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Review of A Girl  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Happy Account Anniversary!
Reading your piece in celebration of your account birthday.

Overall impression: There is love for the subject of this poem.
That's the emotional theme that resonates in each stanza.
Rhyme scheme creates a melody that could easily sung.
Form and structure are symmetrical and easy on the eye.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu clean.
Pace is slow, as the reader takes in the sensory elements found here.
Write on!

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427
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing discernment into the psyche of depression.
The reader sees the logic in the progression of your piece.
One feels that the author has seen the bane that is depression.

Form is consistent from stanza to stanza.
Flow is smooth with a hint of rhythmical movement.
Pace is medium.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.

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Review of Acceptance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Giving in to the conditions around us.
Accepting the outcome in the end.
Emotionally the reader feels a sense of giving up, rather than acceptance.

Your structure is commonly found.
Flow is smooth and eloquent.
Pace is painstakingly slow.
Grammatically you are just right.

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429
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Emotional dominance: depression that freezes the body and mind.
Form and structure: Lends to an easy reading experience.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is fast, which crescendos in the end.
Grammatically clean as a whistle.
No suggestions for improvement are found in this review.

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430
Review of A Fake Smile  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great moral to the story.
The reader gets the message loud and clear.
That's imagery with impact.
Structure is refined.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically speaking; nary a jot nor tittle are out of place.

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Review of Patience  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Patience is a virtue.
Your piece is quite true.
Free verse is a plus.
Your reader hears the fuss and muss.

Form and structure are consistent.
Flow is smooth save for one bump in the road in the final stanza.
Pace is slow and this reader wants to know: should "disciple" be disciplined?

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432
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 2-4-15.
features your piece in their pages.
I often use the NLs for reviewing material.

An opening scene representing birth,
continues through multiple stanzas.
A life learned and lived in the span of a short poem.

Form and structure are well laid out.
Emotionally the reader is intrigued with the progression.
Rhyming scheme is consistent.
Flow is rhythmical and emotionally charged.
Pace is slow, with much to take in.
Grammatically your piece is exquisite.

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433
Review of Cadence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent tribute to the musical legends.
their time here was cut short, their influence transcends.
Form and structure are key.
Rhyme scheme is a scream.
Flow is smooth and peachy.
Pace is as soft as the nuances of emotion within this piece.
Write on!
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434
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 01-28-2015,
closes their pages with your piece.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
What an awesome piece you have here.

Your dream is vivid and the reader can see from your p.o.v.
The emotion is real and leads the reader through it all.
Form and structure are solidified.
Flow is smooth and nicely grammatically snafu free.
Pace is fast and intense.
Overall: Wow what a marvelous tale and the assurance you receive from the Lord is divine.
He is with us in the good, the bad, and the in-between.

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435
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-28-15,
contains your piece among others.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
What a gem that was chosen by an editor.

A marvelous spiritual experience is taking place.
The reader feels the emotion streaking their face.
Form and structure is immaculate.
Rhyme scheme is like a dance.

Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and awe inspiring.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.
Suggestions for improvement remain silent in this review today.

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436
Review of Two souls  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-28-15,
picked your piece among others.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

An awe inspiring poem you have here.
There is so much wonder in there.
Emotionally the reader is glued to the piece.
A poem that ends in a sense of peace.

Form and structure is a marvel.
Rhyming is wowsa and in it the reader does revel.
Flow is smooth and wonderfully snafu free.
Pace is fast but nary a bit of the piece is lost in the fray.

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437
Review of God's Will  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the Power Reviewers here on the WdC.
This is a review of your piece that is a question I can answer in the affirmative.
That's imagery that places the reader in the seat. He/she has to ponder the answers to your questions.
Form and structure is consistent with the Quinzaine.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and thought provoking.
Grammatically, your piece is pristine.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

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438
Review of Traces of Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcoming you to the WdC Poswer Reviewers.
Here is a review for your excellent tale.

Form and structure are firmly in place.
Imagery: the suspense, the danger, the oddity.
Good emotional tags to gather the readers attention.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow with the reader getting more and more into the meat of the matter.
Grammatically there are no visible infractions to notate.
Overall Impression: A well polished and complete story in a small readable package that earns 5.0 from,

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439
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-14-15,
displays your piece in their pages.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

A gripping poem of one who identifies with one who is in the clutches of an abuser.
At least that's the feeling conveyed here.
Form and structure are elegant.
Flow is even and laden with sad scenarios.
Pace is slow, just as it should be.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.


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Review of The Tree House  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-14-15,
displays your piece in their pages.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

An inquisitive piece you do create.
The reader is let wondering how he/she feels about it all.
Prosaic and yet poetic in nature.
Form and structure are basically fitted.
Flow is even, smooth, and grammatically well polished.
Pace is fast, and then the end comes. "What kind it it?"
Ah the 20 thousand dollar question left to ponder.


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Review of Ode to the Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-14-15,
displays your piece in their pages.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Ah another moon aficionado. Not a bad ode to the celestial night light.
Your piece is full of emotion.
The reader is attracted to the ode thusly.
Prosaic in nature it has a melodic tone to it.
A ballad to the moon! Yeah!
Form and structure are efficient.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid.
Grammatically speaking, no snafus of note are observed.

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442
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-14-15,
displays your piece in their pages.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

What a gripping tale you weave. Jeff Stephens is given a series of blockbuster stories.
His success is cemented and then he realized that a crossroads was reached.
That's imagery that kept this reader glued to the story.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Flow is smooth and remarkably on contained one "repeated" misspelling.
"realised" should be realized.:/b}
This takes nothing away from your story at all and is only pointed out because of the distraction it became.
Pace is slow and full of emotions the reader identifies with along the way.
No other suggestions for improvement can be made here.

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443
Review of Dumb Luck  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-28-15,
displays your piece in their pages.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

The reader is into the piece based on the emotional tags you insert along the way.
Your description of the abyss, the sole survivor, and his mounting frustration are all good hooks to keep the readers attention.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow, the fast, then slow again as he realizes he is holding a hand. Wow! Great ending.
Is there more in the offering? It would be nice to see in the future.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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444
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies NL 1-28-15,
displays your piece in the lines.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Form and structure is consistent.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
The reader feels a sadness that is deeply rooted.
That's imagery that keeps the readers attention to the end.

Pace is slow and inexorably leads to the climax of apparent despair.
Grammatically snafu free, your work is worthy to be read and reviewed.
Write on!
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445
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-28-15,
features your piece among others.
I often use the Newsletters to garner reviewing potential.

Your short story has the feel of a journal entry by the death angel/grim reaper.
In his matter of fact way he relates the tales of a few people on the train.
The reader gets caught up in the story that is being laid out; because the emotion of the players are clear.
There is anger, fear, revenge, and despair.
Form and structure are adequate for the piece.
Flow is somewhat choppy but nothing is taken away from the overall meaning of the piece.
Pace is slow and inexorably leads the reader toward the ending "bio's" fate.
Overall impression: a well developed piece that stands on it's own with the added feature of being an addition to a larger work of the exploits of the grim reaper.

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Review of Malevolence  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry NL 1-21-15
picked your piece among others.
Form and structure meet the criteria.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Emotionally the piece feels neutral, but still keeps the readers attention.
Grammatically clean, no suggestions for improvement needed today.

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Review of Decaying Beauty  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 1-21-15, features your piece.
redwriting hood saw enough in it to share there.
Form and structure are consistent with the form.
Rhyming is immaculate.
Flow is a smooth twisting turn down the lane.
Pace is boom and ends well.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

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448
Review of Willowsong  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter displays your piece on 01-21-15.
It' is a mesmerizing piece.
The emotional dominance is epic.
The rhyme is consistent and musical in nature.
Flow is amazing.
Pace is at a fair clip.
Grammatically snafu free.
No suggestions for improvement needed for thee.

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Review of On Angel's Wings  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-21-15,
displays your beautiful piece.

God bless you for being a nurse.
Your work comes with a price.
Your story is a part of real life and the reader feels the emotion you fill this memorial with.
The reader feels sadness indeed, and in the end he/she feels the sense of release as the child no longer suffers.
Form and structure are well suited.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and emotionally filled with just the right amounts to keep the reader glued to his/her seat.
Grammatically speaking you are free of visible infractions.

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450
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I see within this piece a touch of truth.
Shannon; a wonderful Newsletter Editor;
Includes your miraculous encounter in her pages.
I often use the newsletters for reviewing opportunities.

I was the one who was blessed by finding this.
The emotional resonances are many and tangibly felt.
Form and structure are firmly in place.
Flow is smooth and only twice is presented with a hiccup in the progression.
1; One lines appears to be missing a word. Located toward the bottom of the piece.

Pace is slow and awe inspiring. The reader cannot help but feel the presence of angels in this piece.
Write on!

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