elongated lines.
Pace is rapid, as the reader is rushed to the final lines and relief of suspense.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew.
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606
Review of Without Reason  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 08-13-14
closes it's pages with your piece.
Form and structure are pivotal.
Rhyme scheme is exquisite.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is rapid and the reader dashes along to the crescendo.
Imagery melts the heart and lets the reader know its all about love.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M DIv
Founder of Copenator's Crew


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607
Review of Carpé Díem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 8-13-14,
Finds your poem among it's choices.
Form and structure are cool.
The reader senses fulfillment,
and that's good to feel.
Flow is smooth and free of grammatical snafus.
Pace is rapid as the reader races to the finish line.
Write on n the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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608
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Poetry Newsletter 8-13-14,
Features your poem in their picks.
Carpe Diem,
Seize the day,
You entreat us in this piece.
Form and structure are adequate.
Prosaic in nature suits the content.
Emotionally the reader is engaged.
Encouragement is the dominant factor.
Flow is somewhat bumpy,
Grammatically 1 line holds a stumbling block.
Line 14 ask "your" help. Could you possibly mean ask "for" help?
Overall impression is that you were impressed by the phrase and inspired to pen from the heart.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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609
Review of Dead Poets  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 8-13-14,
Features your poem among their pages.
Form and structure are solid.
Rhyme scheme is established.
Flow is smooth and insightful.
Pace is slow as the emotional tags sink in.
Grammatically as clean as a whistle.
You are encouraged to,
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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610
Review of To Robin Williams  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 8-13-14,
Launches with your tribute to Robin Williams.

A simple epitaph and rich with emotion.
Silky smooth flow, the reader grasps every notion.
From the super moon, to the farewell wave,
May he rest in peace in his earthly grave.

Rhyming is impeccable.
You chose your words masterfully.
Pace is perceptible.
Nary a jot nor tittle is out of place grammatically.

Write on Web Witch!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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611
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The latest edition of Poetry Newsletter by Fyn,
Does reveal to we who read your pen.
A well written piece,
Harrowing is the emotion felt, as Herc to the wood shed the Gods take.
Form and structure are strong.
Insuperable, this word, did send the reader to the dictionary.
Flow is smooth as silk.
The reader is engaged by the intrigue found within.
Pace is slow at first but then picks up the race as it goes.
Snafu free as far as I can see.
No suggestions or improvement to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew


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612
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The latest edition of Poetry Newsletter by Fyn,
Seems to found your pen.

I see you were feeling froggy here.
You leap right into the fray with no fear.
Frogs to the right, the left and all around.
Your form and structure are on solid ground.

The emotional tag this reader sensed most,
Was that of glee, for fun I can see in this post.
Your prosaic dealings are a good fit,
Man this piece is quite a hit.

Flow is easy going and all aglow,
Paced like a race to the end, what a show!
Grammatically snafu free,
We can but say yippee!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
founder of Copenator's Crew


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613
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Latest edition of Poetry Newsletter by Fyn launches with your piece.
In these lines the reader feels a sense of peace.
Form and structure are consistent with the Quatern.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate, a fine tale you do turn.
Flow is smooth as butter on a hot griddle,
Pace is rapid your emotions within sizzle.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
Keep up the cool pen cause it's off the fo shizzle.!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew.
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Review of Untitled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your faith.
Whether it was a physical loneliness or spiritual,
the reader is drawn in with the emotional sense of concern for your well being.
Form is solid.
Structure is musical.
Rhyming is efficient.
Flow is seamless and that's a testament to your writing skill, in my opinion.
Pace is rapid and yet emotionally charged as the reader sees a window into your emotional state at the time.
Wow!

This represents review #3 of 5 for your winning auction bid in Auction of Wings.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew.
Leader of Siscos Good Deeds Group.
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615
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Praying you no longer are depressed.
I found myself finally free from that malady, 01-02-2014.
You grip the reader with emotion from stem to stern.
Rhyming in rhythm with the feelings you display.
Form and structure are a marvel of construction.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is steady and oh so grammatically snafu free.
Suggestions for improvement?
Nah!
Just a happy annive4ary in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew

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Review of Exasper  
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting piece Dan!
An emotionally charged piece from stem to stern.
Form and structure are consistent.
Rhyme scheme is marvelous.
Flow is clear sailing.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are needed this day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew.


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617
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your history of the light house.
Your respect for the structure and people is evident here.
Form and structure are a firm foundation.
Flow is smooth and emotionally stimulating with your imagery.
Pace is slow as the reader marvels at the detail and life you inject into the piece.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew.


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618
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have such a way with words Tim.
There is purpose in your piece,
As you seek to espouse the wonder of purpose.
Prose that has a poetic timber to it all.
Your form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and senses engaging.
Pace is rapid and remarkably grammatically snafu free.
No suggestions for improvement are needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Truth or Dare  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 05-07-14,
Displays your piece within its choices.

A good dialogue going on here.
The Script is well organized.
The characters are real and emotional.
The flow is easy to follow.
The Pace is rapid and grammatically snafu free,
Overall impression: You have a knack for script writing.
Question: What does "BEAT" mean in the script? I'm assuming it's a scene change.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Rant about Spidey  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 05-07-14,
Displays your piece within its choices.

Fell bett4er now?
What a rant.
The emotion is potent.
The form and structure are cool.
The flow is even and disciplined.
The pace is fast, one might even say staccato paced in some places.
Pleasantly grammatically clean, thank you for writing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 05-07-14,
Displays your piece within its choices.

What a marvelous laugh filled little piece.
Thanks for writing and spreading a smile in the WdC.
And out here where my fingers are tickling the keys as I review your piece.
Form and structure are okay.
However things feel a little cramped.
Upon the many lines the reader does tramp.
Emotionally the reader feels engaged.
A relaxing day under a tree with a friend.
Flow is a bit stilted with the line spacing you utilize.
Yet the reader is still involved in the story, to be sure.
Pace is rapid and grammatically snafu free.
Overall impression: A good story and worth reading anew.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of One by One  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sisco's Poetry Newsletter 05-07-14,
Features your One by One.
I see in this the emotion of despair?
Cause it appears life is not fair.
Now that's imagery that engages the readers mind.
Form and structure are adequate.
Rhyme scheme is melodic.
Flow is even and comfortable.
Pace is a little slow, as some of your lines are a bit long.
Yet the message is not lost and in the end the reader is still emotionally engaged.
Grammatically snafu free,
Still one suggestion for improvement I submit to thee.
Lines one and two can be split in half where the commas are, thereby making a four line stanza.
Second four line stanza is just the way you have it here.
Why the change? The lines are shorter, your rhyme scheme is still intact, and the reader can follow your thought pattern in smaller bites.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Walls  
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Spiritual Newsletter, 04-30-2014.
Closes their pages with you flowing piece.
What an introspective piece you present.
Sometimes those things that just "flow" are often the most impressive.
There is a plethora of emotion seeping through these few lines;
anchors that the reader can use to guide them through your treatise.
Form is solid/
Structure is stolid.
Flow is even and strong.
Pace is varied, as it should be.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 04-30-2014,
Displays your magical dance in their pages.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and emotionally charged.
There is a progression of the emotions,
and leads to the invitation of knowing the Creator.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged and welcomed tp tje WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Transformation…  
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 04-30-2014,
features your transforming piece.
Form and structure are clear,
your notation makes it crystal.
Flow is lilting and the major emotion is love.
Pace is steady and a visual trek to your final transformation/
Finding no grammatical snafus and being impressed with the ins and outs,
you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew.
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