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Review of My Desk  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-8-14,
closes its pages with your poem.
A space carved out of the mountain,
"your cave." Becoming the place from whence characters arise.
Form and structure is whimsical.
Flow is awesomely soothing to the soul.
Emotionally the reader is fascinated by the scene you open before him/her.
Pace is slow, yet not boringly so.
Grammatically on the up and up,
you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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577
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy Hunters Moon day!
Poetry Newsletter 10-8-14,
steps into the forefront and among it's fare, your piece is well played.
Form and structure are fascinating.
Poetic and prosaic, rhythm is felt in these lines.
Flow is gentle.
Pace is lilting.
Grammatically speaking,
there are no letters leaking.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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578
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-8-14,
launches with your little corner.
Where we write and how the words are formed.
Form and structure are consistent.
Flow is somewhat choppy.
Emotional tags are rampant and keeps the readers imagination hopping.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically snafu free, that's a big 3 alone.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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579
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Acrostic of Lornda Memories.
Your form is impeccable.
Rhyme scheme is spot on.
Flow is simple.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
Grammatically snafu free, yipee!
No suggestions for improvement are needed this day Jim.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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580
Review of Inseparable  
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You and your loved one,
close out Spiritual Newsletter 10-8-14.
I had to look at the subheading a few times.
Kind of drew me in.
Then the poem you lay forth,
extolling the love between you and yours,
needs no help to keep the readers attention.
Form is uniform.
Structure is symmetrical.
Flow is even and easy to follow.
Love is the dominant emotional draw.
Pace is slow as this poem works it's magic.
Grammatically snafu free, thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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581
Review of P===O===E===M  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is found in Spiritual Newsletter 10-8-14.
I often use the newsletter for reviewing opportunities.
The editors have a knack for picking some of the finest.
Your poem is short.
Your poem is deep.
Your poem is emotionally charged.
Your poem is musical in a sense.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow, as the reader grasps the wow factor of your poem.
Grammatically speaking, there is no evidence of misspelled words.
You are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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582
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 10-8-14, discovered your musical masterpiece.
To live in a world without hearing or voice is beyond my comprehension.
To read your senses filled rendition of the matter is quite enlightening.
The emotional tag I come away with is happiness. Knowing this person finds peace in the music he "feels".
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is easy and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow as the reader gets wrapped up in the action.
Nary a suggestion for improvement is necessary.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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583
Review of Uranium Eyes  
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Spiritual Newsletter 10-8-14, reveals your eyes.
Your fascinating piece is so real.
The emotions flow from line to line,
the dominant being "uncertainty".
That's imagery that keeps the reader glued to the "mirror" you stand before.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is rapid, yet the reader is not deprived of the senses shattering tale you do tell.
Grammatically snafu free, suggestions for improvement are nil.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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584
Review of My Friend  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
You're featured in poetry newsletter 9-25-14.
I often use these to acquire reviewing material.

Wow!
Amazing poetry in a cool package.
Form and structure are pivotal.
Rhyme scheme is perfectly lain.
Flow is smooth and melodious in nature.
Emotionally the reader is captivated and endeared to the story.
Pace is fast as the tension and climax come into view.
Grammatically speaking, nary a snafu for you.

Write on!
Ciopenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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585
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're featured in poetry newsletter 9-25-14.
I often use these to acquire reviewing material.

Tim:
As always your poetry is amazing.
Form and structure are spot on.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable and melodic.
Flow is smooth as growing up in this world. *Bigsmile*
Pace is slow and worthy of the pace.
Grammatically sound, you're encouraged to make no changes.

Write on!
Ciopenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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586
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're featured in spiritual newsletter 9-25-14.
I often use these to acquire reviewing material.
Your poem is enchanting.
The reader is caught up in the scene.
Imagery that brings the reader to your side.
The butterfly, a sign of hope, is wonderfully depicted here.
Form and structure are foundation-ally sound. You adhered to the criteria well.
Rhyme scheme lends a sing-song effect. Relaxing!
Flow is smooth and seamless.
Pace is slow as the reader marvels at the scene you set.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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587
Review of Hope  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The title caught my curiosity.
The tale caught my funny bone.
Glad he was able to limp off to his mom.
Sometimes those trips don't end so nicely.
That's imagery that engages the reader in your tale. Good job!

Form and structure is well organized.
Flow is smooth and snafu free. That's a big three!
Pace is slow, as the reader is on the edge of his seat in anticipation.
Overall impression: Thanks for writing Olle and have a blessed day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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588
Review of Broken  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A terrifying event.
Fear, sadness, loss of nerrve.
All emotional tags taht rivets the reader to your short piece.
Form: Soilidly constructed.
Flow: Easy on the eyes.
Grammatically speaking: nary a problem occurs.
Write on!
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589
Review of Earth Witch  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A bewitching poem.
Congrats on it's being published.
Your form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic in nature, your lines lned a continuity to the story.
Flow is easy and sensory loaded.
Pace is slow as the forest is revealed though your words.
Grammatically snafu free, you deserve a twenty-three.
One suggestion for improvement may be to add a series o popnote's to further explain some of the names you use.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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590
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fitting that it's now the 14th birthday of the WdC.
Your Haiku is stellar.
You highlight an event in the life o a community.
In a form and structure that are essential.
The sense of happiness is present within these lines.
A new year is reached and the WdC continues to grow.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid, and senses shattering.
Grammatically as clean as a whistle, no suggestions for improvement are needed this year.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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591
In affiliation with  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A good story of the roaring 20s era.
A silent film starlet and her daughter sharing time together.
The senses are engaged and the feeling of love is dominant.
Form and structure are pivotal.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
The photos atop, and below, lend a visual perspective of the time period.
Good choices on these!
Pace is slow as the reader digests the adventures anew.
Grammatically snafu free, you should get a 93, but alas 5 is the tops.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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592
Review of Starbucks  
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Acrostics are my favorite.
Starbucks is not.
However your acrostic is exceptional.
Form and structure are established.
Prosaic and senses grasping.
Flow is smooth as cool whip.
Pace is slow and sensually engaging.
Grammatically pristine, speaks of your attention to detail.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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593
In affiliation with Need Help With An Upgrade???  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sorry for your loss.
Prince, our cat, is still missed.
Sadness is the emotional tie that binds.
Form and structure are fundamental.
Prosaic in nature, here is still a melodious timber here.
Flow is lilting and wistful.
Pace is slow and senses piercing.
Grammatically as graceful as a cat,
You are encouraged to keep at it day by day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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594
Review of A Ghostly Poem  
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow a complete story in poetic form.
The senses are captivated by the lines.
There is a mixture of emotions peppered throughout.
Form and structure is appropriate.
Rhyme scheme lends a rhythm to the lines.
Flow is natural and smooth.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
Grammatically speaking, your pice is pristine.
Suggestions for improvement? Nah!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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595
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An adventure through the Milky Way.
A senses arousing poem of the starry sky.
Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is exceptional, and leads to a melodic nature.
Wonderment and awe are the dominant emotions in your piece.
Flow is musical.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically nary a jot nor tittle is awry,.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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596
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
what an imaginative in & out to come up with.
The form is well organized.
The rules are simple and straightforward.
The character count is sufficient to get your point across.
This appears to be for a contest that has ended,
yet it is still a fun In & Out to receive the occasional addition.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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597
Review of A Spring Haiku  
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Haiku's are full of expression.
In this one spring is awakening.
The reader is introduced to the season,
The senses are activated by the imagery.
Anticipation is a man feeling that this Haiku projects.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Flow is smooth and naturay.
Pace slow, as the reader senses an awakening.
Grammatically snafu free, nary a suggestion for improvement is needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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598
Review of Heading to Earth  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Poetry Newsletter 8-20-14
displays your despairing poem.
Form and structure are strong.
Flow is uneasy and senses shattering.
Rhyme scheme is consistent,
and lends a cadence to the whole thing.
Pace is rapid, and melancholy in the end.
Gramatically snafu free,
Thank you for being the writer you are.
Copenator out!
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599
Review of Conformity  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 8-20-14
displays your piece in it's pages.
Form and structure are adequate.
The length of the descending lines,
lends credence to the "conformity" in your piece.
Emotionally this piece gives the reader fodder for reacting.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is rapid and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thanks for writing in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Not by any means  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 8-20-14,
Displays your winning entry in Stormy's contest.
I often use the newsletters for reviewing material.

Sadness permeates your poem.
A deep seated sadness that leaps from the page.
Imagery that exceptionally stands out in these lines.
Form and structure are well situated.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and lends a tempo to the piece.
Flow is soft and senses engaging.
Pace is slow, for much is within to experience.
Grammatically snafu free,
continue sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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