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501
Review of The Debate  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
A poetically lead debate.
Thank you for sharing your skill.
This reader is blown away.

Form and structure are ever present.
Rhyming is there and efficient.
Emotionally the reader feels the emotional boils,
As with the response each debater toils.

Flow is quite easy,
Pace is not so dizzying.
Grammatically your piece shines,
Thanks for sharing your debate full lines

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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502
502
Review of Universal Truth  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's 01-01-2015,
Your piece is still in the mix.
A Poetry Newsletter; 9-23-14 to be precise;
Found yours of interest and displayed it there.

Form and structure are solidly in place.
Prosaic nature feels appropriate in this case.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.

Grammatically snafu free;
No suggestions for improvement go to ye.
Would I lie to you?
Nope. It's the truth I deal to you.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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503
Review of The Giant  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
What a debate.
It's got pow!
It's not too late.

Form and structure are cool.
Rhyme scheme is divine.
Flow is smooth and silky.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Overall the reader feels engaged,
and with out the presence of any grammatical snafus,
feels justified in making no suggestions for improvement.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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504
504
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy 2015, Doctor Gupta.
Your poem is a marvel to view.
The writer admires your work.
And what a better place to be than your port on 1-1-15.

Form and structure are as always rock solid.
Rhyme scheme is distinct and lends rhythm to your piece.
Emotionally the reader feels your concern for the matter at hand.
Your questions are piercing and worthy of consideration.

Flow is smooth,
There are no bumps in the road at all.
Pace is medium,
As the reader considers the matter stanza by stanza.
As always your piece is grammatically pristine,
Were it possible your stars would be fifteen.

Serving Him by serving you,
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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505
505
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 7-2-14,
displayed your Happy and Sad diamond...
Yes I do keep them for you never know what gem you might otherwise miss.

Form is appropriate.
Flow is smooth.
Emotionally the reader is hooked.
Pace ie slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically nothing is amiss.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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506
Review of Parent and Teen  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 7-2-14,
displayed your Parent and Teen diamond...
Yes I do keep them for you never know what gem you might otherwise miss.
I'm reviewing to the end of 2014 and glad to see your piece among the gems.

Form and structure are superb.
Flow is light and emotionally charged.
Pace is slow, for the reader can not help but see hem/herself in the midst.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement for thee.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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507
507
Review of TRES DIAMANTES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 7-2-14,
displayed your Tres Diamantes.
Yes I do keep them for you never know what gem you might otherwise miss.

What a joyful turn of events.
You do a fine job structuring this.
In triplicate no less.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement are for thee.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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508
508
Review of Tis the Season  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The message is clear.
It's a thing we must do all year.
Poetry newsletter 12-17-14,
Displays your piece so pristine.

Form and structure are present.
Rhyme scheme is pleasant.
Flow is whoo whooo!
Pace is too.

Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement to thee.
You are encouraged to

Write on!
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509
Review of Shannon's Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Shannon found the diamond and features it in Spiritual Newsletter 12-24-14.
Emotionally this is the roller coaster ride of a life time.
The reader is laughing, crying, puffing up with pride, and down in the deep despair of what occurred.
The finest twist of all is the doctor who was emotionally torn apart, turns out to be the one who saves her life.
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Form and structure are well contrived.
Flow is even and emotionally charged throughout.
Pace is mixed, depending on the scene one is reading.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thank you for sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
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510
510
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
If this is an excerpt,
It looks like some e-books are going on my Amazon wish list.
Of course it was Santa in disguise and Walker, the children, and others along the way discover it so.
That's imagery that just pulled the words right out of my heart.
So glad to find your piece in the 12-24-14 Spiritual Newsletter.
I often used them to seek out reviewing material.
Form and structure are striking.
Flow is easily the smoothest.
Pace is slow as the reader gathers the facts doled out through the process.
Grammatically snafu free,
Wow that is worth a big three!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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511
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-24-14
features your awe inspiring gift.
The reader is caught up in the emotional display.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
Pace is slow at first and then crescendo's with the shock and awe of receiving a house for your birthday.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed for you today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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512
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Your poem is discernible,
albeit a bit hidden in the form you choose to display it.
Rhyme scheme is present.
Emotionally the reader senses the urgency to learn from this piece.
Form and structure are consistent.
Flow is not so smooth.
Pace is slow, as the reader gathers the message you convey in the end.
Suggestion for improvement:
Find some natural line breaks and make it more of a stanza format.
As it stands it looks more like two paragraphs.

Write on!
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513
513
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Stirring poem/song/ballad.
Form and structure is striking.
Emotionally the reader is enrapt.
Rhyme scheme is efficient.
Flow is wowsa!
Pace is slow and rightly so.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thanks for writing on the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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514
Review of A new path  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Wonderful poem of healing and moving on.
Relationships are fragile things and often go awry.
The important thing is that you are moving forward,
and appear to have found someone to walk alongside you.

Form and structure are rock solid.
Rhyme scheme is intricate and natural.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical in nature.
It's like reading a ballad where the good news is healing that is coming out of it.
Pace is rapid and the reader is engaged in the story from stanza to stanza.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle is awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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515
Review of Author  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-24-14,
Features your authorship.
Form and structure are wondrous.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Emotionally, the reader is at rest after a moment of productivity.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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516
Review of Monster Wave  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-24-14
Features your swirl among other Oddquains.
Thank you for the criteria blurb at the bottom.
It is always good to know where one can get more information about the form.
The photo must have been amazing.
Flow is smooth and swirling with emotional tags.
Pace is slow and that's the way it should be.
You have so much in so few lines, the reader takes the time to absorb your grammatically snafu free lines.

Write on!
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517
Review of Smiling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
Poetry Newsletter features your poem among others.
12/24/14, Red Writing Hood shared the ins and outs of Oddquains.
Your swirl is amazing.
Form and structure are symmetrical.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled throughout.
Grammatically clean as a whistle, no suggestions for improvement are needed this day.

Write on!
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518
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a collection of words.
I collect Spider-Man, and playing cards.
I can relate to the art of collecting.
Glad you have found your niche in the written word.

Form is a standard list.
Structure is solid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow as the reader learns something new with each word.
Grammatically snafu free, on such a grand scale.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
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519
Review of Alone In The Dark  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple lines filled with a rising sense of despair.
That's imagery to the nth degree.
Form is simple too,
And the structure is blue.
Rhyming that rivals the finest poets,
Flowing with the greatest of ease.
Like you are floating on the emotional seas.
Pace is slow and creepy too.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle is out of line.
Your piece is just fine.
No suggestions for improvement are needed. Whoo hoo!

Write on!
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520
Review of Longing For You  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love is in this piece.
It's real imagery flowing herre.
Form is impeccable.
Rhyme scheme is speakable.
Flow is wowsa!
Pace is slow and sensory littered.
Memories of a love that did not last are apparent within.
Sorry for the loss of your loved one, and hold on, maybe you will be blessed with a second chance.

Write on!
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521
Review of Come To Me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Unrequited love,
Not your turtle dove.
Pain and loss are within.
The heart it odes mourn.

Form and structure are unique.
Rhyme scheme is top drawer.
Flow is silky and easy on the eyes.
The shape of your poem gives a sense of calm and symmetry..
Pace is rapid and interesting from stem to stern.
Grammatically snafu free, a testament of your detail orientation.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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522
Review of Battlefield  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
War is hell.
You depict it well.
Rhyme scheme is a wow,
Form and structure a pow.
Flow is smooth and even.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
Grammatically snafu free,
suggestions for improvement?
Nope!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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523
Review of Enough Rizal!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Rizal is memorialized in this piece?
Well written eulogy if so.
If not then the reader is foolded.
The emotional tags are that of greif and concern.
Prosaic format is suitable here.
Form and structure are solidly in place.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed to day.

Write on!
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524
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your contest is featured in the Spiritual Newsletter 12-17-14.
The rules are clear.
The prompt is awesome.
The form of your forum is adequate.
The flow is smooth and succinct.
The reader/entrant knows what to expect and the challenge is vital.
Write on and thank you for sponsoring this contest.
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525
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mother mouse:
Spiritual Newsletter 12-17-14,
picks your piece among others.
I use the newsletters to find reviewing material.
Glad Katie saw this and included it.

Form and structure are impeccable.
Emotionally striking. Congrats on your 2e place win.
Flow is smooth as silk. Nary a jot nor tittle have gone awry.
Pace is even and at a gentle lope, as the details and story congeals and wraps up.
Thank you for sharing!
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