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Review of Jeffrey's Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-17-14.
speaks of the gift. Your piece fits the subject famously.
I often peruse the newsletters for reviewing material.
So glad I found this one.
Emotionally the reader feels, sadness; happiness; relief; and love.
Form and structure are stunning.
Flow is even and smooth.
Pace is slow and endearing to the readers heart strings.
Grammatically snafu free! Yippee!!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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527
527
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-17-14,
Is all about giving and thanks for giving this endearing storeom.
Awesome and inspiring to be frank.
The emotional heart strings are tugged here.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slow, as the reader inhales the wonder of your tale.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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528
Review of Snow Angel  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The Spiritual Newsletter 12-17-14 has your gift of shelter there.
The story you allude to at the bottom is an invalid item. Please check on that because I'd be interested in reading that one too.
I too have a heart for the homeless.
The tears were flowing as I read this, and even now they do.
That's imagery that captures the reader as it should be so.
Thank you for writing about this story.
Form and structure are solid.
Flow is smooth, albeit teary eyed readers slowed.
That's a good thing Scottie.
Pace is slow as the reader sees the progression of one illustration years ago, has upon the heart of Joe.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
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529
529
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm reminded of the western character in "My Name Is Nobody."
That imagery that evokes the readers memories and emotions.
Form and structure are distinct.
Prosaic in nature, it has a sing song nature to it.
Flow is somewhat choppy.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically snafu free, a suggestion for improvement follows.

Because there are no stanza breaks,
the reader has little time to consider the impact a natural train of thought produces.
Your thoughts appear to be complete every 4th line.
If you break at the completion of your thoughts, and it's okay if it's more than 4 lines, the reader will have time to stop and consider any particular lines that may resonate with him/her.

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530
530
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-3-14
lays out your successful piece.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing fodder.

First Impression: You start off fast and build from there.
Second impression: Ah I see, you are laying out what is not success and then defining it in your closing lines.
Emotional tag: Passion - you are passionate about the topic and it shines through to this reader. Well done!

Form and structure are solid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is fast, as the staccato nature of your piece picks up speed.
Grammatically snafu free, thanks for hanging with the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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531
Review of Autumn haiku  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
First impression: A deserted scene you do paint.
Then I realize it's the imagery you are using. KUDOS!!!!!
Form and structure adheres to the haiku tradition.
Flow is a bit uneasy. Why? Not sure but that is how it feels.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically speaking you are top of the line.


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532
Review of The Autumn Gala  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cover photo is strikingly beautiful.
Header and footer are eye catching.
Dominant sensory emotion = awe.
Nature at it's finest displayed in a masterful manner.
Rhyme scheme adds rhythm.
Form is yippee!
Flow is zippy.
Pace is slippery.
Grammatically speaking: wow!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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533
533
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Powerful imagery.
The reader is glued to the scene.
In fact this reader experiences that every day he walks the dog.
Form and structure are Haiku like.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid and sensory filled.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
no suggestions for improvement are needed today.


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534
Review of Autumn Haiku  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the cover photo.
I like the fact that I learned a new word today.
Kore was new to me and thanks for increasing my knowledge.

Form and structure are spectacular.
Flow is smoothly so.
Pace is fast and sensory filled.
The reader can feel the cood that creates the scene you display..
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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535
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Checking a contest forum for reviewing opportunities.
Your "Shaken Not Stirred" is found among the fare.
A chuckle was drawn from this reader.
That's imagery that I can identify with.
Form is traditional fare.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid, as the leaves hang on for dear life *Bigsmile*
Grammatically squeaky clean, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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536
Review of Nature's Grace  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a shape to this poem.
Imagery seeps from it's pores.
The reader is captivated by your words.

Form and structure are significant.
Rhyme scheme is incredible.
Flow is wonderfully slow.
Grammatically, your piece has no problems at akk,
Overall Impression: The exclamation "WOW" comes to mind.

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537
Review of Alone - Published  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Authors Newsletter 11-19-14,
is a perfect place to host your piece.
I often use the newsletters to garner review material.

Emotionally my heart was broken.
I know the devastation that alcohol leaves on a family.
Not just the alcoholic, but all those who depend upon him/her.
There is also joy and happiness here as the fun times were remembered.
Form and structure are solidified in the tale.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is easy going and slow.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thank you for writing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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538
Review of Old Glory  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Tears flowing.
Pain showing.
The remembrance so real,
The loss as alive as a drill.
Imagery that colors this piece so strong.
Authors Newsletter 11-19-14,
displays your piece in their pages.

Form and structure are inspiring.
Flow is even and smooth.
Pace is ever so slow, then picks up as the scene shifts.
Grammatically snafu free,
thank you for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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539
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Authors Newsletter 11-19-14,
reveals your marvelous convention.
Oh the rhyming is sublime.
The lines are songs indeed.
The emotional pings, many and varied.
Imagery seeps from nook to cranny.
Form and structure are distinct.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Flow is amazingly smooth.
So much to cover, you do it wo well.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically clean and that's a wow!
Thank yu for writing and sharing tn the WdC!

You bring to life the Bards anew.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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540
540
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your group is featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-19-14.
There is a lot for the newbie to see about Steampunk.
Your links are informative, encouraging, and well organized.
The visitor to the site gets the sense of welcome and a genuine spirit to help.
Grammatically pristine is quite the feat!
No suggestions for improvement are needed.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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541
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 11-19-14,
revels in your seasonal haiku.
Form is perfected.
Flow is smooth.
Imagery makes the reader shiver.
Pace is slow and yet exhilarating.
Grammatically pristine,
thanks for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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542
542
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 11-19-14
Reveals your diamond in the rough.

A well written form poem.
The form is adhered to greatly.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Emotionally the poem takes on new shape.
The relationship contrasts are evident here.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thank for being you and writing from the heart.

Write on!
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543
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 11-19-14
Displays your tribute to the group.
You had a good time there, it's plain to see.
Emotionally you illustrate your journey so well.
Form and structure are alphabetical to a "t".
Flow is smooth and quite the treat.
Pace is rapid and so data filled.
Grammatically snafu free,
Wow that's a big three-point-O.

Write on!
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544
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My first encounter with "The Jester."
Form and structure are rocking solidly.
Emotionally the reader feels trepidation, flattery, concern, and care.
Rhyme Scheme is consistent and melodic.
Flow is evenly paced.
Pace is slow as the reader sees the story develop.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are for you.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's crew.
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545
Review of Asylum  
In affiliation with Judges Pool  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A break neck terror filled story you do tell.
The creatures description appears to be dragons,
They appear to be quite efficient in their actions.
Form and structure are every present.
Flow is choppy as the terrain the prisoner travels.
Pace is rapid, and breathtakingly so.
Grammatically snafu free, there are no suggestions for improvement today.
Word count does appear to be missing, as is one of the rules, but still your piece stands as one worthy of reading.
Thank you for entering our contest, and best of wishes in the outcome.
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546
In affiliation with Judges Pool  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for entering our contest.
What an amazing story you have here.
The adventure, suspense, anger, relief all boil up to the surface.
That's imagery that wows the reader.
Form and structure are firm.
Flow is even and smooth, only slightly bumpy at intervals by small grammatical snafu's.
Pace is slow as so much is provided for the reader to digest.
In the end there is a sense o closure and hope of future tales to come.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M DIv
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547
547
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-29-2014,
Found your Christmas Tree enchanting.
I often uses the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Form is spot on.
Structure is even more clever.
Prosaic and colorful to boot,
Your piece drips happiness and glee.
Imagery that still shines through the brilliant Christmas Tree you display.
You bring out the Christmas Spirit with this piece,
in such a grammatically snafu way.
Flowing from level to level,
Paced at a speed decently maintained.
Grammatically pristine and nary a suggestion for improvement can be made!

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548
548
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a marvel.
Poetry newsletter 10-29-2014,
selected many treasures for their pages.
Your's stands out to this reader so far.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Form and structure are there.
The readers emotional heart strings are plucked by a genius.
Imagery that wins awards and places in the readers hearts.
Rhyme scheme is right on!
Flow is sing song in nature.
Pace is slow and snafu free,
Wow thanks for writing in the WdC!

Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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549
549
Review of Winter Apples  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter also featured this piece on 10-29-14.
Awesome to see your style and sgis.
Sensory wise the reader is filled with wonder.
The form and structure are brilliant.
The prosaic nature is appropriate.
Flow is eye catching.
Pace is rapid.
Grammatically pristine your score jumps up to 99, if only that were possible.
Write on!

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550
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Maven:
Poetry Newsletter 10-29-2014 find your piece note worthy.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.
I pray for the peace of Israel every day.

Form and structure are rock solid.
Rhyme scheme is glorious, giving glory to Him.
Emotionally the senses of gratitude and peace are found here.
Imagery that says so much from the heart to the Great I Am.
Flow is smooth and melodic.
Pace is slow and awe inspiring.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thank you for being in the WdC!

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Founder of Copenator's Crew
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