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Review of On Forgiveness  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Shannon, the Editor of many Spiritual Newsletters,
Includes your piece in the pages of her 1-21-15 NL.
I often scan these NLs for reviewing fodder.

Emotionally this reader is hooked.
Your imagery is strong and the reader can but take the emotional ride with you.
I too have felt the specific leading of the Lord in one direction and then another, right at the time He wanted me to be there.
I too have experienced the healing of forgiveness. Your message will touch another, because you speak from a heart influenced by the Lord's presence.
Form and structure is efficient and it flows quite well.
Paced like a stroll through the emotional stratosphere, the reader marvels at the message and the grammatically pristine way you presented it in.

Write on!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The argument of God's existence has raged on for centuries.
Spiritual Newsletter 1-21-15, opens with your essay.
Your excellent form and structure are indicative of your knowledge of structure.
Flow is smooth and is indicative of your grasp of a well form sentence and beyond that to a well written essay.
Pace is slow; of necessity; for the reader is absorbing the elements of your presentation and awaiting the resulting revelation at the end.
Grammatically speaking, no visible discrepancies exist; therefore you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Overall impression: An impressive essay on the question of God's existence. Glad I saw past the size of the essay and read your featured item in the Newsletter.

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Review of Angry Elk Attack  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a suspenseful tale you do weave.
Bless you for your work with wildlife.
I read this and was at the edge of my seat.
The imagery you use puts the reader right in the path.
Relieved to find you made it through in the end.
Form and structure are well defined.
Flow is intense.
Pace is slow and awesomely grammatically snafu clean.
Overall feel: Wowsa!

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Red Toad  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-15-14,
Displays your light piece.
A new discovery, people are thrilled, happy and gleeful.
The reader cannot help but feel the same.
Form and structure are super.
Rhyme scheme is pristine.
Flow is a skip through the part.
Paced at a step-by-step routine to the end.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement for thee.

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Copenator pit! BA. MDiv
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455
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-15-14,
picked up on your piece.
it graces the pages quite well.
Thirteen lines are just fine.
You laced so awesomely emotional tags.
The reader feels the cold, sees the fog, smiles at the cape the pumpkin now has.
Form and structure are sound.
Flow is easy on the eyes.
Pace is rapid, chilling, and down right magnificent.

Write on!
Copenator pit! BA. MDiv
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Review of Cowboy Wise  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great country song.
It's not even that long.
The stanzas are brilliant,
The refrain is relevant.

Rhyming adds to the melody,
This is real, certainly not a parody.
A tribute you do pay to your dad,
And in such a classy way it is said.

Flow is sing song like.
Pace is jsut a short hike.
Grammatically snafu free,
Nothing to change don't you see?

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Review of The Seventh Son  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! Wow! Wow!
I'm speechless!
Not really, but wow!
That was suspenseful.

The emotional tags are present,
Rhyming is always a plus.
Form and structure are prevalent.
Flow is just thus.

Pace is super slow,
As the impending crescendo does flow.
Again I say "Wow!"

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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458
Review of Triskaidekaphobia  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well played at the end.
the piece in it's entirety was worth the wait.
Form and structure are adequate.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate.

Flow is soft and rough too.
Pace is a skip down to the zoo.
Grammatically crystal clear,
No suggestions for improvement found here.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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459
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Proud to be an American in the U.S.A.
That's the emotional flair.
Form and structure are adherent to the roundel.
Rhyming helps with the flow.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is fast, but hey the images last.
No grammatical matters to be concerned with,
results in no suggestions for improvement anew.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Winter Begins  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A song in a poem.
Your poetry is masterful.
Were you on a street corner,
The coffers would clink with hundreds of coins.

Form and structure are firm.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate.
Emotionally the reader feels a calm settling in.
Flowing softly,
Paced at a crawl.
Why? Because the reader wants to sense it all.
Grammatically one small hiccup was found in stanza 2, line 2 "shakes it head" might it be "its head?"

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are true to form with your Roundel.
Constructed with pinash and aplomb.
The reader feels the sadness seeping through.
The image inspiring this writer too.

Rhyming is as always articulate.
Creating a sense of urgency before it's too late.
Flowing easily at a pace that's not a race.
One can only say;

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Heart Song  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see the words darting in and out, getting my attention too.
I want to know what they have to say.
That; imagery that pops!
Form and structure are pristine.
Rhyming is a song of detail orientation.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically as clean as a whistle.
No suggestions for improvement needed today!
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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Hospital Visit  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The punch line was worth the roller coaster ride of what if's emitting from the boys mind.
The suspense, the angst, the relief all rolled into this piece.
That's imagery that engages the reader and keeps him/her on track to the end.
Form and structure are common.
Flow is a bit choppy.
Pace is slow as the reader gathers the gist of the matter.
Grammatically no visible snafu's are detected.
No suggestions for improvement are needed here.

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a good introduction to your future work.
I liked the feel of the piece overall.
The character is fleshed out, his gift is hinted at and then embellished.
The reader is in touch with the main character.
Form and structure are adequate = however one might suggest a line break between paragraphs, as at times there was some re-reading of previous lines because they are so squeezed together.
Flow was a bit choppy also due to the line spacing mentioned above.
Pace is just fine, and the absence of any further grammatical snafu's equals no suggestions for improvement.

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Review of A Day by the lake  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An excellent rhyme scheme you do weave.
The reader is entranced by the images you do paint.
Feelings of awe, alarm, fear, and abject terror are present.
The form is efficiently in place.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically speaking your piece is pristine.
That's worth another fifteen!

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Lives Echo  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing echoes of life found here.
Your prosaic form is a hit here.
There is a melodic tone that could be sung.
Form and structure are polished.
Flow is easy going and one might say silky smooth.
Pace is slow, and sensory filled, as the reader marvels at your word pictures.
No visible grammatical matters to speak of.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Do I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh there is concern here.
The reader is close to tears.
A dilemma is present,
Do you dare reach out more?

Form and structure are wow factors.
Your rhyming is natural and softens the blow.
Flow is super duper.
Pace is rapid and sensory filled.
No evidence of grammatical issues exist here.


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Review of Beautiful Eyes  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very romantic and yet has a sad timber to it.
It's as if those beautiful eyes have grown cold in death,
but their memory warms your heart still as you remember them fondly.

Form and structure are fair.
Prosaic with a rhythmical flair.
Flow is seamless.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically your piece is pristine,
and that's at times work maybe even an fifteen.
No changes or suggestions for improvement are found here.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Emptiness  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Suicide is never the answer.
There is always a way to get help.
Life that is lived without hope can seem useless,
But believe me, you are here for a reason in the long run.

Imagery stirred my cry against suicide.
Form and structure are consistent.
Rhyme scheme is pristine and lends to the value of the lines.
Flow is active and real.
Pace is fast and saddening as the result becomes visible.
Grammatically you are in excellent shape.
No other suggestions for improvement are needed today.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Life of A Bubble  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow the reader is enamored with the bubble.
Your imagery just sparkles, much like the soapy object of the poem.
Form and structure are firm.
Prosaic in nature it has a wonderful poetic timber.
Flowing like a gentle breeze buffeting a bubble,
Paced slowly as the bubble continues it's short journey.
Oh man the inquiring mind wants to know. Did you pop it?
Grammatically your piece is pristine.
Thanks for writing and don't change a jot nor tittle of this piece.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Cry for Freedom  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a poem that begs to be completed.
Inquiring minds want to know if it was "life or death."
Form and structure are pure.
Prosaic nature fits this piece well.
Flow is rhythmical.
Pace is slow, and fast, and scary too.
No grammatical snafu's were detected.
Therefore you suggestions for improvement today.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a mixed bag of blessings and curses indeed.
Your piece extols and deflates the scientific endeavor.
Rhyming in just the right places.
Flowing in a sing-song manner.
Paced slowly as the reader pauses to contemplate the things you present.
Grammatically, no visible concerns are met.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the article on Antifreeze and ti's effects on pets and children.
I liked the set up of this.
The flow was okay. Save for one bump I observed.
Your use of the :antifreeze can be cleaned up. . . " line is repeated in the second paragraph. Was this intentional? Or an oversight?
Pace is okay to the very end.
No visible grammatical snafu's pop out.
Thanks for hanging out in the WdC.

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Review of My Wife 2  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting. A realization dawns upon you.
The reader senses a multitude of emotional tags that keeps hem/her engaged.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is choppy.
Pace is fast and slow, and fast again.
Grammatical snafu's are not present hrre.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

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Review of Insight  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The survival of the fittest is in here.
The reader feels the battle going on.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is bouncy.
Pace is slow and senses engaging.
Grammatically, your piece is just fine.
No improvements are needed here today.

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